2020-2021年中考英语书面表达选择题(word)1

1、2020-2021年中考英语书面表达选择题（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1如今，很多城市出 了一种 色出行方式共享 （便捷而 受青 ，但同 也引 了一些 。 你根据提示以bike-sharing ），它因 保、Bike-sharing 写一篇英 短文，表达自己的看法和建 。要点提示：Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减 交通 力）AdvantagesTake exercise ProblemsThrow away, damage （ ） , be stolenAdviceCivilized

2、（文明的） , follow the rules, take good care of注意：1. 短文 包括以上要点，可适当 ，以使行文 ；2. 文中不得出 真 的人名、校名及地名；3. 数： 80-100（文章开 已 出，不 入 数）。Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities._【答案】 Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing

3、 is becoming more and more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere. 【高分句型一】 Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besid

4、es, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health. （ ） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen. （ ）In my opinion, everyone should try to be civ

5、ilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful. 【高分句型二】（建 ）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如 : Its known that ithas many advantages.，Fi

6、rst of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere. ， Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion, 等。【点睛】本文要求以 “Bike-sharing ”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。2书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低

7、碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa 向你来信询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1节水节电2垃圾分类3少用纸巾，重拾手帕4步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳； tissue 纸巾词数：100 词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here issomething about it_Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear

8、 Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here issomething about it We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, welights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also d bett

9、matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding

10、 bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa 写信，介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行的 情况。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：We can do， wedbetter，we suggest，which contributes to等句式的 用。写作中注意运

11、用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 我要介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行了 ，接下来介 我 低碳生活可以做的事。此 ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of,contribute to等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。3 最近一份学生体 健康 果 示，学生近 率仍 持在高位水平，且越来越低 化。 根据下表所提示的内容，用英 写一篇短文，并 表自己的 点。现 状大 70%学生眼睛近 1. 睡眠不足主要原因2. 看 、做作 、用 等1. 做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 防方法2.

12、养成正确的用眼 你的 点 （.至少一条）参考 ：近 的shortsighted要求：（ 1） 数： 80 100 个。（ 2）开 已 出，不 入 数。（ 3）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_【答案】 The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.At present, about 70% of th

13、e students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exer

14、cises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【 解】 是一篇 表作文。根据 干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般 在 写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近 原因：1.睡眠不足（not

15、 enough） 2. 看 、做作 、用 等（for a long time）防止近 的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 （eye exercises） 2.养成正确的用眼 （have the good habit of）个人 点：如：我 ，我 了解保 眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保 我 的眼睛。（I think ?； tryones best to do sth. ）。常用的重点句型和短 有：sb. spend some time doing sth.， in order to do sth.， try to dosth.， the importance of等。4 写作假定你是李 ，在一位

16、名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家 的博客上，你看到以下内容。 你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求， 位家 回复。I m the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much press

17、ure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 条建 。【答案】 Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university

18、admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allowsthem almost

19、 no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choiceto help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ； let herhave more friends and social activities ； and let her make mistakes

20、of her own as the teenagersoften do.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 学生家 的博客 行回复。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My ide a is that，There are， Some all-Astudents in school have， Thereason. is，So I suggest that等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表明自己的看法，接下来 述自

21、己的理由，最后介 自己的建 。此 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemistakes, of one等s这own些 的运用也 文章增色不少。5 信是中 民族的 美德，也是社会主 核心价 内容之一。而你的朋友Daming 最近却被 信危机所困 。上周末，他本来和Lingling 相 一起去 影院看 影，但是他却因 在家复 考 ，把 件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling 很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。 你就此事 校 投稿，以“The Importance of Promi

22、se ”，内容要点如下：1、 述事件；2、 自己的看法，并 Daming一些建 。注意：1、 数 80100；2、行文 ， 合理；3、文中不能出 真 的校名和人名；4、文章的开 和 尾已 你写好，不 入 数。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（ ） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours

23、,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（ ） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to wa

24、tch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Linglingherloseanger, but also madebut ， so，trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional

25、 virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。【详解】首先

26、，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。【点睛】文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如because of 等，使文章更加通顺。6假设你是来自中国的中学生李华 ,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营 ,看完了这个网页后 ,你打算给 Liz Payne留言 ,表达你在冬令营期间想去 London Canal Museum 参观的愿望。内容包括：1.简

27、单介绍自己；2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听 Liz Payne的讲座）；3.预期收获。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语句连贯,词数80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I m writing to tell you that oucity will have

28、 a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit LondonCanal Museum. From .uk, I know you will have a report“ An Update onththe Cotswold Canals” February,which6 will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.And I also hope to listen to your talk

29、 so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, theThames and Severn Canal. What s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观

30、London Canal Museum 以及听 Liz Payne 的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称 I 来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点

31、。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如 you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. .uk, I know you will have

32、 a reportI m writing to tell中使用了宾语从句；From“ An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th , which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. 中有一个非限制性定语从句； And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇

33、文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。7“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数 80 左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has i

34、mproveda lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seeneverywhere.As junior high students,_Let s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living en

35、vironment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can beseen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be politeto others and try to behave well. It s kind of you to help people in need. Mea

36、nwhile, We can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep offgrass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn t do. We shouldn t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can t spit anywhere and we shouldnwrubbish everywheretthro.

37、At the same time, we shouldn t break traffic rules.Let s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行 “双创 ”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创 ”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做

38、什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称 we 来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市 “双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两

39、个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、 It s kind of you to help people in need、. Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidi

40、er.、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldnrubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnbreak trafficrulest. 等等。 t throw8根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100 词丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及要求，用英文完成写作内容包括：1Which course （ s） do you like ？2Why do you like it/them ？3What can you learn from it/them？写作要求：1依据你的兴趣

41、选择课程（数量不限）；2短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；3文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名Of all the courses， I like _【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lotof friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper c

42、utting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditionalChinese culture. That s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook deliciousfood. I think it is very useful course because I d like to cook someth

43、ing different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读。本题属于材料作文，主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的学科中学到了什么。注意时态的运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。切记不要遗漏要点。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释愿意以及收获，最后一段讲述这些学科对他的生活的意义。3.高分亮点：单词短语： like.best, be interested

44、 in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj 以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面。高分句型： That s why I want to choose paper cutting中 why 引导的表语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如like.best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit o

45、f teamwork,want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。9近期某英文报纸就 “ Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母） ”这一话题展开讨论。 “扫雪机式父母 ”的特征

46、是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。理解不理解观点父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做。父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：1、词数： 60-80 词。2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。_【答案】例文I really cant understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They cle

47、an all the obstacles in childrens lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldnt do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences