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1、一. 不一致 (Disagreements )所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了 数的不一致，时态不一致及代词不一致等。Sample 1:Whe n one have mon ey, he can do what he want to.Once one has mon ey, he can do what he wan ts (to do).Sample 2:A driver should n ever race your motor without a warm-up.A driver should never race his motor without a warm-up.Sampl

2、e 3:Whenone is sick, you dont want company.When you are sick, you don t want compa ny.When one is sick, one doesn t want compa ny.Sample 4:I was extremely sorry you are injured.I am extremely sorry you are injured.二. 修饰语错位(Misplaced Modifiers) Misplaced and dangling modifiers are phrases that are no

3、t located properly in relati on to the words they modify.Misplaced modifiers lead to illogical sentences that are difficult tofollow.Modifiers are associated with the closest word they could possiblybelongto. Whe n a modifier slips out of place, there arises con fusi on.英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不 同的位置，句子的含

4、义可能引起变化对于 这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视， 因而造成了不必要的误解.Sample 5 :I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better.Sample 6:A small book sat on the desk that Sarah had read.A small book that Sarah had read

5、 sat on the desk.修改原则A. 避免修饰语错置的关键是使修饰语尽可能靠近被修饰语。B. 副词短语和时间、地点、方式等状语 从句可以万无一失地置于句首。C. 把那些很难安排位置的修饰语置于 句首。D. 避免因为一个修饰语和句子中多个成 份之间存在潜在的修饰关系而引发歧义现 象。四. 句子不完整(Sentence Fragments )在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下 文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解可是 书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思 表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以 后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.不完整 句不具备完整主谓结构的句子。依赖于特定 的语境，能够独

6、立使用并有一定的交际功 能。常见错误包括：从属连词引起的破句， ing分词和不定式结构引起的错误，增添细 节引起的破句和缺少主语或者谓语动词的 破句。Sample 7:Because the kids thought their wages were too low.Because the kids thought their wages were too low, they dema nded a high pay. Sample 8:People worked together on the assembly line. Mov ing quickly and efficie ntly.T

7、hey wan ted to make as much money as possible.People worked together on the assembly line, mov ing quickly and efficie ntly.They wan ted to make s much money as possible.Sample 9:There are many ways to know the society.For example by TV ,radio ,n ewspaper and so on .There are many ways to know socie

8、ty, for example, by TV ,radio ,and n ewspaper.Sample 10:A woma n to be respected and feared.She is a woman to be respected and feared.Sample 11:He will sure to come and help me.He will be sure to come and help me.Sample 12:Weshould read books may be useful to us. Weshould read books which may be use

9、ful to us.The girlwho had told him about theconcert.The girlwho had told him about thecon cert was gone.修改原则：改正从属连词引起的破句时， 可以把该从句附属于其前或其后某个子句 上。也可以去掉破句中的连词。三. 悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers )所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句 子的逻辑关系混乱不清.了解垂悬修饰语(dangling modifier )的特点：修饰语在句中找不到逻辑上被修饰的对象。分词结构、不定式结构和介词短语做修饰语修饰句 子时，易发生垂悬修饰现象

10、。Dangling modifiers are verbal phrases or shorte ned clauses, ofte n at the beg inning of a senten ce, that either have nothing to modify or that modify the wrong eleme nt in the clauses to which they are attracted. They are likely to create illogical meanings.Sample 13:All being well, the project w

11、ill be fini shed in few mon ths.Good luck give n, I will earn more money than all of you.Mary coming back, they discussed it together.Sample 14:At the age of ten, my gran dfather died. Whe n I was ten, my gran dfather died.Sample 15:To do well in college, good grades are esse ntial.To do well in col

12、lege, a stude nt n eeds good grades.Sample 16 :Watching the parade, my wallet was stole n.While watching the parade, I had my wallet stole n.While I was watching the parade, my wallet was stole n.修改原则A. 明确动作的实施者，使悬垂成份所修 饰的对象成为主句主语。、B. 将悬垂修饰语扩展成从句。五. 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形

13、 容词当副词用；名词当动词用等Sample 17:None can negativethe importanee ofmoney.None can deny the importa nee of money.Sample 18:Hon est is so importa nt for every one.Hon esty is so importa nt for every one.Sample 19:We all know that fail is the mother of succeed.We all know that failure is the motherof success.S

14、ample 20:Make our cities gree ner is importa nt.Plant trees and flowers is the best measure to obta in the goal.Making our cities greener is important.Planting trees and flowers is the best measure to obta in the goal.Sample 21:People can through the internet to get in formati on.People can get in f

15、ormatio nthroughin ternet.六. 指代不清(Ambiguous Referenee ofPronouns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或 物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。Sample 22:Mary was frie ndly to my sister because she wan ted her to be her bridesmaid.Mary was frie ndly to my sister because she wan ted my sister to be her bridesmaid.Sample 23:Leave out the wor

16、d in that sentence because it is too difficult.Leave out the word because with it the sentence would be too difficult.Sample 24:She told my sister that her idea was practicable.She told my sister that my sister s/her own idea was practicable.七. 不间断句子(Run-on Sentences)串句是不用连词和标点而把两个(或以上)独立的句子串在一起的错误表

17、达。有些串句是不用任何标点间隔两个甚至更多的句子； 有些串句是在该用句号时滥用逗号，忽略了英语语言中的逗号本身没有连接句子的功 能这一原则。A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or more independentclauses arein correctly joined by a comma without a coord in ati ngconj un cti onor sentenceconn ector.修改原则A.把原句分成两个独立的句子Sample 25:Rita decided to stop smok ing she d

18、id n t want to die of lung can cer.Rita decided to stop smok ing. She did n t want to die of lung can cer.The exam was postp oned the class was can celed as well.The exam was postp oned. The class was can celed as well.B. 用并列连词连接两个句子。Rita decided to stop smok ing, for she didn t want to die of lung

19、cancer.The examwas postp on ed, and the class was can celed as well.C. 用分号连接两个句子。Rita decided to stop smok ing; she didn t want to die of lung cancer.The exam was postp on ed; the class was can celed as well.八. 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction)Diction是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题Sample 26:The increasinguse of chemi

20、cal obstaclesin agriculture also makes pollution.The abusive use of chemical substa nces in agriculture also causes/leads to polluti on.Sample 27:He fin ally resolved the problem.He fin ally solved the problem.九. 累赘(Redundancy)言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词； 写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的 不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。Sample 28:In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.In spite of his laz in ess, I like him.十.Faulty Parallelism（错误的平行结构）两个（或以上）意思并列的成份（包括单 词、词组、从句和句子）在写作时要用同等 的语法形式表达，否则就破坏了其平行结 构。Faulty parallelism distra