中考英语复习《书面表达》指导课 (共34张PPT)

1、初中英语写作指导课初中英语写作指导课 Tips on making your articles better Writing articles is just like building houses. 健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整

2、的健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告调查报告, ,并提倡大家进并提倡大家进 行假日休闲。行假日休闲。 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work Style (体裁体裁)：_ Person(人称人称)：_ Tense (时态时态): _ 调查报告，记叙文调查报告，记叙文 第三人称第三人称 一般现在时一般现在时 1.1. 审审(search):(search): A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents

3、. A few people work. Enjoy your holiday. stay at home work visit friends or parents travel 2.2.列列(list)(list) 根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点简单的句子列出文章的要点。 A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few peopl

4、e work. 3.3.加加(add)(add) 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整，突出主题。 2.The body 1.The beginning How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. 3.The ending Come and enjoy your holiday. People who relax well work well. 4 4. .美（美（beautifybeautify） 选好词句，美化美化文章。 在有把握的情况下展示 自己的语言功底。 方法一方法一: :妙用关联词妙用

5、关联词 1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示转折表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,anyway 3.表示因果表示因果: because,so,therefore,since,as a result 4.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, while, on one handon the other hand 5.表示解释表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other wor

6、ds, to tell the truth 6.表示顺序表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, finally, in the end, from then on 7.表示强调表示强调: besides, especially, actually, in fact 8.表达自己观点：表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion 9.表示结论表示结论:in a word, generally speaking, in short _ I am tired, I keep on working till mid

7、night. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. ThoughAlthough instead like First Next FinallyAt last How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is

8、 our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your holiday. People who relax well work well. 善用关联词，使文章更流畅。善用关联词，使文章更流畅。 方法二方法二: :活用多种句

9、型活用多种句型 A. A lot of people travel. B. Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. A . Some people visit their friends and parents B . To visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. 扩展润色，使句子更生动扩展润色，使句子更生动 Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or sur

10、fing the Internet to have a good rest. 方法三方法三: :妙用妙用Proverb （谚语）（谚语）/saying Come and enjoy your holiday. People who relax well work well. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻 Pr

11、overb （谚语）（谚语） Enjoy some proverbs 1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 三思而后行。三思而后行。 熟能生巧。熟能生巧。 有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。 失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。 5.Failure is the mother of success. 6.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 7.All roads lead to Rome. 8.Never too old

12、 to learn. 9. Every coin has two sides. 每枚硬币都有两面;凡事皆有好坏 Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves. Dont wait. Join us now! Lets take action right now! Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! If everyone tries to

13、 protect the environment, the world will be a better place! We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surf

14、ing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your holiday. People who relax well work well. samples 5.Check5.Check uSpelling(拼写拼写) uTense(时态时态) uGrammar (语法语法) uHandwriting(书写书写) uPunctuation marks(标

15、点符号标点符号) 查：通览全文仔细检查查：通览全文仔细检查 Its your turn. 学习努力，积极参加课外活动学习努力，积极参加课外活动 作业拖拉，熬夜看电视剧作业拖拉，熬夜看电视剧 向明星学习，为实现梦想而努力向明星学习，为实现梦想而努力 注意力集中在明星上，影响学习注意力集中在明星上，影响学习 (发挥一点发挥一点) ) ( (发挥一点发挥一点) ) 过去 我的建议 我的观点 现在 要求：1.词数90左右。文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确、上下文连贯。 3. 文章不得使用真是人名、校名。 假如你是李丽，你的朋友Amy最近沉迷于追星，为此你很担心。

16、请根据下表提示给Amy写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。 学习努力，积极参加课外活动学习努力，积极参加课外活动 作业拖拉，熬夜看电视剧作业拖拉，熬夜看电视剧 向明星学习，为实现梦想而努力向明星学习，为实现梦想而努力 注意力集中在明星上，影响学习注意力集中在明星上，影响学习 (发挥一点发挥一点) ) ( (发挥一点发挥一点) ) 过去 我的建议 我的观点 现在 假如你是李丽，你的朋友Amy最近沉迷于追星，为此你很担心。 请根据下表提示给Amy写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。 要求：1.词数90左右。文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确、上下文连贯。 3. 文章不得使用

17、真是人名、校名。 Person 人称 Tense 时态 Genre 体裁 主要时态：一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时 Analyze the topic(审题） past present my opinions my advice：_ 1._ 2._ 1._ 2._ 3._ Make an outline(列提纲) 1.work hard 2._ spelling 单词拼写单词拼写 tense 时态时态 word numbers 字数字数 Punctuations 标点标点 personal pronouns 人称人称 Attention！ handwriting 字迹字迹 paragrap

18、h 段落段落 Dear Amy, Im sorry to hear that you have been crazy about stars recently. You used to work hard and always took an active part in outdoor activities. However, you have changed a lot since you began to have your favorite stars. Its difficult for you to hand in homework on time. Also，you often

19、quarrel with your parents. sample writing In my opinion, stars have made a great difference to our study and life. First, we should learn from the stars to make our dream come true by working hard. Second, paying more attention to stars may have a bad effect on our study. Whats more, its a waste of

20、time to spend much money on stars posters, the concert tickets and so on. As your best friend, I really hope that you can put all your effort into your study. Im sure if you work hard, you can be your own star one day. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Li Li 评价评价: 请对照下面这

21、个表格评价同桌的作文。请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。 1. fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理: (Yes or No) Beginning ( ) key sentences( ) linking word( ) ending ( ) Choice of words and sentences: The number of spelling mistakes ( ) The number of grammar mistakes ( ) Does he write good words or sentence? ( ) 3.Others:_ A ( 13-15 分分 )

22、 :包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚 B ( 11-12 分分 ) :基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达 基本清楚基本清楚 C ( 8-10分分 ) :内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意 D (6-7分分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达E (3-5 ) :只抄了提只抄了提 示词，错误百出，不知所云示词，错误百出，不知所云F ( 0-2分分 ) :白卷或文不对题白卷

23、或文不对题 得分：得分：_ 评价人评价人:_ 档次（分数）档次（分数）评分标准评分标准 第五档第五档 (1513分分) 很好地完成了规定的写作任务。很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有内容要点包含所有内容要点，结构，结构 完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯。完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯。使用较为丰富的语法使用较为丰富的语法 结构和词汇结构和词汇。语法结构和词汇错误极少语法结构和词汇错误极少，格式正确，书写，格式正确，书写 规范。规范。 第四档第四档 (1210分分) 较好地完成了规定的写作任务。较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有内容要点基本上包含所有内容要点， 结构较为完整，语句完整，意思清楚。结构较为完整，语句完整，意思清楚。语法和词汇错误较语法和词汇错误较 少少，格式基本正确，书写较为规范。，格式基本正确，书写较为规范。 第三档第三档 (97分分) 基本上完成了规定的写作任务。基本上完成了规定的写作任务。包含主要内容要点，结构包含主要内容要点，结