高中英语写作技巧之连贯性

Coherenceinwriting写作之连贯性,1.覆盖了所有的要点；2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,高考考纲要求,Coherence,Achievingcoherence,表达连贯性的要求是：段落与段落，句与句之间有一定的衔接。,代词Thereisnothingimportantintodaysnewspaper.Youdonthavetoreadtodaysnewspaper.Ifyouarefamous,peoplewillwatchyouallthetimeandfollowyoueverywhere._couldmakeyourlifedifficult.,This,it,同义词Ilikesports.Ialsolikemusic.Thentheywentonwithoftheascent.Theclimbwasanextremelydifficultone.然后他们继续向上攀登，这是一次极难的攀登。,carefor,同位语ImTom.Imaboyof16.ImTom,aboyof16.MrLiisournewteacher.Heiskindtous.MrLi,ournewteacher,iskindtous.MynextstopwouldbeJiuzhaigou.ItsaplaceinSichuanProvince.MynextstopwouldbeJiuzhaigou,aplaceinSichunProvince.,定语从句Hefailedintheexam.Thismadehisfatherveryangry.Hefailedintheexam,whichmadehisfatherveryangry.IdliketovisitBeijing.Beijingappealstopeoplefromallovertheworld.IdliketovisitBeijing,whichappealstopeoplefromallovertheworld.,状语从句Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.Themealwassonicethatweallenjoyeditverymuch.Youdontstartearly.Youcantgetthereintime.Ifyoudontstartearly,youcantgetthereintime.,过渡词：1）表示并列的关联词bothand,eitheror,neithernornotonlybutalso,notbut,2)表示转折的关联词but,however,while,onthecontrary,3)表示递进的关联词besides,inaddition,whatsmore,whatsworse,worsestill4)表示结果的关联词astheresult,asaconsequence,thus,therefore,5)表示目的的关联词inorderthat/tosothat/soasto,6)表示先后顺序的关联词first,firstly,firstofall,aboveall,tobeginwith,secondly,next,then,besides，inaddition,whatsmore,finally,lastbutnotleast,mostimportantlyontheonehand,ontheotherhand;foronething,foranother,7).发表见解inmyopinion,asfarasIknow,asfarasIamconcerned,personally,8).表示总结inaword,inshort,tosumup,allinallinconclusion,9).其他muchtoonessurprise/joy/satisfactioninfact,inreality,asamatteroffact,tobefrank,totellyouthetruthasIhavesaid，asweknow,asisknowntoall,inotherwords,inparticular,generallyspeaking,1.(因为)_hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.,Thanksto,Asaresultof,因为,Becauseof,2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,_（所以）wellhavelessfieldtogrowrice.,therefore,so,asaresult/consequence,thus,结果,3.Therentisreasonable,_,thelocationisperfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。,whatsmore,moreover/furthermore,inaddition,besides,另外,4._(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.,AsfarasImconcerned,Inmyopinion,个人观点,Personally,5._(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.,Ingeneral,Inaword/allinall,总结,Inshort/brief,Generallyspeaking,简单句：Takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.高级句式：_,takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.众所周知，锻炼对健康有好处。,AsweallknowAsisknowntoall,简单句：Itrainedheavily.Wehadtostayatthehotel.高级句式：Itrainedheavily;_,wehadtostayatthehotel.,asaresult,简单句：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes.Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.高级句式：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes;_,Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.,besideswhatsmore,简单句：Iwaslostatthestation.Itwasgettingdark.高级句式：Iwaslostatthestation;_,itwasgettingdark.,whatsworse,1.Onecankeepfitinthefollowingways._,oneshouldkeepabalanceddiet._,oneistoexerciseregularly._,oneistogetridofbadhabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking._,makesuretobealwaysinagoodmood.,Andlastbutnotleast,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,2.Nowadays,withthelivingstandardsimprovingrapidly,massesofpeoplehavecarsoftheirown,whichcertainlybenefitthemalot.(请列出两条益处),2._,peoplecangetaroundfreely._,itisconvenientforthemtotravelincars.,Foronething,Foranother,Writingskills,Youcanbecome,whichisThismeansSowhensometimes