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1、2020托福写作的三个重要标准 托福写作有三个重要标准,你知道是哪三个吗?下面就和大家分享托福写作的三个重要标准。希望能够帮助到大家,来欣赏一下吧。 第一,连接词过渡句 任何形式的英语文章中都应该具备一定量的连接词(路标词),因为它们是有助于读者顺利阅读的“导航坐标”;大多数考生在备考时也的确会准备一系列此类连接词,用于文章每个段落的段首;包括有表示“第一,第二,第三”等的连接词。但是单纯有段首连接词还不足以支撑全文的结构,因此考生应该同时准备段中连接词,包括“比如说,因为,但是,相对比而言”等,粗略估计,全文完成下来可以达到15个以上的路标词,不仅承接了全文,结构清晰明了,而且也为时间紧张下

2、的写作减轻了不少字数压力。以下为常用连接词: 1, 第一:in the first place/ first and foremost/ to start with/ to begin with/ first of all/ first/ firstly 2, 第二:in the second place/ secondly and equal importantly/ to continue/ second/ secondly 3, 第三:in the third place/ last but not least/ third/ thirdly 4, 一方面、另一方面:on one han

3、d/ on the other hand; for one thing/ for another 5, 表原因:because/ because of/ since/ due to/ as/ thanks to/ for/ owing to 6, 表结果:so/ therefore/ as a result/ consequently/ as a consequence 7, 表举例:for example/ for instance/ such as/ takeas an example/ to illustrate 8, 表承接:besides/ furthermore/ moreover

4、/ whats more/ in addition/ additionally 9, 表转折:but/ while/ however/ nevertheless/ noheless 10,表比较对比: to pare with/ pared with/ in parison with/ by contrast/ on the contrary 当然,仅仅依靠连接词是不足以表明全文的连贯性的,适当的添加过渡句也是很好的承接手段,如Official Guide To The New TOEFL P263中有一篇关于DISHONESTY KILLS RELIABILITY 的5分范文中就有出现多处明

5、显的段落过渡句,如第三段首“After stating that everyones opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always _ing”用来承接上下两段,以引出自己的观点看法;第五段首“Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite”等都明显具备良好的过渡功能,让全文更加流畅舒服,

6、朗朗上口。 第二,内在论证统一 Official Guide To The New TOEFL这一官方指南中也明确在写作部分提到“但要知道,仅仅使用第一,第二这样的连接词并不能保证作文结构的严谨,还要注意让所有的观点与文章的主题相关,紧扣中心思想。换句话说,作文要有统一性,评分原则中提到的统一性,渐进性和连贯性这些都是评估作文结构是否严谨,读者能否比较容易地跟上作者思路的标准。”通过上段叙述,我们不难发现作文论证统一性的重要性。 而事实上这也正是被许多考生所忽略的问题。在拿到试题后,考生们不是先腾出时间构思结构框架,而是急着抓住哪怕是一分钟的时间动笔写作,其实如此的选择是要不得的,建议各位考生

7、在考试时不要舍不得这准备的时间,正所谓“磨刀不误砍柴功”;因为只有当你事先构思好而不是边想边写,你才能真正做到论证内容的一致性,观点与论据的统一性,也才能真正取得高分。另外,用最直白的作答应对题目的提问,用单边的手段安排整篇文章成5段的总分总思路是十分适用的。 Do you agree or disagree: The movies are worth watching only if they can teach something in real life. 写作范文参考: No matter who you are, you are definitely in a dire need f

8、or excitement and thrill. Then, a controversy might appear among the public whether citizens should only watch those movies that can teach something in real life. Some of you may only watch those movies that can help to expand ones knowledge and reveal the life stories, however, I strongly disagree

9、with the statement and I think there will be a variety of reasons to watch movies. Initially, entertainment is the principle reason for the entire world watching movies. Be it edy, science-fiction, drama or action, movies are a medium of leisure and recreation for every single individual ranging fro

10、m those on streets to the high and mighty residents in penthouses. Put it in another words, the greatest of all benefits of watching a movie is that it entertains you and calms your tumultuous heart down. Take me as an example. I feel very tired after the full devotion to my career in a week and the

11、re is no time for the gym and outdoor activities just because of the busy work schedules. Then, I will choose to lie on my couch and watch movies of many kinds with a bowl of munchies like popcorns and sodas during the weekends. By being engrossed in a edy show that can evoke hearty laughs, I will e

12、ncounter situations with a positive frame of mind. Besides, when watching the horror movies, I will feel excited, scared, and emotional during those two and a half hours, leading me to be transferred to a world far away from the reality. Obviously, no matter what kind of movies they are, they will b

13、e worth watching if they can entertain you. Another general concern about movies is that they can help fasten the bonds between families. More often than not, what audiences are more focused on, during the process of watching movies, is the time they spend with their families rather than the well-or

14、chestrated plots or the life lessons they might disclose. Current citizens can afford to spend too much time having fun like traveling around the city or having a party because most of them are under huge pressure from the society and most of their time has to be oupied by a variety of professional

15、tasks. However, watching movies wont consume too much time, serving as a stress buster and lubricant to strengthen relationship with families. Almost at every weekend, I will hang out with my girlfriend to watch movies whatever the genre is and staying with each other at that moment can help shorten

16、 our mental distance and we can just hold hands of each other and feel so close between us. Aordingly, my personal experience can help explain how we spend with our families or lovers like watching movies matters more than what we can learn from the movies. In a word, I dont think only those movies

17、that _ us important life stories are worth watching. What I truly believe is those movies that can entertain audiences and provide viewers with a chance to stay with each other are more weled. What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local munities? 1. Plant trees and c

18、reate parks 2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers 3. Increase aess to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads 写作范文参考: With the sense of munity being much stronger, how to protect the environment of local munities has never

19、failed to attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it es to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, peoples notions may vary from one

20、to another. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best. Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole

21、neighborhood. As is mon sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the c

22、ontaminated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local munity. Aompanying the rapid ur

23、banization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks bee the only place which can serve as habitats for those animals.

24、 Aordingly, the species of animals living here can bee more diverse. In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more aessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in some degrees

25、. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier aess to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in parison to planting trees and building parks, the above two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the munity

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