英语四级--高分作文思路及模板

1、问题解决型写作思路基本框架描述问题段主题句- 扩展句一（问题危害/原因/表现一）- 扩展句二（问题危害/ 原因/表现二）-结尾句说明方法段主题句- 扩展句一（方法一）- 扩展句二（方法二）-扩展句三（方法三）- 结尾句总结观点段过渡句- 扩展句（“我”的建议或看法）- 结尾句主题句- 扩展句一（“我”的理由一）- 扩展句二（“我”的理由二）- 结尾句结构模板1 recently, there has been a discussion about 总述该问题。2危害/原因一。 3 additionally, 问题危害/ 原因二. 4 therefore, it is high time tha

2、t 解决该问题。5 the following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. / some effective measures have been taken to解决该问题 . / many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. 6 firstly,/first of all, 方法一/因素一。7 secondly/ in addition, 方法二/因素二。8 thirdly/ besides/ moreover, 方法三/因素三. 9 only through these ways / only in this

3、way 该问题才能够解决。10 it is no doubt that解决该问题的意义. 11 as for me, “我”的建议或看法. 12 总结观点。结构模板1 nowadays it is generally accepted that 总述该问题。2表现/作用一。 3 additionally, 表现/作用二. 4. therefore, how to 总述该问题 is worth paying more attention to.5 the following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. / some effective measures have b

4、een taken to解决该问题 . / many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. 6 firstly,/first of all, 方法一/因素一。7 secondly/ in addition, 方法二/因素二。8 thirdly/ besides/ moreover, 方法三/因素三. 9 as for me/ as far as i am concerned, “我”的建议或看法. 10 “我”的理由一. 11 besides/ in addition, “我”的理由二。12 总结观点。示范作文reduce waste on cam

5、pus1) 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重2) 浪费的危害3) 从我做起，杜绝浪费1 recently, there has been a discussion about waste on campus. 2 it is obvious that a great loss has been caused by wasting precious resources, such as water and electricity. 3 additionally, our waste adds our parents and society a burden. 4 therefore, it is hi

6、gh time that more attention was paid to how to solve this problem. （描述问题段）5 the following ways can be adopted to reduce waste on campus. 6 firstly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes and dishes. 7 secondly, in our daily life, we must learn to be economical and

7、 only buy what we really need. 8 thirdly, we should turn off the light when leaving dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity. 9 only through these ways can waste on campus be eliminated in the near future. （说明方法段）10 it is no doubt that reduction of waste is of significance to our whole society.

8、 11 as for me, the cultivation of good habit of thrift is most important for all of us. 12 every college student should join in the efforts to combat the waste on campus. （总结观点段）how to succeed in a job interview1) 面试在求职过程中的作用2) 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是1 it is generally accepted that a job i

9、nterview is indispensable in the process of jobhunting. 2 it is obvious that it is a good chance to display talented performance. 3 additionally, if a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leaves a good impression on the interviewer, he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for

10、 by many applicants. 4 therefore, how to succeed in a job interview is worth paying more attention to. （描述问题段）5 many a factor plays an important role in a successful interview. 6 first of all, interviewees should dress neatly and properly since the first impression is always where we start. 7 in add

11、ition, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about job-related areas. 8 moreover, a really impressive job seeker must convey a sense of self-confidence. （说明方法段）9 as far as i am concerned, the importance of an interview cant be overemphasized. 10 if th

12、e interviewee presents his most attractive qualities during an interview, he will most probably obtain the job he has been dreaming of. 11 besides, opportunity is for those who are well-prepared. 12 all in all, it is necessary that we learn some points to perform better in a job interview. （总结观点段）tr

13、affic in the city1) 交通是现代城市的一大问题2) 污染和堵车时交通问题的两大体现3) 解决交通问题的手段1 nowadays it is generally accepted that traffic is one of the greatest problems of a modern city. 2 as moreand more people buy their own cars, air pollution as well as noise pollutions becomes more and more serious. 3 additionally, roads

14、 are packed with cars, buses and bicycles so that traffic jam is very common. 4 therefore, how to deal with traffic problem is worth paying more attention to. 5the following ways can be adopted. 6 firstly, more streets and roads should be constructed. 7 secondly, the private car ownership should be

15、limited. 8 thirdly, underground train and city train should be developed quickly. 9 as for me, the number of private cars should be put under control. 10 more cars mean more pollution. 11 in addition, more cars are a great challenge to roads, for the building of roads is not as speedy as the increas

16、ing of cars. 12 in a word, it is advisable that less motor vehicle be used. how to eliminate fake diplomas1) 目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜2) 这种现象造成的危害3) 我们应该怎么做1 nowadays it is generally accepted that the flooding of fake diplomas is getting very serious. 2 it is reported that fake diplomas are very common in the job

17、 market. 3 all kinds of fake diplomas or certificates are being offered. 4 special attention should be paid to the fact that fake diplomas are bringing great damage. 5 on one hand, employers may recruit employees who are not qualified for a certain post, causing their company a great loss. 6 on the

18、other hand, its unfair that one fails to get his job just because his rival has produced a fake diploma or certificate. 7 therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to stop fake diplomas from spreading. 8 many a way can be adopted to eliminate fake diplomas. 9 first of all, companies

19、 and universities should have a close contact so that the fake diplomas cannot play tricks. 10 in addition, the one who fabricates the fake diplomas should be severely punished by law and totally exposed through media. 11 moreover, we should keep detained records of the diploma holders and issue the

20、 diplomas with fake-proof seal. 12 only through these ways can this problem be tackled.on a harmonious dormitory life1) 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性2) 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活 3) “我”的看法1 recently, there has been a discussion about a harmonious dormitory life, which is important to us college students and benefits all the member

21、s. 2 in a harmonious environment, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.3 additionally, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. 4 therefore, it is high time that efforts were driven to boost the harmony in college residences.5 the following ways can be adopted to create and

22、 maintain a harmonious dormitory life. 6 first of all, we have to evaluate our life style and try to get rid of our bad habits, if there are any. 7 secondly, when an annoying situation arises , we have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. 8 thirdly, we should learn to share with each other

23、and make good friends. 9 only through these ways can we build a harmonious dormitory life.10 it is no doubt that dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life and no one can ignore it. 11 as for me, consideration for others is an effective solution to conflicts in life. 12 in conclusion, a

24、 harmonious dormitory environment plays a positive role in college students studies and lives, and we must try our best to keep it well. 现象解释型写作思路基本框架描述图表段主题句- 扩展句（描述图表数据）-结尾句说明原因段主题句- 扩展句一（原因一）- 扩展句二（原因二）-扩展句三（原因三）- 结尾句总结观点段主题句- 扩展句一（影响/问题/理由一）- 扩展句二（影响/问题/理由二）- 结尾句描述现象段主题句- 扩展句一（现象表现一）-扩展句二（现象表现二）

25、-结尾句说明原因段主题句- 扩展句一（原因一）- 扩展句二（原因二）-扩展句三（原因三）- 结尾句总结观点段主题句- 扩展句一（影响/理由一）- 扩展句二（影响/理由二）- 结尾句结构模板 11 from the chart/ graph / table / picture, we clearly learn that 总述现象，which has aroused great / common concern. 1 / according to the chart, it is clear that 图表内容概括. 2 what impresses us most is 图表中重点数据. /2

26、 the chart / graph /table /picture indicates 图表数据一，while 图表数据二.3 there are many reasons accounting for 现象或变化. / 3 many reasons contribute to 现象概括. 4 first of all/ to begin with, 原因一. 5 what is more/ moreover, 原因二. 6 in addition/ besides, 原因三. 7 therefore/ as a result, 总结原因导致的结果.8 as to me/ as far as

27、 i am concerned, “我”的观点. 9 for one thing / on one hand, 影响/问题/理由一. 10 for another/ on the other hand, 影响/问题/理由二. 11 thus/ in brief/ to conclude/ in conclusion/ in a word, 总结观点. 结构模板 21 总体现象 has been brought into focus. /1 总体现象，which has aroused great concern. 2 现象表现或变化. 3 in addition, 进一步阐述现象。4 ther

28、e are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. /4 the reasons/ factors 影响该现象 are varied. 5 among all these reasons/ factors, 原因一plays a very important role .6 阐述原因一. 7 what is more/ moreover, 原因二. 8 in addition/ besides, 原因三.9 as to me/ as far as i am concerned, “我”的观点. 10 for one thing / on one

29、 hand, 具体的看法或理由一. 11 for another/ on the other hand, 进一步说明看法/理由二. 12 thus/ in brief/ to conclude/ in conclusion/ in a word, 总结观点.unban greenbelt construction30000 26709.5725000 21911.9320000 15000 12917.611000050008819.269853.260 1998 1999 2000 200120021） 上图所示为1998-2002全国城市绿化资金支出情况，请描述其变化2） 请说明发生这些变

30、化的原因3） 你认为这样的变化是否合理，为什么1 according to the chart, it is clear that the national expenses on urban greenbelt construction in china from 1998 to 2002 changed a lot. 2 the chart shows in 1998, 8819.23 million rmb was spent on urban greenbelt construction, while by the year 2002, the national expenses on

31、 urban construction in china had risen to over 26709.57 million rmb. （描述图表）3 many reasons contribute to this change. 4 to begin with, the natural environment has become worse than before and the climate has also been affected. 5 moreover, the government has realized that they can no longer ignore th

32、e deterioration of the environment and decided to take some measures. 6 in addition, the public are paying more and more attention to environmental problems. 7 as a result, more and more attention and money are paid to the urban greenbelt construction. （说明原因）8 as to me, those changes are reasonable

33、and welcome. 9 first of all, if the government does not pay attention tot the changes of environment, they might never spend much money on it. 10 besides, these changes demonstrate that the government has realized that we have one environment only; if it is ruined, we would be nowhere. 11 to conclud

34、e, i have the confidence to believe the environment around us will become better and better. （总结观点）示范作文1） 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师2） 学生选择教师时所考虑的因素3） 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题students selecting their lecturers1 students selecting their lecturers has been brought into focus. 2 nowadays, many universities entit

35、le their students to choose freely teachers for courses, which is welcomed by most students. 3 in addition, teachers have also paid much attention to it since it involves their career fate.（描述现象）4 the factors which will influence the students choosing a teacher are varied. 5 among all these factors,

36、 a teachers professional knowledge and ability play a very important role. 6 that is a precondition for a good teacher since students choose his course to learn knowledge. 7 moreover, quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential. 8 besides, a teachers humor sense is also an i

37、mportant factor many students will consider.（说明原因）9 as far as i am concerned, free choosing of teachers has its disadvantages as well as its advantages. 10 for one thing, it can provide a good chance for teacher to prove his ability, and give students more initiative in learning. 11 for another, how

38、ever, since it is a free choice, few excellent teachers will become the focus of most students choosing, which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously. 12 in a word, both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration. （总结观点）income so

39、urces between chinese students and american studentssources of incomepercentage of total incomeparents part-time jobfellowship or scholarshipamerican students50%35%15%chinese students90%5%5%1） 根据上表，简要描述中国学生和美国学生收入来源的不同2） 请分析导致这种差异的原因3） 说明自己的观点income sources between chinese students and american stud

40、ents1 from the table, we clearly learn that there is a great difference between the income sources of chinese students and those of american students, which has aroused common concern. 2 what impresses us most is chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part-time jobs and 5% from fellowship

41、 or scholarship while american students 35% and 15%. （描述图表段）3 there are many reasons accounting for this difference. 4 to begin with, different social and family values lead to the difference. 5 that is to say, chinese students tend to form a habit of asking for money from their parents while americ

42、an students are likely to form more of a sense of economic independence. 6 moreover, developed america provides more part-time jobs than china. 7 in addition, chinese universities do not provide sufficient scholarship while it is quite a different story in american. 8 as a result, the difference fol

43、lows up. （说明原因段）9 as to me, this difference concerning the income sources is indicating something necessary to do. 10 for one thing, chinese students have to realize the necessity of self-dependence. 11 for another, more opportunities should be provided for them to hold part-time jobs. 12 to conclud

44、e, it is high time that chinese students went out of the ivory tower to become more independent. （总结观点段）the adaptation of the classics1） 近来，许多经典名著被改写成各种版本以供大众娱乐2） 这种现象产生的原因3）经典名著被改写可能产生的问题the adaptation of the classics1 recently many classics are being adapted in many ways, which has aroused great c

45、oncern. 2 in those adapted works, all plots are changed and all characters become somewhat watered clown. 3 in addition, some familiar characters expressing the good wishes of our common people have been distorted.（描述现象段）4 there are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 5 among all these reas

46、ons, readers preference plays a very important role. 6 that is a precondition for the market of the adaptation of the classics. 7 what is more, the concept of creativity is prevailing in every aspect. 8 in addition, the improved living standard enables people to pursue and enjoy more choices of ente

47、rtainments including the adaptations of the classics.（说明原因段）9 as far as i am concerned, the adaptation of the classics does more harm than good. 10 for one thing, since the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation, the act of adapting may ruin its charm. 11 for

48、 another, those adapted works will affect childrens outlook on life, who are the future of the nation and always believe what is in the books is the truth. 12 in a word, the real classics should be presented on the bookshelves to lead people to appreciate the real art. （总结观点）对比选择型基本框架提出观点段主题句- 扩展句一（

49、观点一）-扩展句二（观点二）论证观点段一扩展句一（观点一的理由一）- 扩展句二（观点一的理由二）- 主题句论证观点段二扩展句一（观点二的理由一）- 扩展句二（观点二的理由二）- 主题句总结观点段主题句- 扩展句一（“我”的理由一）- 扩展句二（“我”的理由二）- 结尾句提出观点段主题句- 扩展句一（观点一）-扩展句二（理由一）-扩展句三（理由二）对比论证段主题句（观点二）-扩展句一（理由一）-扩展句二（理由二）总结观点段主题句- 扩展句一（“我”的理由一）- 扩展句二（“我”的理由二）- 结尾句结构模板 1 when it comes to 事物/问题，there is no complete

50、 agreement among people. 2 some people take it for granted that 一种观点. 3 however, others maintain that 另一种观点. 4 those people who hold the former opinion believe 观点一的理由一. 5 in addition, 观点一的理由二. 6 therefore, 总结观点一. 7 however, still others advocate the latter opinion because they hold 观点二的理由一. 8 beside

51、s, they argue that 观点二的理由二. 9 so, 总结观点二. 10 weighing up these two arguments, “我”的看法. 11 for one thing, 个人看法的依据一. 12 for another, 个人看法的依据二. 13 taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/ i may reasonably conclude that 重申观点. 1 when asked about / when it comes to 事物/问题，different people will

52、offer different opinions. 2 some people take it for granted that 观点一. 3 in their opinion, 观点一的理由一. 4 besides, 观点一的理由二.5 however，others hold 观点二. 6 they maintain观点二的理由一. 7 and观点二的理由二. 8 weighing up these two arguments, “我”的观点. 9 for one thing/on one hand, 理由一. 10 for another/ on the other hand, 理由二.1

53、1 for instance，举例说明理由二. 12 therefore, as stated above, 总结全文.示范作文should the university campus be open to tourists?1) 名校校园正成为旅游新热点2) 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同3) 我认为1 when it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, as more and more people list famous universities as tourist attractio

54、ns，there is no complete agreement among people. 2 some people take it for granted that university campus should embrace tourists across the country. 3 however, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists. （提出观点段） 4 those people who hold the former opinion believe that ref

55、using tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openness. 5 in addition, they also argue that no university has the right to reject tax payers to enter its grounds because it is public land.（对比论证段一） 6 however, still others advocate the latter opinion because they hold that too many

56、 tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university.7 besides, they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students normal study.8 so, it is unadvisable to admit tourists to visit university campus freely.（对比论证段二）9 weighing up these two arguments, i prefer the former opinion. 10 for one thing, it can enable high school students to get more information about the university and have better preparation for their choosing to get into the university. 11 for another, a university should be an open place and impart the spirit of openn