2020托福写作怎样让自己的文章更有吸引力

1、2020托福写作怎样让自己的文章更有吸引力托福写作怎样让自己的文章更有吸引力托福作文有特色能带来哪些好处？很多人可能会问，为什么我要让自己的托福作文写得更有特色呢?在小编看 来，如果你对自己的分数有比较高的追求，不满足于只拿到20分左右的成绩， 想要再提升一下得分，那么托福作文势必就要写得更出彩才行。另外，对于某些 学校和专业来说，托福作文的单科成绩也是比较重要的参考标准，都说作文最能 体现一个人的实际语言水平，这点同样适用于托福作文成绩。因此，想要提升托 福作文分数，拿到至少25分以上的成绩，那么写出独具特色的托福作文就很有 必要了。清晰明确的文章结构让文章一读就懂托福两篇作文中，综合写作其

2、实是没太大发挥空间的，大家只要把听到和读 过的材料内容统合起来表达出来就算完成了任务。能够做文章的其实还是独立写 作。而从文章要求上来说，独立写作其实就类似于大家以前考语文时候写过的议 论文，而且是议论文当中的立论文。对于这类文章来说，逻辑推理和论述结构可 谓重中之重。想要让自己的观点旗帜鲜明地竖立起来，想要让自己的论述具有说 服力条理更清晰，那么考生在文章结构上就需要做到清晰明确一口了然，要让考 官一眼就能看懂你的观点在哪里了，侮个分段的论点在哪里，乂举出了哪些例子。 胡乱堆砌材料凑字数或者一大堆空话没有实际内容干货，这些只会让你的文章给 人留下负面印象造成扣分。因此，大家在写托福独立作文时

3、，一定要注意把自己 的文章结构搭建好。考生如果担心自己在写文章时会出现结构上面的问题，不妨 在动笔前先在草稿纸上大致列个提纲，这样之后写起来就不容易出现跑题等问题 了，文章结构也能得到保证。精彩地道的遣词造句提升考官阅读体验现在的人很讲究用户体验，也就是使用产品服务时能够给用户带来舒适愉悦 的感受，而在小编看来，其实写托福作文也要考虑到考官的阅读体验，一篇枯燥 平庸，句式单调用词重复的文章肯定不会给考官带来太好的体验。因此，大家就 需要在写作的遣词造句上做一些努力。词汇方面建议大家少用难词偏词或是口语 化的词汇，多使用一些经常见诸报端杂志上的书面用词，同时注意不要重复用词, 多用各类同近义词来

4、展现自己的词汇量基础和用词功底。而在句式上也是一样， 从头到尾都是清一色的简单句肯定是不行的，但强行加入大量长难句也会影响体 验，小编建议大家长短句结合使用，多用一些不太复杂但能体现句式功底的从句 是比较理想的选择。另外遣词造句都要地道，各种一看就是chinglish中式英文 的表达一定要尽量避免。这样一来就能营造岀一种nativespeaker写的文章的感觉，考官的阅读体验得到提升，作文评价和分数也就能随 之水涨船高了。托福考试作文独立写作范文：在决定长期工作前年轻人应尝试不同工作Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Y

5、oung people shouldtry several different jobs before they take a long term career(A/D) Young people should try different jobs before they take a long-termcareer题目大意：在决定长期工作之前，年轻人应该尝试不同的工作。此题并不难, 思路也很容易想。建议，选择同意，理山一可以获得多种技能，理由二可以找到 自己最合适的职业。写作参考一：Currently, with the competition in the job market becom

6、ing increasinglyfierce, the job-hunting has been brought under the spotlight of the mass mediaThe senior and experts strongly proposed that young people should try differentjobs before taking a lifelong career, while the youngsters may hold the oppositeviewpoint As far as I am concerned, the former

7、view is more reasonable, with the reasons listed below.In the first place, different jobs will equip the young with multi pie skills and professional knowledge in various fields As we know, the completionof every job, simple or complex, requires differing abilities and expertise incertain area As a

8、result, young adults who take different jobs will grasp theknowledge in a new area and increase their potential capability to a large extent, thus having the well-rounded development To be specific, to be a waiteror waitress in a restaugnt enables us to cultivate interpersonal skills sincewe may enc

9、ounter tons of people from all walks of life Being a manager willhelp to improve the organizational skills and leadership, because the successfulrunning of a department depends on the ability of leaders Undoubtedly, thosepeople with more than one skills will have an edge over other competitors in th

10、efuture job marketIn addition, another conspicuous benefit of taking different jobs before you settle on the lifelong career is that the young have the chances to find the most suitable position. It is never uncommon to hear that many employees who have worked for three or more years complain that t

11、he work they take is not what they are good at or what they like Consequently, their enthusiasm or passionfor their jobs is relatively in a low level, which has negative influence on thedevelopment of themselves and their company The best way to deal with the aboveproblem is to allow youngsters to t

12、ry different types of work at first and takethe one which suits them most The experience of my friend, Kozer, is a goodcase in point After graduating from the department of foreign languages inBeijing University, Kozer was recruited by a Foreign Trade Corporation due tohis excellent English Unfortun

13、ately, he was too introverted to communicate wellwith strangers, especially with foreigners Then he resigned from the positionand became a teacher in a high school The same problem occurred again.Finally,realizing his own strengths and weaknesses from the above failures, he foundthat the most suitab

14、le position for himself was to be an editor for China Daily,the most famous English newspaper, because there was no need to talk with manypeople in this jobAdmittedly, some opponents may assert that it is not necessary for young adults to try different jobs, because it will waste lots of time and ev

15、en makethem miss out some opportunities. However, the above reasoning is far from the truth To illustrate, only when we have experienced several different kinds of work can we find the one which most fits for us. So the time spent on every tryis worthwhileIn a nutshell, it is safe to conclude that y

16、oung people should try different jobs before they take a long-term career, in order to gain more skills and find the most suitable position. (By Zhaobo, 548words)写作参考二：The benefits and drawbacks of job hopping have never failed to be the center of debate among employees and employers, and human reso

17、urce managers of corporations While some people believe that constant job hopping brings more benefits than pitfalls, others state that the disadvantages of switching between jobs before settling down greatly outweigh the benefits Personally, I think trying out different positions is beneficial to o

18、ne s future career based on the following reasonsAdmittedly, switching between jobs will make your employers suspicious about your judgment and question your commitment and loyalty to thecompany, however, the taking different jobs gives a professional countless benefits, likediverse background, broa

19、dened social network, better compensation and benefits,etcFirst off, more job experience provides an individual exposure to differentindustries and more professional experience, eventually it is conducive forsomeone to find his or her real expectation and ultimate career goal in the longrun. In a sm

20、all company, employees might have intimate and close friendshipswith each other, and there is no standard procedure of daily business operation.However, in a colossal corporation, employees have a clear professional boundaryand they have to follow strict regulations and procedures when conducting bu

21、siness Having a chance to work in both small and big companies will helpindividuals to know which type of company fits them best and they can choosetheir future career according to their preference Also, having working experience in different industries and various sized companies makes the employee

22、s more flexible and adaptable in distinctive working environmentsFuture employees will value those who have exposure to a variety of challengesand can bring new ideas and changes to the company.Additionally, working in different companies and industries gives an individual more opportunities to expl

23、ore new social networks and thus enjoy a much more promising career in the near future An individual can expand his or her social and professional networks after having worked in different places, where one can plant roots and farm relationships and eventually these connections will prove to be very

24、 helpful in the near future This is especially true in today s overly competitive job market, a dynamic and active professional network will probably help you to land better jobs in the futureIn conclusion, it is more advisable to take different jobs before settling down permanently since it brings

25、more exposure in different industries, rich professional experience and a more dynamic professional connection.(托福考试作文独立写作范文：小学生应多学科技吗Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: primary schools should spend more time on teaching young students (5-llyears old) technology(like computer) tha

26、n teaching music and art托福写作范文参考：The question of “ what is the most important subject or skill the elementary schools should teach? M has never failed to at tract attention from educators, school administrators and even politicians especially when itcomesto subjects like technology, or music and art

27、 Some argue that school should spend more time teaching technology than music and art Personally, I am not in favor of this position based on the following reasonsAdmittedly, with the advent of internet and state-ofart gadgets like laptop, tablets, being able to use computers skillfully is being con

28、sidered as a valuable quality However, early exposure to computers and other kinds of technological products might bring lots of risks and problems to kids future development Recently research by National Society of Psychiatrists shows that exposure to computers at an early age leads to addiction to

29、 computers when they grow older and obviously spending too much time in front of the computer can pose a threat to kids health, to be more specific, it leads to neck problems, nearsightedness, backache and even childhood obesity Moreover, instead of getting addicted to playing on-line games and watc

30、hing meaningless videos, kids should have spent more time focusing on their academic study, or even learning how to appreciate artwork or music Indeed, spending more time learning music not only benefits the kids, but also it is conducive the community aswholeFirst off, learning art and music at an

31、early age helps to develop creativity and make the kids more imaginative Actually, lots of scientific research in the psychological field shows that early exposure to art and music not only boosts academic achievement but also promotes creativity, self-confidence and school pride; kids who spend more time in learning art and music end up having higher analytical thinking and reasoning skills than kids who don tAdditionally, spending more ti