《六级写作新片》PPT课件

1、Tips for CET-6 Writing,作文评分原则,1.CET作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（Reward Scores）,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 3.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数,作文评

2、分标准,本题满分为15分。 2.阅卷标准共分五等: 2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。 3. 评分标准： 5分: 基本切题. 表达思想不清楚, 连贯性差, 有较多的严 重语言错误。 8分:基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连 贯;语言错误 相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。 11分:切题. 表达思想清楚, 文字连贯, 但有少量语言错误 14分:切题. 表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本 上无语言错误，仅有个别小错,各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表于下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分,错误与误区写作不重要，可以在短期内提高。考前狂背所谓的经典和王牌书籍。只

3、背诵范文而不动手练习。只注重模板式的框架而忽视语言基本功的练习,Suggestions to Learners1. 扎实的语言基础2. 要多阅读3. 良好的观察与分析问题的习惯（为什么）4. 正确的写作练习方法,七步成章”写作法,第一步：审题 第二步：调用资源库 第三步：思维发散 （头脑风暴法 Brainstorming) 第四步：确定写作方向 第五步：列提纲 第六步：写作 第七步：检查,实战演练 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pir

4、ated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重 2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害 3. 我们应该怎么做,第一步：审题 第一段：“问题是什么” 简述目前盗版现象的严重性，第一句给出文章主题，然后用两个例子加以佐证。 第二段：“原因” 采用列举的方法详细分析造成这种现象的原因及危害，分别给出主题句，在此基础上进行扩展。 第三段：“解决办法” 针对以上所列举的盗版的危害提出具体的解决方案，并说明理由，在主题句后展开，最后一句话做出总结,第二步：调用资

5、源库 从题型上看，本文属于提纲式作文；从体裁上看，这是一篇说明性议论文。从题材上看，盗版问题属于社会热点问题，因此可以联想自己平时报纸、网络等媒体关于盗版及反盗版问题的报道,第三步：思维发散 头脑风暴法 脑子里可以想到的与盗版相关的画面和词汇： computer software, anti-virus software, books/ novels/ reference books， pirated CDs/ VCDs/ DVDs, hinder the development of film and publishing industry, run bankruptcy lower pri

6、ce, relatively poor quality, effective measures should be taken, law awareness, arouse public awareness, issue strict laws and regulations,第四步：确定写作方向 为了更加清楚地分析盗版现象的原因和危害，要把“造成这种现象的原因及危害”分成两段，分别加以描述,第五步：列提纲 A. Pirated products are very common in China B. The reasons for the phenomenon a. the price of

7、 legal products is high b. the price of pirated products is lower c. the local government C. Harm a. infringe intellectual property rights b. against the rules of the market D. Effective measures,第六步：写作 Say No to Pirated Products Nowadays, it is known to us all that China has become a place of rampa

8、nt pirated products, pirated CDs, pirated VCDs, pirated DVDs and pirated books, etc. they are available everywhere and we are so accustomed to the phenomenon that we wont feel it is strange to see pirated copies of the latest movies even before they are on shown in theatres. The reasons for the phen

9、omenon, which are obvious to all, can be listed as follows,First of all, the price of the legal products is so high that most people cannot afford it. Second, the price of the pirated products is much lower and in some cases, the pirated product doesnt necessarily mean low quality. The local governm

10、ent is also playing a part. Some officials give top priority to economy. They will tolerate, or even encourage, anything which can bring them financial income,But the pirated products really do much harm. First, they infringe intellectual property rights. Second, they offend against the rules of the market. As a result of piracy, companies investing in invention will inevitably run bankruptcy and our society will stop where it is. In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken: for one thing, it is high tim