格式塔意象在类比语篇翻译中再造

1、格式塔意象在类比语篇翻译中的再造 以TEM8(2013)汉译英试题为例 邵惟韺 邵志洪（华东理工大学外国语学院）汉语原文（1）生活就像一杯 红酒，热爱生活的人会从其中品出无穷无尽的美妙。 （2）将它握在手中仔细观察，它的暗红色中有血的感觉，那正是生命的痕迹。（3）抿一口留在口中回味，它的甘甜中有一丝苦涩，如人生一般复杂迷离。（4）喝一口下肚，余香沁人心脾。让人终生受益。（5）红酒越陈越美味，生活越丰富越美好。（6）当人生走向晚年，就如一瓶待开封的好酒，其色彩是沉静的，味道中充满慷慨与智慧。1、词汇语义层面2、句法结构层面3、篇章层面词汇语义层面 1，译文词语语义选择不精确一杯a cup of,

2、 a mug of, a glass of, a goblet of, a vessel of, a trophy of酒Wine , alcohol , beer, whisky, vodka红酒 red wine一杯红酒（错）a cup of red beer（正）a glass/trophy of red wine2, 词语选择错误抿一口Drink a bit , drink a sip, drink a gulp (a mouthful), drink a mouth句法结构层面一，逻辑关系的隐和显 句（1）（因为）生活就像一杯红酒，热爱生活的人会从其中品出无穷无尽的美妙。（因果关系隐

3、性）（逻辑关系显性）As life is like a glass of red wine, those who love life can taste the endless beauty from it. （逻辑关系隐性）Life is like a glass of red wine. Those who love life can taste the endless beauty from it. 比较关系不符的两种情况句（5）（就如）红酒越陈越美味，生活越丰富越美好（比较关系）1，译文比较关系相反The order the wine is, the tastier it will b

4、e. Just as the more colorful your life is, the more you will enjoy your life. （红酒越陈越美味，就如生活越丰富越美好）2，译文比较关系错误The longer time the wine has been stored, the more diverse and wonderful life becomes.（红酒越陈，生活就越丰富美好） 比较关系相符的两种情况就如）红酒越陈越美味，生活越丰富越美好（比较关系）Just as red wine tastes better as years pass by , life

5、 becomes better as your experiences accumulate.（显性）For red wine, the taste grows with time. For life, the richness brings more beautifulness.（隐性）二，比喻关系在句法结构层面翻译中的隐和显句（2）将它握在手里仔细观察，它的暗红色中有血的感觉，那正是生命的痕迹。（暗喻）Hold it in hand, and you will see by close observation blood in its dark redness, which is just

6、 like the trace of life. （明喻）Hold it in hand, and you will see by close observation blood in its dark redness, which is just the trace of life. （暗喻）篇章层面一， 指代关系在篇章层面翻译中的再造 句（1）生活就像一杯红酒，热爱生活的人会从其（生活）中品出无穷无尽的美妙。Life is like a glass of red wine. Those who love life can taste the endless wonder from the

7、red wine。Life is like a glass of red wine. Those who love life can taste the endless wonder from it. (life)注意：尽量保持原文的指代关系，但是不要过分的还原原文的指代关系 句（1）Life is like a glass of red wine, and those who love life can savour the endless wonder from it. 句（2）Holding the glass for a careful observation of the wine,

8、 you will see blood in its dark redness, which is the very sign of life. 句（3）Taking a sip in your mouth, you will taste a trace of bitterness and astringence in its sweetness, which suggests the complicatedness and mystique of life. 句（4）Drinking a mouthful ,You will be fully refreshed by its lingeri

9、ng aroma and benefited in your life long time. 句（5）The older the wine, the mellower it is. And the richer the life, the happier we feel. 句（6）Life in its later years is like a bottle of preminum wine to be opened, of which the colour is placid, and the flavour is filled with generosity and wisdom. 二，

10、类比关系在篇章层面翻译中的再造基于篇章句法层面的词汇场推进模式的类比关系类比类比生活生活红酒红酒句（1）生活热爱生活的人（就像）一杯红酒无穷无尽的美妙句（2）生命的痕迹暗红色中有血的感觉句（3）（如）人生复杂迷离抿一口，甘甜中有一丝苦涩句（4）让人终生受益喝一口，余香沁人心脾句（5）越丰富越美好越陈越美味句（6）晚年（就如）待开封的好酒色彩是沉静的味道中充满慷慨与智慧AnalogyAnalogyLifeLifeRed wineRed wineS(1)LifeThe life lovers(to be like) a glass of red wineEndless wonderS(2)Sign

11、 of lifeBlood in its dark rednessS(3)(to be like ) the complicatedness and mystique of lifeA sip, a trace of bitterness and astringenece in its sweetnessS(4)Benefited in your life-long timeA gulp, fully refreshed by its lingering aromaS(5)The richer the life, the happier we feel.The older the wine,

12、the mellower it isS(6)Life in its later years(to be like)a bottle of premium wine to be openedThe colour is placid the flavour is filled with generosity and wisdom基于篇章语义层面的词汇场推进模式的类比关系类比类比红酒红酒生活生活色暗红色有血的感觉（待开封的好酒）色彩沉静生命的痕迹（晚年）色彩沉静香（喝一口）余香沁人心脾，让人终生受益（待开封的好酒）味道中充满慷慨与智慧（喝一口）余香沁人心脾，让人终生受益（晚年）味道中充满慷慨与智慧味

13、（热爱红酒的人会从其中）品出无穷无尽的美妙（抿一口）甘甜中有一丝苦涩，复杂迷离越陈越美味（热爱生活的人会从其中）品出无穷无尽的美妙（抿一口）甘甜中有一丝苦涩，复杂迷离越丰富越美好AnalogyAnalogyRed wineRed wineLifeLifecolourcolourBlood in its dark rednessBlood in its dark redness（s2s2）(a bottle of premium wine to (a bottle of premium wine to be opened) the be opened) the colourcolour is i

14、s placid(s6)placid(s6)The sign of life(s2)The sign of life(s2)(life in its later years) the (life in its later years) the colourcolour is placid(s6) is placid(s6)smellsmell(a mouthful) refreshing (a mouthful) refreshing aroma and life-long aroma and life-long benefit(s4)benefit(s4)(a(a bottle of pre

15、mium wine to bottle of premium wine to be opened ) the be opened ) the flavourflavour full full of of genesoritygenesority and wisdom(s6) and wisdom(s6)(a mouthful ) refreshing(a mouthful ) refreshing aroma aroma and life-long benefit(s4)and life-long benefit(s4)(life in its later years) the (life i

16、n its later years) the flavourflavour full of generosity and full of generosity and wisdom(s6)wisdom(s6)tastetaste(the red wine lovers ) can (the red wine lovers ) can savoursavour the endless wonder(s1) the endless wonder(s1)(a sip) a trace of (a sip) a trace of bitterness and bitterness and astrigenceastrigence in in its sweetness(s3)its sweetness(s3)The older the wine, the The older the wine, the mellower it is(s5)mellower it is(s5)(the life lovers) c