江苏省邳州市第二中学高一英语课件：高考英语书面表达课件(牛津译林版)

高考英语书面表达指导课件,1Generalstructure,3Advancedexpressions,2Linkingwords,Elementsofapassage,一、文章总体模板,1.文章开头的总体交待,起（引出主题）,A.Recently,wehadadiscussionaboutB.wecarriedoutasurveyofC.Whenitcomestothetopicwhether,2.呈现不同观点的句式,转承（陈述观点）,A.SomeofthemareinfavoroftheideathatHowever,othersholdacompletelyoppositeopinion.B.Somepeoplefirmlybelievethat.Othersarguethat,呈现论据时常用的连接词inthefirstplace,_(原因一).Furthermore,inthesecondplace,_(原因二).Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_(观点一).Somepeopleholdtheideathat_(观点二).Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_(原因一).Ontheotherhand,_(原因二).Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat_(观点二).,3.结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语,结（总结观点）,AsfarasImconcerned,/Frommypointofview,/Tosumup,方法一:使用多种句子结构,Ifsheiscomparedwithotherteachers,wefindshepaysmoreattentiontoherwayofteaching.(状语),Comparedwithotherteachers,shepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.,2Youshouldkeepsilentatthemeetingunlessyouareinvitedtospeak.(连词+分词),Unlessinvited,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.,3Hedidntrealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.(倒装/强调),Notuntilhereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness,Itwasnotuntilhereturnedhomethatherealizedhisfoolishness.,二、高分作文技巧,4Wecanachieveasatisfyinggradebychangingthewaywestudy.(only倒装).5Howshouldweprotecteyesight?Itstillremainsaquestionamongus.(主语从句)6Weshouldemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesight.(canttoomuch),Onlybychangingthewaywestudycanweachieveasatisfyinggrade.,Howtoprotectoureyesightstillremainsaquestionamongus.,Wecantemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesighttoomuch.,方法二:善用高级词汇,Whichisbetter?,1周末我们会有很多作业要做.,AWehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.BWehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.,2在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.,AOfallmyteachers,IstillrememberMrMoore.BOfallmyteachers,MrMooregavemethedeepestimpression.,3高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。A.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingverytired.B.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingveryexhausted.,4.他没听我课上讲的东西。AHeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidintheclass.BHedidntlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.,Topic:HowtoLengthenYourComposition,Whenitcomestotheissueof,themajorityofpeopleseemtogetaccustomedtotheideathatHowever,attitudestowardsvaryfrompersontoperson.somepeoplefirmlybelievethat,therearesomefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows,inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,.Ontopofthat,Asamatteroffact,itisnotoftenthecase.Othershaveapreferenceof,thereareseveralremarkablereasons.Foronething,foranotherOnmypart,.,1.利用模板,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,2、附加成分作解释说明,例一：这样更方便照顾父母。,拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。,原因,astheyaregettingolderandolder.,Owingto/because,例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点。,拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。,后果,whichmadeaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed.,makingaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed.,Itwillbemuchmoreconvenienttolookafteryourparents,Thereweretoomanyadvertisementsthattheydelayedthetimeofshowingthefilm,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,2、附加成分作解释说明,条件,目的,例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，存在安全隐患(potentialhazard）。,拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。,Incaseofdanger,itisdifficultfortheaudiencetoescape.,例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查,Wedidasurveyabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday,拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式,Inordertolearnabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday,wedidasurveywiththehelpofmyclassmates.,Theexitisnotclear,sotherewillbepotentialhazard.,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,2、附加成分作解释说明,(1)表达不同原因的概括语Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Thereasonsareasfollows.ThereasonforisthatThereasonwhyisthat(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：ItgoeswithoutsayingthatItsneedlesstosaythatNeedlesstosay,Itsobviousthat,3.加谚语(Proverb),锻炼对学生有好处,Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.,Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.,3.添加谚语,加谚语(Proverb),集中注意力于学习,Weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies.,Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies.,怎么添加谚语？,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,常用谚语(Proverb),Striketheironwhileitishot.趁热打铁。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.三思而后行。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。DoastheRomansdo.入乡随俗。Doitnow.机不可失，时不再来。Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.覆水难收。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一个苹果，医生远离我。AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球,Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.,Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.,4.举例说明,人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）,Manypopulatedareassufferfrommanynaturaldisasterssuchasflood,hurricanes,droughtsorotherdisasters.,珍惜每一滴水,Therefore,weshouldnolongerbeindifferentaboutthis.Toprotectourvaluablewaterresources,weshouldcallonpeopletocherisheverydropofwater.Otherwise,maybethelastdropsofwaterwillbeourtears.,Asmiddleschoolstudents,wealsohaveaparttoplay.Doremember:wearenotsavingwater,wearesavingourownlife.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanmakeadifference.,5.结尾提出倡议或号召,Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.HereIdliketoremindmyfriendtotaketheleadinprotectingtheenvironment.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanchangethepresentsituation.,参加俱乐部或活动,Donthesitate.Itwillbeg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