短文改错公开课课件.ppt

1,welcome,德才高级中学王刚,2,短文改错,Howtodo,Proof-reading,3,Task1:,Task2:,Task3:,Ourtasks:,theexerciseandsecrete,theskillsofdoingproof-reading,theinformationanddemandinoutline,4,高考短文改错专题,一.对短文改错的要求高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发现,纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力,以及考察考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力.,5,二.近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计,6,三.近三年高考短文改错考点分布表,考查点,试卷,7,1、Wearegoingtohaveameetingonnextweek.,4、Thebossmadeworkerstowork10hoursaday.,Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.,3、HeisfondoflikeEnglish.,2、Heismoretallerthanme.,5、Hemarriedwithabeautifulgirl.,8,总结,1、时间状语前是否多了介词。,2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。,3、固定搭配中是否多了词。,4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。,5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。,一、多词,9,Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.,1.Imetstudentyesterday.,2.Heislookingamissingbook.,3.Hewantshavearest.,a,for,4.Hepraisedbytheteacherseveraltimes.,to,was,5.Imlookingforwardyourletter.,to,10,总结,1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。,2.不及物动词是否缺介词。,3.不定式是否漏了to.,4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be.,5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。,二、缺词,11,1.Itistimeofmetowalkmydog.,for,Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.,3.Passedthebookstore,hestoppedtobuyabook.,4.HeaswellashissisterareaLeaguemember.,read,Passing,is,5.Mypronunciationwasterribly.,6.Idontknowthattheydontliketotalkwithme.,7.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.,their,2.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.,8.Sheissmilingatmebutnoddingatme.,terrible,why,and,12,总结,1.介词是否误用。,2.动词的时态、语态是否误用。,3.非谓语动词是否误用。,4.主谓是否一致。,5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。,三、错词,6.从句中关联词是否误用。,7.代词是否误用。,8.连词是否误用。,13,做题要求,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。,14,Passage1：2009年浙江卷,OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldntbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.,15,OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldntbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.,Passage1：,friends,beside,an,was,16,Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.,but,Passage1：,gratefully,someonesomebody,to,expecting,17,短文改错口诀,动词形，名词数，,注意是形和副,非谓动词细辨别，,习惯用法要记住。,句子成分多分析，,逻辑错误需关注。,删加各次心有数，,改完一定要读读。,18,Passage22009海南卷,Asiswellknow,whenseniorstudentsgraduatefromschool,mostoftheirtextbooksarethrowingaway,whicharestillingoodcondition.Whatawasteofit!Iquiteagreetothesuggestionweshouldrecyclethesetextbooks.Foronething,recyclingtextbookscansavealotofnaturematerials,whichareusedtomakingtextbooks.Foranother,seniorstudentsmayhaveplentyofusefulnotesinthepages.Theyareverymuchhelpfultothosetextbooksusers.whatsmost,thecostofthebookswillunloadsomeburdenofthefamiliesofthestudents.ActuallyinAustraliaandanyothercountries,recyclingtextbooksarepopularanditgivesusagoodexample.,19,Passage2,Asiswellknow,whenseniorstudentsgraduatefromschool,mostoftheirtextbooksarethrowingaway,whicharestillingoodcondition.Whatawasteofit!Iquiteagreetothesuggestionweshouldrecyclethesetextbooks.Foronething,recyclingtextbookscansavealotofnaturematerials,whichareusedtomakingtextbooks.,known,thrown,that,natural,make,20,Passage2,Foranother,seniorstudentsmayhaveplentyofusefulnotesinthepages.Theyareverymuchhelpfultothosetextbooksusers.Whatsmost,thecostofthebookswillunloadsomeburdenofthefamiliesofthestudents.ActuallyinAustraliaandanyothercountries,recyclingtextbooksarepopularanditgivesusagoodexample.,more,is,on,some,21,短文改错应注意的问题,.四不改。即：标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改)。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。.规范做题方法。要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。,Dontforget!,22,Practicemakesperfect.谚熟能生巧,Inasmalltownwheretherelivedtwobrotherswhomwereverylazy.Oneday,beforethemotherwentouttoaneveningparty,sheaskedabouthertwosonsgivethehouseagoodcleaning.Butbeforethemotherlefttheroom,theelderbrothersaidtohisyoungerbrother,“Tom,whenmothercameback,youwillsayIhavebeenillandIcangetoutofbed.”theyoungerbrothersagreed.“OK,andwhenmotherturnsbackyouwillsayIhavegonetocallforadoctorforme.”,23,Inasmalltownwheretherelivedtwobrotherswhomwereverylazy.Oneday,beforethemotherwentouttoaneveningparty,sheaskedabouthertwosonsgivethehouseagoodcleaning.Butbeforethemotherlefttheroom,theelderbrothersaidtohisyoungerbrother,“Tom,whenmothercamebac