初中英语写作公开课(九年级).ppt

ALessonofWriting,Howtowriteacomposition.,Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.Keypoints:1.Topic（主题）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMingshometown4.tense(时态):pasttense&presenttense一般过去时&一般现在时,First,considerthetaskcarefully.,Livingcondition,Cellphones,jobs,transportation,changes,house,cars,Second,brainstorm,(头脑风暴),education,shops,food,roads,computers,clothes,building,workingtools农耕工具,reason,government,efforts,liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuilding,plantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines,studyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschool,Livingcondition,Workingtools,education,Livingcondition,Workingtools,education,changes,Brainstormforthebody,(正文),a.Changesinlivingconditions.b.Changesinworkingtools.C.Changesineducation.,OutlineTitle题目:ChangesinLiMingsHometownHeading开头：GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinBody正文:a.Changesinlivingconditionsb.ChangesinworkingtoolsC.ChangesineducationConclusion结尾:Thankstothegovernmentsefforts(努力),LiMingshometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.,Next,drawupanoutline.,提纲,Then,writethecomposition.,Finally,checkoverthecomposition.,ChangesinLiMingsHometownGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMingshometownsincethereformandopening-up.Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernmentsefforts,LiMingshometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.,Onepossibleversion:,heading开头,body正文,conclusion结尾,AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.,以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬,Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense时态:,First,consideritcarefully.,greatchanges,I/myself,myhometown,life,roads,houses,pasttense&presenttense,Livingcondition,transportation,changes,house,Brainstorming,(头脑风暴),education,roads,building,Example:Outline提纲Title题目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changesinb.Changesinc.ChangesinConclusion结尾:,Next,drawupanoutline.,LifeHouseRoads,houselifeeducationtransportation,now,Usedtobe,Once曾经,past,Manyyearsago,is/are,Inthepast,Atpresent,before,nowadays,today,Was/were,Makesentences.,eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.,2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.,Then:,Brainstormforthetense,(时态),Livingcondition,Cellphones,transportation,wide,roads,clean,cars,Brainstormforthebody,(正文),dirty,better,narrow,poor,clothes,Convinent方便的,improve,eg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.,2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.,3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.,school,house,Brainstormforthebody,(正文),Then,writethecomposition.,以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬,TheChangesinMyHometown,IamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldntgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeoplesneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!,ChangesinMyHometown,Myhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideuswitho