高考英语基础写作---之正反论证

1、Enjoy a video and answer some questions :1. What do you think of beauty contests?2. Should beauty contests be held among teenagers? Why?4如今, 选美比赛在青少年中越来越普及, 因此你们班就此开展了一场“Should beauty contests be held among teenagers?”的讨论, 请你根据下面表格内容写一份总结。一些同学认为另一部分同学认为1. 爱美之心是人之常情2. 提供了展示美和欣赏美的平台3. 提高青少年的品味, 如在重要场所

2、，应该如何穿衣1.比赛着重外貌，导致青少年盲目追求外表美2.参与比赛浪费时间和金钱总结：外貌并非成功的关键，应注重内在美参考词汇： 盲目追求run blindly after6写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。7基础写作的步骤：1、认真审题(体裁、人称、时态）2、归纳、排列信息点 3、确定短语和句型、连词成句 4、组句成篇，润色提升 5、检查修改 81 体裁格式2 人称,3 时态4 信息点的整合和排列审题议论文第三人称一般现在时？写作步骤9一、信息整理 分清关系 在分析完材料类型后,应对有效信息进行整理。整理过程应按照信息内在关系组合成5个句

3、子。句数 内 容 第一句第一句 选美比赛在青少年中越来越普及选美比赛在青少年中越来越普及, 因此你们班就因此你们班就此开展了一场此开展了一场“Should beauty contests be held among teenagers?”的讨论的讨论,第二句第二句 一些同学认为：爱美之心是人之常情； 提供了展示美和欣赏美的平台第三句第三句 提高青少年的品味, 如在重要场所，应该如何穿衣第四句第四句 另一部分同学认为：比赛着重外貌，导致青少年盲目追求外表美 ；参与比赛浪费时间和金钱第五句第五句 总结：外貌并非成功的关键，应注重内在美10连缀成文 ：分析5句之间的逻辑关系，加上恰当的过渡词。句数

4、内 容 第一句 第二句第三句 第四句第五句这篇基础写作的模板可以如下：(1)We had a heated discussion about (whether)(2)Some students are in favor ofbecause.(3)Furthermore/Whats more /Moreover,. However/Nevertheless, (4) other students areagainst for the reason that/stating/ believing/arguing that. Whats worse/Worse still/Tomake matter

5、s worse, In conclusion,总述 支持者观点一、二支持者观点三反对者观点一、二你的观点/结论 Now finish your writing in 10 minutes. 12Show and evaluate 展示与评价13审审抄抄列列四步How to polish your How to polish your WritingWriting润润润润141)并列句2)复合句 (定语从句,状语从句,名词 性从句)3)非谓语动词 4)强调句型 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构润色：做到句式灵活，适当地使用：15be/become more and more popularSent

6、ence 1:Recently, beauty contests have become more and more popular . hold/have a discussion about Our school held a heated discussion about whether beauty contests Should be held among teenagers普及普及开展讨论开展讨论be/become more and more popularSentence 1:Recently, beauty contests have become more and more

7、popular . hold/have a discussion about Our school held a heated discussion about whether beauty contests Should be held among teenagers, so our(宾从注意陈述语序宾从注意陈述语序)普及普及开展讨论开展讨论17爱美之心爱美之心 人之常情人之常情 提供平台提供平台 展示美欣赏美展示美欣赏美Sentence 2:Some students hold the opinion that love of beauty is part of human nature.

8、 Beauty contests provide a stage for them to show their beauty and enjoy beauty.love of beauty, everyone loves beautyhuman naturegive/provide a stage for sbshow /appreciate/enjoy beauty爱美之心爱美之心 人之常情人之常情 提供平台提供平台 展示美欣赏美展示美欣赏美Sentence 2:Some students hold the opinion that love of beauty is part of hum

9、an nature. Beauty contests provide a stage for them to show their beauty and enjoy beauty., and beautylove of beauty, everyone loves beautyhuman naturegive/provide a stage for sbshow /appreciate/enjoy beautySentence 3.提高审美品味提高审美品味 在重要场所在重要场所 穿衣穿衣 In their opinion, they can help improve teenagers tas

10、tes choose the right clothes for important occasions.improve ones (aestheticisetk ) taste ,on important occasions/ in some important placeschoose the right clothes/how to choose clothes20Sentence 3.提高审美品味提高审美品味 在重要场所在重要场所 穿衣穿衣 In their opinion, they can help improve teenagers tastes choose the right

11、 clothes for important occasions.improve ones (aestheticisetk ) taste ,on important occasions/ in some important placeschoose the right clothes/how to choose clothes like/such as helping themSentence 4盲目追求盲目追求浪费浪费 However, other students disagree, most beauty contests focus on contestants look , run

12、 blindly after appearances taking part in beauty contests wastes time and money.run blindly afterwaste sth/a waste of sth22Sentence 4盲目追求盲目追求浪费浪费 However, other students disagree, most beauty contests focus on contestants look , run blindly after appearances taking part in beauty contests wastes tim

13、e and money.run blindly after/pursue sth blindlywaste sth/a waste of sth which causes teenagers toand thatthey think that becausearguing that23Sentence 5成功的关键成功的关键注重注重内在美内在美 We can conclude that a good face is not the key to successthe key to successfocus on/pay attention to/attach great importance

14、toinner beauty and we should focus more on inner beauty.Sentence 5成功的关键成功的关键注重注重内在美内在美 We can conclude that a good face is not the key to success and we should focus more on inner beauty.the key to successfocus on/pay attention to/attach great importance toinner beautyIt is ones inner beauty that co

15、unts/matters/should be focused on.参考范文参考范文 Nowadays, with beauty contests becoming more and more popular, our class had a heated discussion about whether beauty contests should be held among teenagers. Some students hold the opinion that love of beauty is part of human nature, so beauty contests not

16、 only provide a stage for people to show off their beauty but also a good chance to appreciate beauty. Beauty contests, in their opinion, can help improve teenagers tastes like helping them choose the right clothes for important occasions. However, other students disagree because they are afraid tha

17、t most beauty contests focus on contestants appearance, which encourages teenagers to run blindly after appearances. Moreover, it is a waste of time and money to take part in many beauty contests. Although our classmates opinions vary, we can still safely draw the conclusion that a good face is not

18、the key to success and we should focus more on inner beauty.Summary1. 语言丰富和地道2. 句型灵活多样3. 注意使用恰当的过渡词或句， 如表转折和对比可用however, in contrast, compared with等。4. 掌握正反论证的写作模板，尤其是基础较差的学生。5. 如果文章最后要求考生发表自己观点, 考生不能简单地说I agree with.或者I disagree with., 而是要言之有物, 有理有据。6. 因此, 考生在平时的学习中应该多点积累丰富的词汇短语。 29Homework:Check y

19、our writing and hand it in tomorrow31Sentence Patterns:1）Beginning Recently we have had a ( heated) discussion/debate on/about (whether). 最近我们就最近我们就进行了一次讨论进行了一次讨论/辩论。辩论。 Last week I did a survey (among sb) about the phenomenon(现象现象) that. and here is the result. 上星期上星期, 我做了一个关于我做了一个关于现象的调查现象的调查, 这就是

20、调这就是调查的结果。查的结果。322）Body (支持方观点) : Some students are for/ in favor of the idea of/thatbecause 有些学生赞成有些学生赞成因为因为 Besides, / In addition, 此外，此外，(反对方观点): However, other students或60% of the students are against(反对反对)/ disapprove of for the reason that/stating/ believing/ arguing that Whats more而且而且/ Whats worse,更糟糕的是更糟糕的是333）Ending：(个人观点) As for me/ From my perspective /As far as Im concerned (结论结论) In conclusion, We can draw a conclu