高中英语短文改错课件.ppt

,HowtodoProof-reading,短文改错,考查目标,1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2）综合运用英语知识的能力3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力,答题要求,下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。,1.单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改.3.词序不改.4.标点符号不改.,Dontforget!,四不改原则,解题步骤,1.通读全文，掌握大意,2.整句理解，上下兼顾,3.复读全文，检查验证,动词形，,名词数,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,介词短语须关注习惯用法要记住,冠词连词常光顾,ALimerick,请先念一遍“咒语”吧,Icangotohomenow.2.IlikehistoryofChina.3.IamfondatEnglish.,the,Wrongword,Missingword,of,Unnecessaryword,高考短文改错的考察方式,从错误比例上看，,一般以三种题型出现:增加,删除或修改。,设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。,一、动词形,1.动词的时态和语态错误.,高考链接1：However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.(2011全国）,flew,Growingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon.（2008全国）,needed,动词的时态和语态错误,.,高考链接：WhatIlikebestwerethefreehighspeedInternetconnectionintheroom.(2012陕西）,was,IknowthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofaraway.（2012浙江）,would,2.主谓不一致的错误.,高考链接:,Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.(2009全国卷2),was,3.非谓语动词错误,高考链接:,IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）,buying,Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutofabuilding.(2011陕西卷),disappointed,5.Heusedtogettingupearlytotakephysicalexercise.,were,likes,exciting,get,Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.,2.Whentheycamehere,Iwillshowthem.,3.TheyeagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions.,4.Ifoundthegameexcitedandmydadexplainedtherules.,practice,come,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,高考链接2：Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.（2011新课标全国卷）,luggage,InearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportswassteady,aroundthreeperweeks.(2011辽宁卷）,week,1.Dontlosehearts,youllbesuccessfulintime.2.Ineedsomemoreinformations.3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.,heart,information,kinds,practice,绝不可数名词,progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice,三、还要注意形和副,形容词和副词的误用,高考链接3：,Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.（2011浙江卷）,slowly,2比较级和最高级的混用或误用.,Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthanexpected.(2009陕西）,faster,Heisbeststudentinourclass.,the,还要注意形和副,高考链接：,Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanother（2012浙江卷）,Unfortunately,Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabig.(2012陕西）,comfortable,1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.3.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.,angrily,clear,4.SoIgratefulacceptedtheoffer.,gratefully,practice,四、代词格，细领悟,3.it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏(make,find,think),高考链接4：WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme(2011重庆卷）,mine,ItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegintounderstand(2010辽宁卷）,Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.,our,it,1.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词，不定代词,2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.,2.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.4.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.,myself,everything,it,Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.,their,practice,五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住,1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。,高考链接：TherewasoneonparticularIdreallywanted.(2011浙江卷),2.介词的多用，漏用和误用,3.时间状语前有指示代词this,that或one,next,last等修饰时不用介词.,in,Hehadonlyasmallcoldroomtolive.,in,Hepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthatafternoon.,五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住,高考链接：Twoyearsbefore,ItravelledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.(2012浙江卷),with,IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.,practice,Imsuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.,2.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehill.,3.Whenayoungmanstartstoearnhisownliving,hecannolongerexpectotherstopayhisfood.,4.Thegentlemaninsistedatmyreceivingthemoney.,at,for,on,连词but，and，or,so和although的逻辑性用法错误,高考链接：,六、冠词连词常光顾,Hewasrighthereinthefrontofme.(2011陕西卷）,Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor.,.冠词a,an和the的用法错误,and,Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.Hewillstaythereoneandtwodays.,3.EverykindoftheChinesefoodisworthtrying.,4.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrella.,and,or,an,Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingorhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.Thesmallerpieceisthatyouwant,right?,七、从句连接词错误,what,实战演练,AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._,_,on,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,room.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6._reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7._afireburninginthefireplace,buttheChistmas8._treelightswasshinningbrightly.Jimandhis9._parentssinginganddancinghappily.10._,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词须关注,Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromthelow-incomefamily.SoIhavetosupportmyfamily.Myfirstonejobwastocleanthetablesinasmallrestaurant.Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidoflosingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodomyhomework.ButIcametounderstandthatwasnoteasytoearnmoney,andtha