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2、or me to cite all the evidence ofChinese traditional virtueraising the elder without any excuse to yield.Several factors could weigh heavily for the promotion/depression of. , yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following three causes. To begin with, . Moreover,. The last but not the least

3、,.How to grasp the main idea of the picture?no creativity focusing on main idea!200311.05104seniors / pensioners061-worship071081-in-hand(cooperation), handicapped, physically-challenged2.091net1012002)111121131selectionsensational bridge410individuality12Thrift3 successthrift and wastefrugalityHow

4、to treat success properly?What is the major factor to attaI IIIIIuccess?Is discontent the main factor leading to resulting in /giving rise to success?4ideal and realityaspiration5III IIIresponsibility creditplagiarizefake commoditiesplagiari67high score, low-competencejob-hoppingjob-huntingjob-proje

5、cting123456cooperation = team workhow to treat competition correctly?on-line surfing() E-commercefood safetyChinese traditional values vs. western ones7Make a comebackspare no efforts to provide favors to others who are involvedphilanthropyome grieving situation, charity /Over-fishery1oking ecocidep

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7、icresearch thesis defense)quality-oriented education vs. quantity-oriented education123population explosion intellectual propertycharity / philanthropyrhythm0810100 120(08Dear Big boss:wever, you onlygiveeall job and little money. I was a monitor always in my college.I do not want work here, really?

8、 I hope you will not angry me.Yours sincerely,Li Ming1.2.31:,2)Perfect structure, pathetic language.5Dear Manager Wang,I am writing this letter to extend my rough decision for quitting the job. I really hope that you could take into account my deplorable / grieving situation as losing orientation in

9、 the work. Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably low compared with other same-level co-After all However, a merelytrivial / humble position was given to me here. It is a great pity that I have difficulties (in) finding anyopportunity to get self-promotion.Actually, it takee a lot of time t

10、o make up my mind for departure. Thank you a lot for grantingme chances to share many brilliant experiences heresplendid-shining future.uch a long time. Wish our corporation a morecordially yours,Li MingimprovementbratormingOver-consuming behavior (), energy-consuming behavior (), conserve energy,fr

11、ugality plays a key/critical role in living in a high-standarded and safe way.key tipswhy(case) howquit job/ effectCase: 1practicalI migrate to another city to fight for the common ideal with my girlfriend.IIIIIfind it difficult to get along with my immediate manager immediate superior.ndurance.Why

12、do you think people should attend college?find a good job2III to undergo more and gain more.As an old famous proverbThe way to practice academic research may appear tougher than you have ever imagined, yet we will win the ile of the world in this process of pursuing eminence.III to better my persona

13、lity, lead a cultural life, which is defined as a fluent interaction betweenknowledge and courtesy.1Competition and cooperation collaboration work together for the same goal.2/3a sense of Fair-PlayJustice:Case:, who, who1. n.+ which/who/thatCase:Many people take seriously luxuries.12Many people who

14、consider A as B take seriously the lifestyle of pursuing luxuries. A:B: an only standard to judge his/her social positionsocial rank, thua(metaphor)2. (n.)/+ V-ed en() / V-ing()Case1: youngsters, ranging from / who range from 20 to 30-year oldsCase2:5%24%A recent finding has provided the first concr

15、ete clue that 24 percent more or less of young white collarsranging from 25 to 30-year olds, are barely sure of what to keep and what to get rid of, compared withthose of 5 percent one decade ago.+ with + (n.) a pretty girla girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure Case:Nowadays, a lot o

16、f riches like buying luxurious autos to show their existence.These days, an overwhelming number of people, with money bulging out of their pockets, are switching their expenditure into purchasing limousines/luxurious vehicles, (which are) defined as the3n.1chart illustrationtableThe table given abov

17、e orderly arranges the informationfigures about , which indicates discloses a truth of matter that () the population who have taken plastic surgerypie chartThe pie chart (which is) given above compares the proportions percentage distributions of , manifesting displaying that #-line chart /bar chartT

18、he line chart manifested above indicates the quantity variation of. over the period from year.to.,.200020050807.The sales volume rises up sharply by 25 percent to 10 billion dollars in the third quarter in 1998, thenvolume in 2008 is twice aany as it is in 2007, which means. .Hold steady() increase

19、to (.) increase by (.) drop to(rise up dramatically / steadily / slightly2.As can be seen in the picture given abovedirect description02In the cartoon given above is a beautiful American girl is standing over there in aChinese traditional costumeiling just like a flower.Sweet and graceful, a delicio

20、usly pretty American girl is heading towards us, dancing with swinging locks in a Chinese traditional costume.05A poor elder, who is desperate and helpless, is being kickedfeet.Desperate and helpless, a poor elder is being kicked just like a football among these evil feet.12Positively and optimistic

21、ally, the man in the right side of the picture considers a little water in the bottleas a God-blessed present , yet in the left side is the other one who could merely condemn the nearly empty bottle as a totally broken hope.Nutritious and tasteful, in the hot-pot are those irresistible dishes, inclu

22、ding Chinese Kung-fu,Shakespeare, western humanities, Buddhi, etc., which are regarded as a splendid cultural festival.Unwillingly and toughly, a man with a painful expression is hanging on the top of a building, which is besieged by a lot of vehicles flooding into every corner of streets.Distressed

23、 and helpless, a man with a painful expression is hanging on the top of a building, which isbesieged by a lot of vehicles flooding every corner of streets.Is failure a bad thing?As a classic proverb delivered by a well-known philosopher goes, which means the failure plays a key role in the way to ap

24、proach / attauccess.+/+1.(: How to protect our environment?)ThoughWhile / Yet we human beings have done manysurroundings, we still have remedies / prescriptions(things (which are) harmful / malicious to ourOn the2exemplificationA good case in point is., who which.Considering the issue of I can think

25、 of no better exemplification than a clasate of mine named ., who which.1Considering theDo animals know natural law?tinct of animals to make use of natural laws for healing themselves, I can think of no betterexemplification than the gorilla / monkey, which would search for the very right proper / a

26、ppropriate herbs tocure itself when (it is) bit by a poisonous snake.22110Considering the potentials of our mankind to step above the infiniteness, I can think of no better exemplification than one of my roommates, who found the appropriate methods to successfully earn a score of110 in TOEFL Exams w

27、ithin 2 months, beginning at a very medium academic level.EgThus, we should try ourokers leave cigarettes tobaccos / 555, Marlboro, Parliament,best make efforts work like Trojans to helpKent, etc.Eg:Should elderly parents live together with their adult children?To sum it up, living in a big-harmonio

28、us family gives people a sense of belonging. Thus, not merely the elderly parents but the adult children themselves need such a multi-generational domestic atmosphere as well.?logically and coherentlyEg:12345It was deep at night. I came back home. I found the gate closed. I climbed over the wall int

29、o the yard stealthily. Ifeared that I might wake up my parents.It was deep at night.I came back home.I found the gate closed. I climbed over the wall into the yardstealthily.I feared that I might make up my parents.It was deep at night.Deep at night,I came back home. I found the gate closed.I came b

30、ack home only to( ) find the gate closed.I climbed over the wall into the yard stealthily. I feared that I might wake up my parents.For fearing waking up my parents, I climbed over the wall into the yard stealthily.3Having been in Beijing for 3 yeary roommate, Xiao Li, who comes from the South, is s

31、till not accustomed tothe lifestyle of North (such as eating steamed bread and bearing the dry wind of Beijing). Hence, he decides to go back his hometown for working after his graduation.confidenceI know.I can tell. / You got it.Eg:.The character of the camel is that it can live without water for s

32、everal days.1 The camel is able to be alive without water for several days.2 What is special about the camel is that it is OK even if having no water for drinking for several days.3 Different from other animals, theWhen it comes to the question about what time we are supposed to exert some drastic m

33、easures to preserve ourWhen it comes to the question about what kind of social role a female is supposed to establish, unquestionably, myanswer is that women should never declare their loyalty / allegiance to the kitchen any more.passI THINK = I set forth thatEg:1 People have noticed that the unempl

34、oyment brings not only economic pressure but also mental unbalance stress because many people will become weak soon after they lose/losing their jobs.2 It has been observed that unemployment, which is quite aside from exerting financial pressures, brings enormous psychological discomfort as well so

35、that many individuals degenerate / step into the dark rapidly when (they are) jobless.twinklespreading,AvatarAvatar, a recently-prevailing 3D fictional movie, has gained an overwhelming attention from the public and stimulated a new wave for innovating picturing technology.Plastic Surgery, a recentl

36、y-disputable social issue, . .Case1In this relentless shopping process are, definitely, four kinds of females the deliciously gorgeous teenage dancing with swinging locks;2the young mother teaching her baby girl the right soap for skin care; 3the middle-aged housewife with a voice like thunder saw;

37、4the old lady with ventures and irregularity.Case:At the first glance, as the economic boom brings not merely material comfort but fast rhythm of daily life as well, modern citizens, especially those in metropolises, are undergoing an unprecedented pressure from work so thating from Microsoft Kinect

38、 to Ipad Mini, have prevented our fellow citizens from talking with each other face to face. tead of chatting in real life, people are discussing issues in virtual / imagined zones, which are comprised ofmany chilly CPUs.Last but not the least,iostly preoccupied with a lot of compelling entertaining

39、 programspubs. Naturally, it is preferable for our fellow citizens to watch TV at home rather than to visit old friends.Keyword:A good case in point is.,who which.It goes without saying that It goes with no denying that .,Shed light on account for shed the spotlight on throw light onThe financial co

40、ndition, undoubtedly, plays a critical role in the state of marriage. It goes with no denying thatCase:The process of bodybuilding can improve our sense of perseverance and endurance thus)A good case in point is the Marathon race, during which the athletes have to cover run a long geographicaldistan

41、ce. Without a brave and resolute heart, it is impossible for any runner to finish thiit.ission, not to say to wineasiness1234letter( n otice( ab stract(note()/)(Lost and Found)recruitment)1) my sincere gratitude for your kindness in V-ing last Friday when .2I should thank you again for your unselfis

42、hness.Case: Li Ming has encountered a terrible crash. A passer-by took some effective aids to him in time. You pleasewrite a letter to express thanks in the name of Li Ming. mentioning what happened.telling him about your current physical conditionexpressing your thanks+ Dear _ _,the other day when

43、I was knocked down by a taxi cab. If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aidand taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequenceight have been much more serious.The doctor sayy broken leg is healing well. Additionally, Fortunately, theurance company has agreed topay my

44、hospital bills. Everyone surrounding mainta that it was your quick-witted response in this emergencythat has led/contributed to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadayany people talk about the need to be unselfish, we witness few people practicing (thatpractice) what they are preaching. However,

45、you demonstrated by your actions that you are an exception.yours,Li Mingbratorming:what happenedhow to tackle this problem express your apologyCasking her to wait your friend who will pick up hertelling her how to identify your friend1I am writing this letter to expressupposed to be in _NC .y apolog

46、y for having no time to pick up you this Friday when you areI am sorry again for having no time to pick up you this Friday. When you arrive at NC, I wouldentertain you with a dinner to compensate() you extend my apology.2Once again, I would apologize for my malpractice in V+ing. Wish you forgive any

47、 inconvenience (whichis) caused by me.1I am sorry to disturb you but I am afraid that I have to _.I am writing this letter to report the loss of my (n.) last Thursday when I was about V+ing .2I would really appreciate it very much if you could Eg . Eg: send me back my baggage through/via Express( Ca

48、seHilton Hotelgiving him some relevant information Eg: your room number-).in the room 5221 on the fifth floor in the east southeast district of the hotel. what are in your bagasking the manager to notice you immediately if the bag was found (phone E-mail) how to send it back youEg: I would appreciat

49、e it very much if you could deliver the luggage back to me by EMS as soon as it is found.,11(eg,. Whether to study abroad or pursue knowledge in domestic atmosphere.As a warm-hearted and responsible reader/would-be graduate/citizen, I have paid a lot of attention2212It would be beneficialFor the sak

50、e of . may I suggest you .Eg: For the sake of courtesy may we suggest you urinate into the lavatory. 3I hope that you will find my proposals suggestions practical reliable helpful. If there is any confusion found, please with no hesitation to contact me for discussingfurther details.1I am writing th

51、is letter to call on people in every walk of life to perk up and make efforts/dedication for theShanghai Expo.Non-oking era2():sake. After _, I have all the reasonsto be optimistic that . 3Please join us in the action and switch our excitement into a sense of spirit that dares any possible difficulties!Thank you for your attention!NOTICE1C:Lost