unit4-Wildlife_protection_(writing)_写作-保护动物

写作专题突破,【写作要求】假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊的头上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你的建议；请求该报帮着呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。要求：词数120左右。,【审题谋篇】第一自然段为总写：写明写信目的，你的感受(应用一般现在时态)。第二段：反映你的所见所闻，应用一般过去时态。第三段：你的建议，应用一般现在时和将来时态。最后一段：请求该报帮助。本文应用第一人称；可以用first，second，but，even等词连接或过渡。,【写作要点】1.我写信是要告诉你上星期天我在动物园的经历。(1)_youaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.(2)HereIwritetotellyouabout_inthezoolastSunday.答案：(1)Imwritingtotell(2)whatIsaw,2有很多动物被养在动物园内，它们好像没有得到很好的对待。(1)Thereweremanyanimals_inthezooand_theywerenotbeingtreatedwell.(2)Manyanimals_andthey_treatedwell.(3)_manyanimals_werenotbeingtreatedwell.,答案：(1)kept；itseemedthat(2)werekeptinthezoo；seemednottobe(3)Itseemedthat；keptinthezoo3首先要教育人们：动物是我们的朋友。动物对人们生活的重要性。(1)Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowthat_and_.,(2)_，weshouldtellpeople_animalsandthattheyareourfriends.(3)_，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttopeopleslife.答案：(1)animalsareourfriends；importanttopeopleslife(2)Firstly；theimportanceof(3)Firstofal,4任何虐待动物的人都要被罚款。(1)_badlyshouldbefined.(2)_badlyshouldbefined.(3)_badlyshouldbefined.答案：(1)Anyonewhotreatsanimals(2)Whoevertreatsanimals(3)Thosewhotreatanimals,5我建议把动物放回到自然界去。(1)Isuggestthat_innature.(2)_isthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.(3)_thattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.答案：(1)thoseanimalsshouldbesetfree(2)Mysuggestion(3)Itismysuggestion,【连句成篇】_,【佳作欣赏】DearEditor，HereIwritetotellyouaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezooanditseemedthattheywerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemandsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbearshead.Somepeoplejustlookedandlaughed，butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.,Hereiswhatweshoulddo.Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttous.Secondanyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Last，ifpeoplecantstopdoingso，mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsbesetfreeinnature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua,【类文点津】写一封反映问题或提意见、征求意见的信1一般书信体的组成：正式信件(多用于外交、商务、社交等场合)：开头(start)，一般用Dear或Dear姓/身份/职务等，如Deareditor，Dearmayor，orDearSmith.正文(body)：正式信件讲话要含蓄一点，用词要谨慎一些。结尾(ending)：Yourssincerely，Sincerely，Sincerelyyours，Yourstruly，Yoursfaithfully等较正式用语。,非正式信件(多用于亲友、同学、同事之间)开头：Hi，Mydear；Dearest等。正文：因彼此情谊笃厚，讲话可以直率一点、开门见山，意见要中肯。结束语：Love，Cheers，Regards，Bestwishes，Yours等相对随便的词语。2常用表达：反映现象的常用开头句式：Imwritingtotellyouthat.Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat.,Manypeopleareworriedabout.Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat.提出措施的常用句式：Weintendto.tohelp/save/protect.Wearereadytocallonpeopleto.Wefeellikedoing.toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson.Wedrathernot.butdo.Wedliketo.topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.,征求对方支持的常用表达：Weneedyoursupporttomademoreandmorepeople.Wouldyoupleasehelpusto.by.?Wellappreciateitifyoucan.Inorderto.，weneed.sothat.IhopethatIcangethelpfrom.Iexpectthatyoucan.,Asweknow，thenumberofsomewildplantsandanimalshasalreadydecreasedandsomeanimalshavealreadydiedout.Soitishightimeforustopaymuchattentiontowildlifeprotection.Buthowcanwepreventendangeredanimalsfrombeingindangerofdisappearing？Firstly，weshouldprotectthemfrombeinghunted.Itsofimportancetoeducatepeopletoregardanimalsasourfriends.Thosewho,wanttogetlargeincomefromhuntinganimalsfortheirfurshouldbepunished.Secondly，somenaturereservesandzonesshouldbesetsothatanimalscanliveinpeace.Itisalsonecessarytoemploysomepeopletolookafterthem.Onlyinthiswaywillanimalsnotbeharmedmoreoften.Thirdly，thehabitofeatingthemeatofsomeendangeredanimalsshouldbegotridof.Accordingtosomereports，somerestaurantsarestillservingsuchdishesnow.Thegovernmentshould,正如我们大家所知，野生动植物的数目已经减少，一些动物也已经灭绝了。所以是时候我们该密切注意保护野生动植物了。但是我们怎样能够阻止濒临灭绝的动物面临消失的危险呢？首先，我们应该保护它们免遭捕杀。教育人们把动物看作是我们的朋友很重要。那些想通过猎杀动物获取它们的毛皮而获得暴利(income收入)的人应该受到惩罚。第二，应该设立一些自然保护区和保护带，为,的是动物能够平静地生活。雇用一些人照看他们也是有必要的。只有这样动物才不会经常受到伤