作文讲评3：waysoflearningEnglishineverydaylife(美术班)

1、书面表达书面表达Ways of Learning English in Everyday Life浙江开化华埠中学浙江开化华埠中学 王东福王东福 英语是当今世界上主要的通用语言之一，也是英语是当今世界上主要的通用语言之一，也是世界上使用最广泛的的语言。对于中学生而言，世界上使用最广泛的的语言。对于中学生而言，学好英语具有重要的现实意义。学完本单元之后，学好英语具有重要的现实意义。学完本单元之后，请你结合自己的实际，以请你结合自己的实际，以“Ways of Learning English in Everyday Life”为题，写一篇为题，写一篇100-120词词的英语短文。的英语短文。时态？

2、时态？人称？人称？审题审题谋篇布局谋篇布局Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3 English is widely used around the world and is very important in our everyday life.My tips on learning English in our everyday life.If you take my advice, Im sure you will improve your English soon.过渡句过渡句 1. I know some good ideas to study English.(徐珊徐珊燕燕)

3、2. There is some advice for you.(程馨莹程馨莹) 3. But how to learn English effectively?(廖颖颖，廖颖颖，邓文丽邓文丽) 4. Let me tell you about my ways of learning English in everyday life.(许千文许千文) 5. Therefore, we should find some good ways to learn English.(周嘉敏周嘉敏)have 6. If you want to learn English well, I can give

4、some advice.(程静娴程静娴) 7. There are many ways to learn English.(徐夏娟徐夏娟)you过渡词过渡词 1. first, second, third / firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 2. First of all, secondly, besides(周嘉敏周嘉敏) 3. First of all, besides, whats more, above all, last but not least，on the one hand, on the other hand(经典词语经典词语)好词好词

5、 1. insist on doing sth(邵清雅，余健薇，曹豫，邵清雅，余健薇，曹豫，) 2. Make a great progress(邵清雅邵清雅) 3. Put your hear into(邵清雅邵清雅) 4. Set down(朱方成，周嘉敏，朱方成，周嘉敏，) 5. In order to(朱方成朱方成) 6. Share with(朱方成朱方成) 7. Such as(余健薇，郑倩倩，廖晓航，余健薇，郑倩倩，廖晓航，) 8. In my opinion(许千文，程伊楚，廖颖颖，邓许千文，程伊楚，廖颖颖，邓文丽，孙晨悦，文丽，孙晨悦，) 9. Play an importa

6、nt part in(程伊楚，吴林忆，程伊楚，吴林忆，郑菁菁，张隽宁郑菁菁，张隽宁) 10. Put up(周嘉敏，周嘉敏，) 11. Regardas(周嘉敏，周嘉敏，) 12. For instance(周嘉敏，周嘉敏，) 13. Have a good command of(周嘉敏，周嘉敏，) 14. In a word(姜雅婷，姜雅婷，) 15.A large number of (叶慧瑛，吴林忆，叶慧瑛，吴林忆，) 16. Therefore(吴林忆，吴林忆，) 17. For example(吴林忆，吴林忆，) 18. Communicate with(吴林忆，吴林忆，) 19.

7、Along with(郑倩倩，郑倩倩，)20. All over(张隽宁张隽宁) 21. Be based on(叶慧瑛叶慧瑛)好句好句 1. It is true that its really difficult for us to learn English.(曹豫，余健薇，苏晨，曹豫，余健薇，苏晨，) 2. You should have a book that shout and beautiful, because you should remember vocabulary which write down in this book every day.(姜雅婷姜雅婷) 3. W

8、e can set down it on some small paper and put up them on everywhere that we can see.（周嘉（周嘉敏，）敏，）is shortis writtenset it downput them up 4. While eating the dinner, you were listening to English music.(程伊楚，程伊楚，) 5. Today the number of people learning English in China is increasing rapidly.（周润格，程伊楚）（

9、周润格，程伊楚）can listen好文章好文章1 The most important language is English. Its very useful in the world. As a student, I know that I must study English well. But its very hard. I cant do it well. Now, I know some good ideas to study English. First, you must remember all of words. Although its very difficult,

10、 you can remember 10 words every day. Its so easy! Second, you can listen the radio every day to improve your listening. At last, you can read books, watch English movies and listen English songs to improve your grammar.to If you observe these rules, your English grade will improve fast.徐珊燕徐珊燕好文章好文章

11、2 English is the bridge of the world. It is also one of the most important parts in our life. How can you learning English in everyday life?learn First, you should insist on learning English. It is true that its really difficult for us to learn English. But if you have so good ways to learn. Then so

12、metimes, it seems impossible for someone to learn English well, but if you do a lot of practice, you will make a great progress. You should speak and listen to English more. I think you will improve your English if you study hard, because nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.邵清雅邵清雅病句修改

13、病句修改 1. If you study hard, you also can be succeed.(许许千文，千文，) 2. I think listen to English programs on the radio or TV and watch English film is good ways of improve listening.(朱方成朱方成) 3. Share your problems with your teachers will gradually make progress.(朱方成朱方成) 4. In a world, we should study more

14、 English knowledges.(廖颖颖廖颖颖)successfullisteningwatchingareand youwordknowledge 5. The most important is you must have a determined heart.(周嘉敏周嘉敏) 6. English is one of the most important language in the world.(孙晨悦，吴林忆孙晨悦，吴林忆) 7. We must listen to the lessons careful.(叶慧瑛叶慧瑛) 8. We can listen the radi

15、o every day to improve your listening.(叶慧瑛叶慧瑛)thatlanguagescarefullytoyou范文欣赏范文欣赏1 Today English, the most widely used language all over the world, is playing an increasingly important part in our life. Whatever we do and wherever we go, we can pick up English in some way. When we enjoy some delicio

16、us food, take in the English words along with the food. On our way to school, remember the English on traffic signs like “No parking”. While listening to music, we hear English songs. Turn on TV and English TV programs are also helpful to our English learning. When meeting native English speakers, d

17、ont be shy; go ahead and communicate with them. Please look around carefully, listen to and speak English actively outside class and we will certainly improve our English.范文欣赏范文欣赏2 As is known to us all, English is the most widely used language in the world. It is playing an increasingly important p

18、art in our daily life. Therefore, it is of great importance to learn English well. But how can we have a good command of it? In my opinion, there is no doubt that we have more than one way of learning English. For example, we can read English aloud in the morning ,which in turn benefits our spoken English. We can also watch some English TV programs based on English culture. Whats more, when meeting native English speakers, dont hesitate to communicate with them. In a word,