非谓语的写作方法.ppt

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用,OurSpringOuting,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclasshadameetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Havingabarbecueisourchoice.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havinghadabigdinner,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.,1.Lookingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.3.Whichteamisgoodatcooking?Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.,Correction,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致,Lookingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.,Lookedfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语,2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.,Inmyopinion,climbingmountainisanenjoyablething.,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,3、主动、被动含义混淆,Ateamcallingitselfthesuppercook.,3.Whichteamisgoodatcooking?Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.,Ateamcalledthesuppercook.,1.Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.2.Agirlclimbedsohardthatshelosthertemper.Shecomplainedaboutthelongwalk.3.Themonitorhassetagoodexampleforus.Therefore,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.,Connection,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,+,目的状语,Wangqiclimbedsohardthatshelosthertemper.Shecomplainedaboutthelongwalk.,Wangqigotsoangrythatshelosthertemper,complainingaboutthelongwalk.,伴随状语,+,Themonitorhassetagoodexampleforus.Therefore,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.,Havingsetagoodexampleforus,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.,原因状语,+,高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),高考临近。保持良好的心态很重要。它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。,Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Step3：合并句子,WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence1:,Step3：合并句子,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence2:,Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.,（2011高考模拟）要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性,Havingatry,Havingatry,Itisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.,Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwi