高中英语写作要领与技巧

1、 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 一、审题 抄 改 连 扩 抓 书面 表达 3 3 审审: : 审文体审文体 审要求审要求 审人称审人称 2007浙江浙江高考高考 在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用 英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕 “ “ How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only , or in both English and Chinese? ” ” 这个问题，参考这个问题，参考 所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英所给要点

2、，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英 语短文语短文 授课形式一：授课形式一： 只用英语只用英语 授课形式二：授课形式二： 英语、汉语兼用英语、汉语兼用 优点：有助于提高优点：有助于提高 听说能力等听说能力等 缺憾：不易听懂等缺憾：不易听懂等 结论：结论： 优点：易于理解等优点：易于理解等 缺憾：英语氛围不等缺憾：英语氛围不等 结论：结论： 注意：注意：1.词数词数100-120, 短文开头已给出短文开头已给出(不计词数不计词数). 2.参考词汇参考词汇: atmosphere 氛围氛围 I prefer my English classes to be taught in 某考生某考生 I prefe

3、r my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. Now in our English classes, with how to be taught we have two choices: In English only, or in both English and Chinese, and its all has its advantages and disadvantages. If in English only, can make our listening and speaking more good,

4、and what worse, we will hard to understand our class. But if in both English and Chinese, also understand will be more easily, the English atmosphere is less than in English only. In my opinion, we study English to understand it is the most important. After we study and understand it good, listening

5、 or speaking will be easy. So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better.11分分 二、抓要点 确定主要行为 What happened? 抄 改 连 扩 审 书面 表达 时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此 人们评价不一。请你对此现象向人们评价不一。请你对此现象向21st Century 21st Century 投稿，投稿， 谈谈个人看法：谈谈个人看法： 要求要求:1:1词数：词

6、数：120120词左右。词左右。 2 2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. . Practice: 1.提供机会提供机会 2.带来收益带来收益 3.迎合追求迎合追求 4.保证品位保证品位 5.产生反感产生反感 6.浪费精力浪费精力 7.你的观点你的观点 列出要点列出要点 三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what? 抄 改 连 抓 审 书面 表达 In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards short messages. 四、连句成文 正确使用过渡词，使 行文流畅

7、。并注意段 与段的衔接。 抄 改扩 抓 审 书面 表达 a. 表示列举和顺序用表示列举和顺序用 firstly, secondly, last, then, finally, next, such as，after that b. 表示意义增补和引申用表示意义增补和引申用also, besides, above all, whats more / whats worse c. 表示结果用表示结果用 so, therefore, as a result, sothat d. 表示意义转折用表示意义转折用 instead, however, but e. 表示解释说明用表示解释说明用 in oth

8、er words, that is to say f. 表示概括和总结用表示概括和总结用 then, in all, as we know g. 表示时间顺序用表示时间顺序用 now, at first, when, after h. 表示并列关系用表示并列关系用 or, and, also, too, i. 表示条件关系用表示条件关系用 as (so) long as, if, unless j. 表示举例用表示举例用 for example, for instance, such as k. 表示让步关系用表示让步关系用 though, even if , however, as 1.过好

9、行文逻辑关过好行文逻辑关 2.2.用活语言，准确生动用活语言，准确生动 使用常用高级语法:非谓语动词，with复合结 构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语 从句，状语从句等 The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. a. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (so that/sothat/suchthat) Not only is he a famous singer but also he has written some interesting b

10、ooks. b. He is a famous singer. He has also written some interesting books. (not onlybut also) c. My brother was riding a bike. I sat on the seat behind him. (with sb. doing) My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him. Not having received his letter he decided to write to he

11、r again. d. He hadnt received a letter . He decided to write to her again. (not having done) e. We are glad to see such great changes in our school life. ( how ) How glad we are to see such great changes in our school life. 五、查错改错 注意时态、标点和拼写 是否正确,词数是否符合 要求等。 抄 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 六、誊写 修改无误后，认真规范 地誊写在规定的地方

12、。 卷面不工整要扣分! 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 4 4 规范三写规范三写：大小写大小写, ,拼写拼写, ,书写书写 Make what you have written clear enough!Make what you have written clear enough! 文不对题（文体格式不规范） 离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该 说的说的太多） 词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄 袭试卷上的材料） 病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法错 误） 卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头 满篇飞，这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌!） 前车之鉴! 一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表

13、达，一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表达， 给阅卷老师的印象应该是：给阅卷老师的印象应该是： 语意要合情合理，过渡自然；语意要合情合理，过渡自然； 语句要有简有繁，随语句要有简有繁，随“意意”而安；而安； 语法要结构正确，无懈可击；语法要结构正确，无懈可击； 语言要地道流畅，书写规范。语言要地道流畅，书写规范。 目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。 请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。 注意：注意：1. 1. 字数字数120120左右左右; ; 不要逐

14、字翻译。不要逐字翻译。 2. 2. 短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long Practice Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have

15、little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lost interest in their studies. Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge, so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence / affect their studies. , it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so tha