高考英语书面表达文采飞扬超级技巧.ppt

1、怎 样 让 书 面 表 达 文 采 飞 扬,05高考英语书面表达评分原则4：,评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。,第5档（2025分）：, 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇, 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力,05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达:,假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。,请注意： 选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；

2、 2. 选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明理由； 3. 对活动内容提出至少一个建议或要求； 4. 词数：100左右； 5. 信的开关和结尾已给出。,05年高考英语书面表达范文(湖南),Dear Sir or Madame, Im very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because Ill have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems that all the activities you offer

3、are attractive and meaningful. But Id like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture.,With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and sprea

4、d Chinese culture. Its been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp? Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li Ping,05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文, Im glad to do , prefer to do, prepare oneself for, It seems that, all the activities （that ) you offer, attractive , me

5、aningful,But Id like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China, Id like to do , from which I can get more, With the coming of the 200

6、8 , be eager to do ,05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文, But ,05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文, spread Chinese culture, It be for sb. to do , organize a tour , So ,怎 样 让 书 面 表 达 文采飞扬, Im glad to do prefer to do prepare oneself for It seems that all the activities (that) you offer attractive , meaningful But Id like to do from which

7、 I can get more With the coming of the 2008 be eager to do So spread Chinese culture It be for sb. to do organize a tour ,1. 多实少虚 :,nice,2. 短语优先：,I cannot bear it. I want it.,generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital,I cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it.,弃

8、旧取新:,e all have the same chance. There are more opponents.,possess,opportunity,exist,学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,1. Its very dangerous for the students to go through the traffic.,2. Students are risking their lives when threading their way among cars.,社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。,1. The students should be taught more about t

9、he traffic safety.,2. And also it is of great use to strengthen the safety education over the students.,1.We all think he is a great man. 2. As a result the plan was a failure. 3. She went there in order to study music. 4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.,We all of him .,The plan to b

10、e a failure.,She went there studying music.,Our school twentysix classrooms.,think highly,turned out,for the purpose of,is made up of,5. You can find my house easily. 6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,Youll finding my house.,A good i

11、dea to me.,the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,have no trouble,A good idea suddenly me.,Thanks to,occurred,struck,运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。,1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. He came in and there

12、 was a baby in his arms. (用with结构), please give me an e-mail.,is that the little girl knows so many things.,On his arriving,What surprises him,He came in ,with a baby in his arms.,4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语） 5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)

13、 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that,，he cant get in touch with Tom,Not knowing his telephone number,he knew what had happened.,Tom likes singing songs, Mary.,so does,7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去

14、分词) 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使用句型结构） 9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构）,by many students, she walked out of the lab., a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.,he spoke, excited he felt.,Followed,The more the

15、 more,The weather being fine,一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如:,soon, immediately, suddenly, in front of, next to, on one hand, on the other hand, however, though, otherwise, thanks to, as a result (of), so long as, on condition that, even if/though, whats

16、 more, besides, to make the matter worse, Im afraid, you know, As we all know,1. This village is very small. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 .,This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has change

17、d a lot since 1978 .,2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.,All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education in it.,3. Yesterday， there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like

18、 a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.,Yesterday， a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street， because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.,La

19、st Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace . They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.,Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace when they saw a box fall off a passing truck. With

20、out delay, they shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.,语意要合情合理，过渡自然,语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安,语法要结构正确，无懈可击,语言要地道流畅，书写规范,联考书面表达欣赏：,Making Every Day Earth Day As can be seen from the brief dialogue, the earth suffers a lot from mans behaviour at present. There are many problems. For instance, we human beings are destroying too many trees, which leads to air pollution. Besides, polluted water is sent into rivers directly without being dealt with. Further more, few people are aware of such problems while most of