《试谈旅游景点翻译》on translation of scenic attractions – how to produce attractive effect

毕业论文ONTRANSLATIONOFSCENICATTRACTIONSHOWTOPRODUCEATTRACTIVEEFFECT学院外国语学院专业姓名指导老师英语学号职称讲师A2A0A4XXXA5A6A7A6A8A9A10XXX理工大学XXX学院毕业论文诚信承诺书本人郑重承诺我所呈交的毕业论文ONTRANSLATIONOFSCENICATTRACTIONSHOWTOPRODUCEATTRACTIVEEFFECT试谈旅游景点翻译是在指导教师的指导下，独立开展研究取得的成果，文中引用他人的观点和材料，均在文后按顺序列出其参考文献，论文使用的数据真实可靠。承诺人签名日期年月日A1A1A1A3A11A12A13A1A1A1A13A14A15A16A17A16A18A19A20A21A22A23A24A25IONTRANSLATIONOFSCENICATTRACTIONSHOWTOPRODUCEATTRACTIVEEFFECTABSTRACTTOURISMISABOOMINGINDUSTRYWHICHHASGIVENRISETOTHENEEDATTRACTIVETRANSLATIONOFSCENICSPOTSTHEPROSPEROUSDEVELOPMENTOFTOURISTINDUSTRYNOTONLYMEANSFOREIGNERSTRAVELTOCHINA,BUTALSOCHINESEVISITABROADWHENTRAVELINGAROUND,VISITORSWILLCOMEACROSSMANYPROBLEMSSUCHASLANGUAGEMISUNDERSTANDINGORCULTUREGAPSTRANSLATIONPLAYSAMAINROLEINPEOPLEENJOYINGSCENICATTRACTIONSTRANSLATIONOFPUBLICSIGNSINSCENICSPOTS,ADVERTISEMENTOFTOURISM,ANDFOODINPLACESOFINTERESTISNECESSARYINMOSTCASESTHEMAINFUNCTIONSOFPUBLICSIGNSINSCENICSPOTSAREPROVIDINGADEQUATEINFORMATIONORAROUSINGTRAVELERSINTERESTHOWEVER,MANYEXISTINGTRANSLATIONSARENOTSATISFACTORYVARIOUSPROBLEMSEXISTANDSOMEADVERTISINGMAYLOSEINTERESTWHENTRANSLATEDINTOANOTHERLANGUAGETHISPAPERANALYZESTHEFEATURESOFENGLISHTRANSLATIONFORSCENICSPOTSASWEKNOW,THERAPIDDEVELOPMENTOFTOURISMINDUSTRYATTRACTSMOREFOREIGNERSTOCHINA,WHICHENTAILSHIGHERREQUIREMENTSFORENGLISHINTERPRETATIONINSCENICSPOTSTHEAIMLIESINCONVEYINGCULTURALINFORMATION,ATTRACTINGFOREIGNTOURISTSANDPROMOTINGTHEIRINTERESTINTRAVELINGTOCHINAFURTHERMORE,THISPAPERPROVIDESSOMEPOSSIBLESOLUTIONSTOTHETRANSLATIONPROBLEMS,WHICHAREBASEDONNIDAFUNCTIONALEQUIVALENCETHEORYTHEREAREFIVECHAPTERSINTHISPAPERCHAPTERONEINTRODUCESTHEASSESSMENTOFTRANSLATIONOFTOURISTINTRODUCTIONCHAPTERTWOILLUSTRATESTHEPROBLEMSOFTOURISMTRANSLATIONCHAPTERTHREEINTRODUCESTHETYPESOFSCENICSPOTTRANSLATIONANDTHEFOURTHCHAPTERISBYAPPLYINGNIDAFUNCTIONALEQUIVALENCETHEORYTOPROVIDESOMESOLUTIONSANDTHELASTCHAPTERISTHECONCLUSIONKEYWORDSTRANSLATIONTRANSLATIONOFSCENICSPOTSINFORMATIONADVERTISEMENTTRANSLATIONFOODTRANSLATIONA1A1A1A3A11A12A13A1A1A1A13A14A15A16A17A16A18A19A20A21A22A23A24A25II试谈旅游景点翻译摘要随着经济的发展，旅游业的快速发展吸引了越来越多的外国游客来到中国观光旅游,这就对我国的旅游景区英文解说提出了更高的要求。旅游业正在日益蓬勃发展。因为国际间的旅游越来越多，为了保证能更好地享受美景，也不失原意，精确地翻译是必不可少的。景区英文解说的目的在于充分传达文化信息,吸引外国旅游者,激发他们的旅游兴趣。根据景区英文解说的特点以及解说中应考虑的因素,认为在景区英文解说中应以语篇翻译为基础,使景区英文解说达到更好的效果。越来越多的外国游客来中国观光旅游,或者中国游客到国外旅游。旅游资料成为宣传旅游景点,促进旅游业发展的重要手段。无论在中文翻译成英文，还是英文翻译成中文，然而不容忽视的是,国G1881旅游资料翻译G17148G18339G14403G14708不G21796,无论是在正G5347出G10268G10301还是G19762正G5347出G10268G10301中,G2520G12193语G16340G2656G19762语G16340G19181G16835或G19394G20076G1185然随G3800可G16277。旅游资料G1039要G2265G6336旅游景点G1183G13473G451旅游宣传G5203G2590G451旅游G2590G12046G7643G10272G451G14768G2345G12573,G1866中G4600以旅游景点G1183G13473翻译G7380G1867旅游文G1319特G14406,也是旅游资料翻译中的重点G2656G19602点。G6937G7424文重点分G7524中文旅游景点G1183G13473中译英出G10628的G19394G20076,以G3868达的G2163能对G12573G10714论为G10714论G7706G7562,提出G4593G16809G5627的解G1927G2162G8873。G7424文G1861G2265G6336G1128G12468G29G12544G980G12468,G1183G13473了翻译的G10714论G2656旅游翻译的G10628G10378。G12544G1120G12468是翻译景区的G19394G20076。G12544G989G12468,旅游景点翻译的G12193G12879。G12544G3247G12468，以G3868达的G2163能对G12573G10714论为G10714论G7706G7562,提出G4593G16809G5627的解G1927G2162G8873。G12544G1128G12468是论文的G5647G13479G18108分。关键词翻译，景点翻译，G5203G2590翻译，G20147G10301翻译A26A26A26A27A28A29A30A26A26A26A30A31A32A33A34A33A35A36A37A38A39A40A41A42IIICONTENTSABSTRACTINENGLISHABSTRACTINCHINESE1INTRODUCTION111THEASSESSMENTOFTRANSLATION112DEFINITIONOFTOURISM213SCENICSPOTSINTRODUCTION22PROBLEMSOFTOURISMTRANSLATION421LINGUISTICERRORS422DICTION4221PROPERNAME4222PSEUDOEQUIVALENCE5223REDUNDANCY6224MONOTONY623CHINGLISH7231MECHANICALTRANSFERS7232RUNONSENTENCES824LANGUAGEANDCULTURE10241THINKINGPATTERNS10242LINGUISTICTABOO113TYPESOFTOURISMTRANSLATION12A43A43A43A44A45A46A47A43A43A43A47A48A49A50A51A50A52A53A54A55A56A57A58A59IV31PUBLICSIGNSINSCENICSPOTS1232ADVERTISEMENTTRANSLATION1433FOODTRANSLATION15331DELIVERINGMESSAGES15332CULTURALEXCHANGE15333AESTHETICVALUE164POSSIBLESOLUTIONS1741LITERALTRANSLATION1742AMPLIFICATIONWITHNOTES1843FREETRANSLATION195CONCLUSION21BIBLIOGRAPHY22ACKNOWLEDGEMENT23A43A43A43A44A45A46A47A43A43A43A47A48A49A50A51A50A60A61A62A63A64A65A66A67A68A69A70A7111INTRODUCTIONTRANSLATIONISTHECOMPREHENSIONOFTHEMEANINGOFASUBJECTANDTHESUBSEQUENTPRODUCTIONOFANEQUIVALENTTOPIC,LIKEWISECALLEDA“TRANSLATION,“THATCOMMUNICATESTHESAMEMESSAGEINANOTHERLANGUAGETHEDEVELOPMENTOFTRANSPORTATIONMEANSANDTELECOMMUNICATIONFACILITIESALLOWSMOREANDMOREPEOPLETOTRAVELOUTSIDETHEIRCOUNTRIESFORTHEPURPOSEOFRELAXATIONTHETRANSLATIONOFSIGNSINSCENICSPOTS,ADVERTISEMENTSANDFOODPLAYSACRUCIALROLEINTOURISMTRANSLATIONTHESCENICSPOTTRANSLATIONISSPECIFICALLYAIMEDATFOREIGNTOURISTSTHELARGECULTURALGAPBETWEENCHINAANDTHEWESTERNCOUNTRIESMAKESTHETRANSLATIONOFCHINESESCENICSPOTINTRODUCTIONS,WHICHCONTAINSALOTOFCULTURALELEMENTS,AJOBTHATREQUIRESPAINSTAKINGEFFORTSTHETRANSLATORNOTONLYHASTOHAVEAGOODGRASPOFBOTHCHINESEANDENGLISH,BUTALSOBEHIGHLYPROFICIENTININTERCULTURALTRANSFER11THEASSESSMENTOFTRANSLATIONTHECRITERIONOFTRANSLATIONFUNCTIONSASTHEGUIDINGPRINCIPLESFORTHETRANSLATIONPROCESSANDASTHESTANDARDSFORDETERMININGTHEQUALITYOFTH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