读后续写微技能训练之如何描写环境PPT课件

1、.,1,Sophia,如何描写环境,读后续写微技能指导之四,.,2,On the day back to school, dark clouds hung low in the sky. The rain poured down, with cold drops and angry winds slapping (拍;掴) my face. I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.,Functions of Natural Setting Description,渲染了忧伤的气氛. 揭示了故事发生的背景. 立体感和真实感,

2、.,3,I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1),写作思路一： 第一步，先尝试概括性描述（总体描述）。 第二步，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。,.,4,外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。,Outside, there was a _wind, and the branches we

3、re blowing in_. The dust on the ground was flying in disorder, _made people unable to open their eyes.,strong,disorder,which,.,5,这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风，世界好像停止在这一刻，河流也停下了脚步。,This winter, the weather is _cold. There is no wind _this moment, the world seems to have stopped, the river has stopped its_.,unusu

4、ally,at,footsteps,.,6,The dark rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power. .(M1U1),写作思路二： 第一步，先尝试细节描述。 第二步，总体描述。,.,7,2017.11 浙江高考真题应用 Para 2 We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._,I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding

5、rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.,.,8,The wind was _ dreadfully and the rain was_from the heaven, _ against the branches of lined trees.The world was_ with a sea of darkness.,howling,pouring,whipping,burdened/loaded,.,9,The wind was howlin

6、g dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined tress. The world was burdened with a sea of drakness.,写作思路三：“景”“情”过渡,A：I was seized with the roaring power of nature. a sense of horror creeping up on me,B：A flood of fear washing over me,I immediately turn

7、ed around to slide into the bed and curled up.,.,10,The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.,Everything was the same, only his father being away forever.,怎样将一丝忧伤融入大自然的景色？,.,11,The _(甜蜜的)fragrance of flowers, the faint _(嗡嗡声)of insects as well as the gentle touch of the _(微风)brought back memories of the bygone days s