初中英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题含答案

1、最新初中英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题(含答案) 一、英语书面表达 1“”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议 定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！1. 2. 100 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。要求： 词左右。Im going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions 【答案】 to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack

2、 a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly. Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful sc

3、hool life as well I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful. 【解析】 【详解】be going tograduate ，这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如fromto begin withbothandget along well with othersbe active inas important as，as wellTo begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内等。而容

4、，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定 句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。 2书面表达 “Teenagers”BettyLucy的来信。她在信中诉假设你是某英文报纸栏目的编辑，日前收到了Lucy90,信词左右的回信。要求内容合理的来信，用英语写一封说了她的烦恼，请你

5、根据 的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, Im sorry to know that you arent allowed to read eBooks. _ All the best! Betty Dear Lucy,【答案】 Im sorry to know that you arent allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is n

6、o doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of read

7、ing e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but its an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. All the best! Be

8、tty 【解析】 【详解】in recent yearsas a product ，这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如oflive inmore and moresothatfor exampledo harm tobe harmful toin my ，opiniontake the place ofinstead ofFor one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短，等。同时It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so 文的叙述很有条理，而conve

9、nient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富 有条理。 【点睛】

10、书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。 3书面表达423日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开每年的月 ”“活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。读好书，促成长展 1. 获取知识，开阔视野 2. 使人愉悦，益于学习读书的意义 3. （自由发挥） 1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯 现状 2. 不知道读什么书，不会选择 （至少两点）倡议 901. 左右。

11、短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；注意：词数 2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear classmates, Reading is very important in our daily life. _ _ _ ading now!Lets start re Reading is very important in our daily life【答案】First of allreading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of booksIt

12、 can also help to ，open up a whole new world to usSecondreading will/can make us clever and happyIt is ，good for our study and it can help us grow upThirdreading can help us think more and ， further and make our life more colourfulHoweverthere is usually so much homework for us to do that we dont ha

13、ve enough time for ，readingMoreoversome of us dont have a good habit of reading but often spend too much ， time watching TV and searching the InternetIn my opinionour school can have aReading Weekonce a termTeachers should encourage ，students to borrow books from the libraryWe must spend more time r

14、eading some useful we can have a better futurebooksAs a result， Lets start reading now!【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短first of allall kinds of bookshelp to dobe good formore and furtherso ，语，例如，muchspend too much time doingsearch the Internetin my opinionas a result等。同时，First of all/ Second/

15、 ThirdHowever/ Moreover / As a result等结构副词的运等时间副词和，用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮 点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。 4书面表达初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为 “Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文

16、，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。 老师 在校 学生 作业 工作认真负责，充满爱心 （至少发挥两点） 作业多舍弃爱好 周末其它活动 锻炼，电视 （发挥一到两点）愿望 要求： 1所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥： 902词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文章不少于 3语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our s

17、chool life is like now. Our school life in Grade Nine【答案】It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our stu

18、dy or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing o

19、ur homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析

20、】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短at schoolwork hardmost ofpatient enoughhelp sb. with sth.all kinds of ，语，例如，problemsin our lifeas a resultas for studentslisten tobe busy doingtry to do，spend a lot of time doingnot any moreplay basketballIt is more than half a year 等。而，since we became a Grade Nin

21、e student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达 多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。 5书面表达shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多

22、便利，受到人们的追共享单车（“”，请你根捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜 21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。据表格中信息的提示，给 社会现状 自从出现，饱受赞誉。 1.随处可见，出行方便 诸多优势2.有益健康，减少污染3.费用不高，负担得起 1.未及时归还 存在问题 2.占道挡路 2点）我认为（考生自拟，至少你的观点 1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。注意事项： 23“2.”句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。你的观点表格中一栏用 903.个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。词数在 Shared bikes are bec

23、oming more and more popular in our daily life. Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high 【答案】 praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also,

24、riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people cant return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in

25、our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of living a green life.21世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题【解析】这篇作文要求我们给目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第

26、三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文 章意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语

27、法They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to 规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长Also, Whats more, But, sometimes, Af

28、ter all等句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如 等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。 6假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。 80岁。目前数量在减少，因为：提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到 1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园； 2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。 3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。1280词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词）恰当运用比较级和最高级；）要求： 数。 ivorymammal; 象牙参考词汇：哺乳动物 Dear classmates_ _ can make a big difference. I believe everyon

29、es contribution （贡献） Yours, Lihua Dear classmates,【答案】Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their

30、 homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hol

31、d some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. can make a big difference. I believe everyones contribution （贡献） Yours, Lihua 【解析】 【详解】,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所本文是一封倡议书处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态We can/ We should/ Lets/Wed better的表示建议主要为一般现在

32、时。提出倡议时可以使用的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，Elephants are the largest 可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，mammals ,First, we should plant more trees Firstly,. 也使用到了比较级和最高级；及Secondly,so, or, 等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如 but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。 7Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Song of the parting

33、 son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下发的游子吟（ 提示给他回信： 1.作者：孟郊 2.时间：唐朝 3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题：母爱的伟大 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； : 80-1003.词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。词数 Dear Jack, .Song of the parting sonIm glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem _ _ Yours, Dear Jack,【答案】Im glad

34、to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now Im writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily lifea mo

35、ther making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mothers love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many peoples hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇材料作文。 【详解】 根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一

36、般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分：Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍游子吟朋友第一部分：交代写信目的 Song of the parting son）这首诗。（ Song of the parting son）这首诗。第二部分：文章主体部分具体介绍游子吟（ 1.作者：孟郊 2.时间：唐朝 3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题：母爱的伟大如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来第三部分：信的结语 信。 158分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。书面表达（本题positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，为了使

37、生活更美好，社会需要正能量（ What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给 1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。 作文要求： 1不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。280 作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词个左右。语句连贯，词数 数。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.

38、 _In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake 【答案】 shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew

39、she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the sa

40、ying goes, “The roses in 113wher hand, the flavor in mine.”）（ 【解析】 【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓励大家相互帮助，并让世界充满正能量。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上 下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习be for, adj enough to do, the 惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如other day, try ones best, make sb do

41、, make a call, give sb a hand, in ones opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思 连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】 写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心

42、突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。 9中央电视台经典咏流传节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。“Growing up 读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以with Reading”首诗，并建议大家多读为

43、题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或 书，读好书。 要点提示：1. 读书的重要性 获取知识，开阔眼界；2. 1. 读过的一本书或 提升自我，增强自信 作品内容简介； 2. 一首诗 Good habitsTime 读书感悟及对自己的影响。 Bad habits 1. 多读书，读好书 Get up earlyIn the morning 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯； Eat junk food for breakfast 2. 多读经典文学作品 with herQuarrel（争吵） Ask some questionsIn class 注意： 1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，

44、以使行文连贯。 2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。 80-1003. （文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。词数：classic open up ones eyes improve oneself be 提升自我；经典作品；参考词汇：开阔眼界； cooperation more confident responsibility 合作。更自信；责任； Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested

45、in reading books, especially classics. Growing up with Reading【答案】Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, b

46、ut also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The books writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief