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1、典型题例典型题例 (2011佛山一模佛山一模) Thomas Jefferson High School Detention (留堂留堂)Policy The school knows well that students need to grow and mature. Part of growth involves making positive academic and lifestyle decisions or choices. If students decisions are contrary to Thomas Jefferson Highs expectations and

2、standards, students will be held responsible. Homework time after school may be one of the consequences. Reasons for After School Detention include but are not limited to the following: 1. Late homework or incomplete work (A detention will be given when a fourth incomplete or late homework occurs in

3、 any subject). 2. Behavior that disturbs with school purposes or educational processes. Please refer to the teachers classroom rules, Rules of Behavior, and Code of Conduct, which are posted in each classroom. Under normal circumstances, a student will be given a warning (and possibly other in-schoo

4、l consequences) before being given a detention. They will be warned that further behavior of the same type will result in a detention. However, if the behavior problem is severe enough, the student may be given a detention without a warning.1. 以约以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约以约120个词对留堂这一做法进行议论个词对

5、留堂这一做法进行议论,内容包括内容包括: 你或你同学的留堂经历；你或你同学的留堂经历； 你对留堂制度的看法你对留堂制度的看法; 其它督促学生认真学习的办法。其它督促学生认真学习的办法。 你或你同学的留堂经历你或你同学的留堂经历(； _ _ 你对留堂制度的看法你对留堂制度的看法; (表明看法表明看法) _ _ 其它督促学生认真学习的办法其它督促学生认真学习的办法(。 _ _This reminds me of my friend Li Huasexperience in primary school.In my opinion, detention has its advantagesin ed

6、ucating misbehaved students.However, there are other ways to makestudents work hard. Possible version: If students fail to follow Thomas Jefferson High Schools requirements, they would be given detentions as punishment. Reasons for detention include late or incomplete homework and other disturbing b

7、ehaviors. This reminds me of my friend Li Huas experience in primary school. One day, he was talking with another classmate in class although the teacher had warned him several times. As a result, he had to stay for an extra hour after school. In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating

8、 misbehaved students. For one thing, with the detention policy, we students will learn that we should be responsible for our behavior. For another thing, the policy can make us finish our homework on time, which is good for our academic development. However, there are other ways to make students wor

9、k hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job. Besides, students can be divided into groups to compete with each other so that we will work harder. 你或你同学的留堂经历；你或你同学的留堂经历； A. It reminds me of my detention experience in my childhood. B. When I was in Grade 4, I was g

10、iven a detention by my Chinese teacher. C. Like most of the students, I once was given a detention, for I didnt finish the homework. ( 你对留堂制度的看法你对留堂制度的看法; A. As far as Im concerned , the detention policy should be cancelled. B. Personally, I disapprove of detention policy. C. From my perspective of

11、view, detention has its advantages in educating the misbehaved students while it may make a difference on well-behaved students. D. In my point of view, detentions do more good than harm to educating misbehaved students. (发表看法发表看法)F. As far as Im concerned, athough detention policy has its own advan

12、gtaes, most students hold a negative view on them. G. In my opinion, detention policy has both advantages and disadvantages. E. As a result, I am quite opposed to detention policy. 其它督促学生认真学习的办法。其它督促学生认真学习的办法。 A. Whats more, there are other ways to encourage students to study better. B. There are lo

13、ts of more acceptable ways which can push students to study harder. C. Other ways to encourage students to study hard. D. However, there are other better ways to urge students to work hard. (读写任务之读写任务之How to make your writing beautiful?写主题句的主要方法有写主题句的主要方法有: 1.具体回答。具体回答。对含特殊问句性质的要点，问什么答什么。对含特殊问句性质的要点

14、，问什么答什么。如如: 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应么反应? (2009广东广东) If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.(感觉烦恼感觉烦恼)技巧点拨技巧点拨 你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。品质。(2007汕头一模汕头一模) In my eyes, a good teacher should treat his students fairly as

15、well as make the class lively and interesting.(公平对公平对待学生，上课生动有趣待学生，上课生动有趣)2.肯否明确。肯否明确。 对带有一般问句性质，要求考生作出肯对带有一般问句性质，要求考生作出肯定或否定回答的要点，考生要明确表示支持定或否定回答的要点，考生要明确表示支持还是反对、赞同还是不赞同、该还是不该等，还是反对、赞同还是不赞同、该还是不该等，或表明会不会做某事。如或表明会不会做某事。如: 你是否赞成你是否赞成(熄灯一小时活动熄灯一小时活动)这种做法并这种做法并说明理由；说明理由；(2011深圳二模要点深圳二模要点) Im strong fo

16、r this activity, which is really meaningful and helpful.(赞成赞成) 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。拍照。(2009广东广东) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.(应该应该)(3)你认为是否应该帮助陌生人？你认为是否应该帮助陌生人？I am strongly convinced that helping strangers is necessary, because it feels great when you offer

17、 or are offered help. 对不含提问性质的要点对不含提问性质的要点, 一般将其译一般将其译成英语即可。必要时可增加关联词。如成英语即可。必要时可增加关联词。如: 其它督促学生认真学习的办法。其它督促学生认真学习的办法。(2011佛山一模佛山一模) However， there are other ways to make students work hard.3. 直接翻译直接翻译 中学生活和大学生活的差别。中学生活和大学生活的差别。(2008广东高考广东高考)From my point of view，college life will be different from

18、the life in high school. (3)如果我的朋友遇到问题，我会聆听他如果我的朋友遇到问题，我会聆听他的倾诉。的倾诉。(4)(不用说不用说)独立对于我们来说是很有必独立对于我们来说是很有必要的。要的。If my friend is faced with problems in life and needs to talk with me, Ill try to be a good listener for him. It goes without saying that it is necessary for us to be independent.4.表明看法。表明看法。

19、 对对“你对你对的看法的看法/态度态度”之类的之类的写作要点，考生可用写作要点，考生可用in my opinion/view， personally， as far as Im concerned等等开头，直接表明自己的看法。如开头，直接表明自己的看法。如: 你对留堂制度的看法；你对留堂制度的看法；(2011佛山一模佛山一模) In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating misbehaved students. 我对大学扩招的看法。我对大学扩招的看法。(2011汕头一汕头一模模) In my point of view，th

20、is tendency should be continued，as we need more capable people to contribute to the fast-growing economy.(3)你对打电脑游戏的看法。你对打电脑游戏的看法。(4)你对网购的看法。你对网购的看法。In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes up time but also is harmful to our health.As far as Im concerned, online shopping has made a big d

21、ifference in our life. 5.表示重要表示重要对对“谈谈谈谈的重要性的重要性/必要性必要性/意义意义”就直接说就直接说“很重要很重要/很有必要很有必要/有重要意义有重要意义”。如。如: 安全教育的重要性。安全教育的重要性。(2011揭阳一模揭阳一模) In my opinion, no lesson is more important than the one on personal safety. 建设绿色校园的重要性。建设绿色校园的重要性。(2011东山中学东山中学) It is of great importance to build a green campus.(

22、3)建设和谐社会的重要性。建设和谐社会的重要性。In my view, it is of great importance/significance to build a harmonious society.6. 引出经历。引出经历。 你或你同学的留堂经历。你或你同学的留堂经历。(2011佛山一模佛山一模)This reminds me of my friend Li Huas experience in primary school.(2)老师感动你的经历。老师感动你的经历。There was/I remember a time when my English teacher . 语篇模板

23、语篇模板主题主题: 诚实可以赢得友谊吗诚实可以赢得友谊吗?为什么为什么? (用回答法写出主题句用回答法写出主题句)There is no doubt that one can win real friendship by being honest.(谚语谚语证明证明)Just as the popular saying goes， honesty is the best policy.(理由一理由一)Honest people are more trustworthy， so others are more likely to make friends with them.(理由二理由二)Be

24、sides， being honest can avoid misunderstanding between friends， which will contribute to harmonious relationship between them.超级仿写超级仿写请根据各个写作要点，写出各段的主题句。请根据各个写作要点，写出各段的主题句。1.以约以约120个词就个词就“电子报纸收费电子报纸收费”的问题的问题进行议论，内容包括进行议论，内容包括: 你平时主要以何种方式了解新闻资讯等你平时主要以何种方式了解新闻资讯等? (具体回答具体回答) 人们对电子报纸收费的不同看法；人们对电子报纸收费的不

25、同看法；(直接直接翻译翻译) 你对电子报纸收费的看法。你对电子报纸收费的看法。(表明看法表明看法) Generally，I surf the Internet in my spare time to get in touch with the outside world. People hold different opinions on whether digital fees should be charged. Personally，I am willing to pay to read newspapers online. Humans are social animals, and

26、most of us treasure our relationships with family and friends. An emerging line of research suggest that relationships can keep us healthier. And a new study finds those social connections may also help us live longer. This new study combined a large number of previous studies and concluded that a l

27、ack of social interactions ranks right up with smoking, obesity, and alcoholism as a risk factor for death. Researchers analyzed 148 studies with a total of some 300,000 participants, tracking their social 实战操练一实战操练一relationships and whether they survived to the end of their particular study, which

28、averaged about seven years. Professor Julianne Holt-Lunstad, one of the author of the study, aid, “Those who scored higher on those measures of social relationships were 50 percent more likeyly to be alive at that follow-up than people who scored low on those measures.” She pointed out several ways

29、relationships can affect our health. They can help us cope with stress. They can help us maintain healthy habits like eating well, exercising or seeing a doctor. And theres increasing research that shows a direct but poorly understood linkBetween relationships and physiological processes in the body

30、. So for instance, our relationships have been linked to lower blood pressure, better immune functioning, and even inflammatory processes that are shown in a number of disease.写作内容写作内容 1、以约、以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；个词概括这段短文的内容；2、以约、以约120个词就个词就“朋友和家人朋友和家人”进行议论，内进行议论，内容包括：容包括：（1）朋友、家人在人们生活中的重要性）朋友、家人在人们生活中的重要性

31、; （表示重要）（表示重要）（2）朋友、家人能给你带来什么；（具体回答）朋友、家人能给你带来什么；（具体回答）（3）应该如何与朋友家人保持良好的关系。）应该如何与朋友家人保持良好的关系。 （具体回答）（具体回答） 朋友、家人在人们生活中的重要性；朋友、家人在人们生活中的重要性； （表示重要）（表示重要） _ _ 朋友、家人能给你带来什么朋友、家人能给你带来什么；（具体回答）；（具体回答） _ _ 应该应该如何与朋友家人保持良好的关系；如何与朋友家人保持良好的关系； _ _Its true that family and friends are ofgreat significance in o

32、ur life.Family and friends can also bring us happiness and joy.We are supposed to keep in touch with ourfamily and friends frequently. From the passage we know that experts did some researches on how relationships with family and friends affect health. Good relationships with family and friends can

33、even lengthen peoples life. Its true that family and friends are very important. In the daily life, if meeting and difficulty, we can talk to them and may be helped out. Without family or friends, we would feel embarrassed when meeting with troubles or needing help. Family and friends can also bring

34、 us happiness and joy. When free, we can gather to enjoy the spare time and amuse each other. Of course, we should treat each other We should also keep in touch with our family and friendswell and kindly and build a friendly relation among us to enjoy the friendship. We are supposed to keep in touch

35、 with our family and friends frequently, otherwise, no relationships can be built up. For example, we should be concerned about them by visiting or calling them up if we have time. Sometimes wrting an email or sending text messages are good choices. Only living in harmony can bring us health and eve

36、n let us enjoy a longer life.实战操练二实战操练二(2012深圳一模深圳一模) Hi, everyone. This is Jane. I have a problem and dont know what to do. So I need your help! This morning I was ready to review my lesson with my computer in my dormitory, and then Mary, my roommate and best friend, came back with a laptop. She wa

37、nted to use my connector, and I did as she asked. After a while, she took away my headset and opened her laptop. Afterwards she connected to the Internet with my connector. Then something unexpected happened. She used the audio player with the loudspeaker. She entered her QQ Zone and started using t

38、he video system to chat with my microphone.Sounds of music, QQ and their talking became louder and louder. She completely ignored that I was there reviewing my lessons. I could not bear that, so I asked her to be quiet a little, but I failed. At last, I had to go away to the classroom. On the way I

39、became more and more angry because she was using my things, but never thought about my feeling. She drove me out. I am very sad. Am I her friend? Should I stop our friendship? 你对你对Mary行为的看法，并说明理由；行为的看法，并说明理由； (； _ _ 假如你是假如你是Jane，你会如何处理这件事；，你会如何处理这件事； (具体回答具体回答) _ _ 以你的经历谈谈你和朋友相处的体会以你的经历谈谈你和朋友相处的体会(。

40、 _ _In my opinion, what Mary did is too muchfor anyone in the world to bear.If I were Jane, I would find time to havea face-to-face talk with Mary.I remember a time when I was livingin the school dormitory Jane was annoyed because her friend Mary interrupted her by chatting on line and playing music

41、 loudly while she was reviewing lessons, which made her wonder whether she should continue their friend ship or not. In my opinion, what Mary did is too much for anyone in the world to bear. She is too self-centered and obviously cares about nobody, which is unacceptable and harmful. If I were Jane,

42、 I would find time to have a face-to-face talk with Mary. I would tell her all about what I felt and what I thought about her. I would also tell her if she continues doing like that, nobody could bear it and she would have no friends any more. I remember a time when I was living in the school dormit

43、ory, there was a boy who acted like Mary too. Other roommates took the same attitude to him as Jane to Mary, but I had a good talk with him. We helped him realize that his behavior was improper and unacceptable. Then he changed and now we are living together happily.典型题例典型题例 (2011佛山一模佛山一模) Thomas Je

44、fferson High School Detention (留堂留堂)Policy The school knows well that students need to grow and mature. Part of growth involves making positive academic and lifestyle decisions or choices. If students decisions are contrary to Thomas Jefferson Highs expectations and standards, students will be held

45、responsible. Homework time after school may be one of the consequences. Reasons for After School Detention include but are not limited to the following: 1. Late homework or incomplete work (A detention will be given when a fourth incomplete or late homework occurs in any subject). 2. Behavior that d

46、isturbs with school purposes or educational processes. Please refer to the teachers classroom rules, Rules of Behavior, and Code of Conduct, which are posted in each classroom. Under normal circumstances, a student will be given a warning (and possibly other in-school consequences) before being given a detention. They will be warned that further behavior of the same type will result in a detention. However, if the behavior problem is severe enough, the student may be given a detention without a warning.写作内容写作内容1. 以约以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约以约120个词发表你的看法，内容包括个词发表你的看法，内容包括: 你对你对Mary