英语写作第十一讲 应用文(一)——书信、电子邮件

1、 题目要求题目要求 (2011全国卷全国卷)假定你是李华，你所喜爱的假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周周 报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编 写封信，内容主要包括：写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点：赞赏该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事介绍名人成功故事 3提出建议：提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意：注意： 1词数词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；左右，开头语己为你写好； 2可以适当增加细节，以

2、使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! _ _ _ _ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 技法指导技法指导 书信、电子邮件的写作是高考中出现频率最高的一种书信、电子邮件的写作是高考中出现频率最高的一种 题型。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、题型。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、 致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求 职信、读者请求的

3、解答信及其答复读者的信等。不论哪种职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。不论哪种 形式，一般都有固定的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作形式，一般都有固定的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作 模板，并能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你的模板，并能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你的 作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次较高的文章。作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次较高的文章。 下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模板，供大家写作时借鉴。下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模板，供大家写作时借鉴。 ， 学车问答 学车问题 开车问题 学车怎么办？ 驾校大全 中国驾校报名 考试 理论学习 地址 介绍 英格驾

4、考 驾考单机版软件 车类小游戏 学车小游戏大全 1投诉信投诉信 Dear _， My name is/I am _. I am writing to you for _. Firstly, _. Secondly, _. Thirdly, _. Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. To be honest/Honestly speaking, _. Therefore, I do require(hope) _. Thank you for your consider

5、ation. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 2建议信建议信 Dear _， I am _. Your collection of suggestion on _ is _. As is known, _. My suggestions are _： First, _. (People can _.) Second, (to make economic profits, ) _. Third, _. (As many of them _.) I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to

6、 discuss this matter with you to further details(Or：Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated) Good luck with your _(祝愿祝愿) Yours sincerely, Li Ming 3求职信求职信 Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(报纸名称报纸名称) of _(广告发布时广告

7、发布时 间间) I am _ from _.As a/an _， I have been _.Besides, I won _ in _. If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at _. I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerel

8、y, Li Ming 4邀请信邀请信 Dear _， How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a _(内容内容) at/in _(地点地点) on _(时间时间)We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at _(具体时间具体时间). This will be followed by a _(进一步的安排进一步的安排)At around _(时间时间)，_(另一个安排另一个安排) Ring m

9、e up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it.My phone number is _.Looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 5感谢信感谢信 Dear _， I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感谢的原因感谢的原因) If it had not been for your assistance in _(对方给你的具体帮助对方给你的具体帮助)，I f

10、ear that I would have been _(没有对方帮助的后果没有对方帮助的后果) Everyone agrees that it was you who _(给出给出 细节细节)Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 6道歉信道歉信 Dear _， I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因道歉的原因) The reason is that _(介绍原因介绍原因). Once again,

11、I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 第一步构建框架，清晰行文第一步构建框架，清晰行文 谋篇布局谋篇布局 黄金模板黄金模板 Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! Im _(介绍自己介绍自己). I like it very much for_(两个理由两个理由). F

12、irst, it covers _(优势之一优势之一) so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn _(了了 解的事情解的事情) during the week. _(优势之二优势之二) are the success stories of worldfamous people which help me _(对自己的帮助对自己的帮助). As a young student, I suggest _ (建议建议) to guide us in our English learning, and I hope _ (希望希望) Since

13、rely yours, Li Hua 第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章 1首先，它兼顾国内外新闻，因此，我随便翻几页就可以首先，它兼顾国内外新闻，因此，我随便翻几页就可以 了解到本周发生的重要事件。了解到本周发生的重要事件。 Firstly, there are both national and international news on it. So when I turn the pages simply, I can know all important things happened during the week. First, it covers both nat

14、ional and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. 2作为一名年轻的学生，我建议作为一名年轻的学生，我建议Global Mirror刊登一些刊登一些 指导英语学习的文章。指导英语学习的文章。 As a young student, I make a suggestion that Global Mirror publish some articles that can guid

15、e us in our English learning. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning. 第三步串句成文，保证流畅第三步串句成文，保证流畅 Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly f

16、or the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people, which help me understand how a person can w

17、ork hard to make the world a better place. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua (2011山东高考山东高考)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月上个月 来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演 讲比赛讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面，你在资料搜集、语言运用等