高考英语一轮总复习 第三部分 写作指导 提分策略五 复杂结构 北师大版

1、策略五复杂结构,高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档标准中的“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力”告诉我们,仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,并不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,在这种情况下即使书面表达无语法错误,也不能得高分。相反,在书面表达中有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇,即使会出现一些错误,也无伤大雅,仍属于较高的得分档次。所以考生可尝试使用一些高级语法结构,如省略句、强调句、倒装句、感叹句等。但要注意,使用复杂结构写作时,要把握好尺度,合理运用,切莫堆砌,典例(2015安徽高考)某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy

2、yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动,请你以“A famous Chinese I would like to interview”为题,写一篇英语短文。 内容包括: 1.采访的对象; 2.采访的原因; 3.想提的问题。 注意: 1.词数120左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。 A famous Chinese I would like to interview,参考范文】 A famous Chinese I would like to interview The pers

3、on Id like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it. If I c

4、ould interview him,I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.Finally,I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,which must be very interesting,思路点拨】 试题要求以

5、“A famous Chinese I would like to interview”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:采访的对象、原因以及想提的问题。 语言知识的运用方面,试题对语言使用的考查比较全面,涉及多种时态、句式的应用。题中提示要点简单、明了,写作时应将重头戏放在遣词造句上,扬长避短,尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语或句型来灵活表达,避免单词、短语或句型的重复使用。 篇章结构方面,提纲内容零散,应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章一气呵成,有连贯性、逻辑性。 根据提纲中三个要点合理发挥想象力,灵活运用英语知识,用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,1.首先,开门见山,直接指出采访的对象

6、。参考结构:The person Id like to interview is.等。 2.其次,讲述采访的原因。参考短语:be interested in,learn a great deal from.等。 3.最后,说出想提的问题。参考结构:If I could interview.;Finally,I would like to ask a few questions.等,2016江西临川第二中学期中考试)假定你是小明,你在这次高考中被自己心仪的大学录取。请写信向恩师Mr Lee表示感谢,感谢在校期间他给予你的教导和帮助,并邀请他参加你的庆祝派对。内容包括以下要点: 1.被录取的心情,

7、对大学生活的憧憬; 2.感谢老师的教导; 3.邀请他参加8月20日的庆祝派对。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数,Dear Mr Lee, Im glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college,and particularly Im writing to express my sincere thanks to you. Thanks again,my beloved teacher.Wish you all

8、 the best. Yours sincerely, Xiao Ming,参考范文】 Dear Mr Lee, Im glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college,and particularly Im writing to express my sincere thanks to you. The time I received the offer,I knew all my efforts finally paid off.College life distinguis

9、hes a lot from senior school life.Undoubtedly,its another life bined with challenge and sweet memories.I cant wait to experience it. A million thanks to your encouraging words,which never fail to brighten my way ahead.There was a time when I was totally at a loss,doubting whether I could make any progress in study.Its you who helped cheer me up.Never will I forget what you saiddoors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action.Without your help,I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest.I really appreciate your instruction.And Il