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1、Writing托 福 写 作Integrated writing 综合写作阅读 听力 笔记Independent writing独立写作字数 逻辑语言 例子Integrated writing 综合写作阅读速度关键词 生词和专有词汇Integrated writing 综合写作Integrated writing 综合写作听力听和理解*记录关键词Integrated writing 综合写作Integrated writing 综合写作笔记画图简写自我评估找遗漏或错误的点缺失的结构分析原因Many scientists believe it would be possible to maint

2、ain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible.First, atmospheric pressure at Venus surface is at least 90 times greater than the pressure at Earths surface. This m

3、eans that a force of 100 kilograms is pressing down on every square centimeter of surface. All spacecraft that have landed on Venus have been crushed by this extreme pressure within an hour of landing. Almost anything humans might land on Venus would be crushed as well.Integrated writing 综合写作Second,

4、 as far as we know, there are no reservoirs of water on Venus surface, and the planets atmosphere, made up mostly of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid, contains hardly any oxygen or water vapor. Water and oxygen would therefore probably have to be supplied to Venus from Earth. The idea of

5、ensuring a regular supply of water and oxygen from Earth is impractical in the extreme and would probably defeat the purpose of establishing a permanent station on Venus.Third, very little sunlight reaches the planet s surface. About 60 percent of the sunlight that hits Venus is reflected back into

6、space by the thick clouds that fill the atmosphere, which means that only 40 percent of the sunlight can get through the clouds. Below these clouds is a dense layer of carbon dioxide, which blocks even more light, so very little light reaches the surface. The lack of light would prevent the use of s

7、olar power cells, so humans could not get electricity to power their machines and equipment.Integrated writing 综合写作Independent writing独立写作字数500+速度Integrated writing 综合写作Independent writing独立写作逻辑题目分类分析范文 逻辑结构Integrated writing 综合写作Independent writing独立写作语言分类句子引用名言 拒绝ChinglishIntegrated writing 综合写作In

8、dependent writing独立写作例子自己的经历名人经历具体阐述such as 逻辑结构Should the government focus more on preserving natural environment and less on economic development?To begin with, as the foundation of society economy is of top priority in all nations. The thriving of a country depends on its economy conditions. Toda

9、y, globalization has already produced chain effects in economy, Whose impacts have gone beyond national boundaries from one nation to another. Undoubtedly, the neglect of economic development will bring people back to poverty and hunger. To maintain a smooth and healthy economic development, governm

10、ent is a major force. There is no excuse for a government to shun the responsibility of helping to further develop their countrys national economy. Take China for example, the economy reforms and the opening-up policy adopted last countrys benefited the nation and its people as a whole. Nowadays, mo

11、re preferential policies are being formed and implemented, which further testifies to the powerful role of the government in economic development. 介绍定义或背景影响结果联系当今反面陈述联系责任举例子给出结论从正反面描述两种人的看法我赞成的看法：现状因此：措施 举例 造成的结果反面：细节一个例子 所带来的坏处总结题目分类双向选择Do you agree or disagree the following statement?Some believes

12、.while others think.What is your opinion? 大范围选择What quality do you think is the most important in ones life？多选What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?1. Plant trees and create parks2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers3

13、. I n c r e a s e a c c e s s t o p u b l i c transportation ,and reduce the automobiles on roads分类句子基本结构句子p Some people believe thatwhile others disagree with this idea by stating thatp As for me, I am in favor in the opinion thatp The first factor lies in the truth thatp That is of equal importanc

14、e/significance as the one stated abovep From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that论述过渡句子p makes it possible for us top Exert positive effects onp allows us to /Enable us.p An increasing number of people p It is generally accepted thatp People seem to fail to take it i

15、nto account the fact that.p There is no doubt that积累备用句p is around the cornerp On no account can we. p There is no denying the fact thatp Spare no effort to p paves the way for us to p A general controversy rises up when the tow presented togetherDo you agree or disagree with the following statement

16、?Because the world is changing quickly,people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than peopleWere in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Twenty-first century sees the rapid changes in the world.还可以再多描述此背景 When it comes to whether people nowadays are les

17、s pleased or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past along with the fast development, peoples views vary from person to person. As for me,（As for me, I am in favor in the opinion that）I quite agree with this statement for the following reasons.To begin with, people are always no

18、t satisfied especially when new things come out constantly in todays quickly changing world. On one hand, in a world of innovative technology, millions of new inventions（此处可以详细描述such as ） have entered our daily lives, making it much more convenient. On the other hand, people began to pursue high qua

19、lity lives and their desire is expanding. Once a new thing comes out, people scramble for it even ifthe old device has not been used for long and the new one is just a little bit advanced. The best example to illustrate this is the Apple products. They are expensive but people still manage to get th

20、em, even by selling ones body organ. For example, I have a cousin, Jimmy, who always keeps pace with the latest technology. He has spent lots of money in updating the devices, resulting in no enough money for his daily expenditure. He always eatsinstant noodles and never goes out for fun. I dont thi

21、nk there is much happiness in his life dominated by thechanging technology.Moving on, people today are facing fierce competition in this fast-moving world so that they often feel distressed and stressed. There are more and more people in the world and the criteria for judging a person are becoming h

22、igher and stricter. Competition exists from ones birth. People are under great pressure of entering a renowned school, receiving a good grade, finding a decent job, earning enough money and so on. Its difficult for people to have adequate rest time and to fully enjoy their lives. For instance, I hav

23、e heard about a tragedy of a famous actor. He was kind of a perfectionist and was extremely strict with himself. He really wanted to earn a reputation in the world of showbiz and let audiences like his work. But the world of showbiz was changing so quickly that every day came out a newcomer who grad

24、ually took others place. As a result, even his devoted spectators began to change their focus. He just could not tolerate this and suffered from depression unfortunately and committed suicide at last.In a nutshell, in todays fast changing world, people are less happy or less content with their lives than people were in the past, because the new things come out constantly, expanding peoples desire and the fi