Writing Session

1、Sample Sentences &Sample Paragraphs议论文的提纲类型议论文的提纲类型图画议论文提纲： 1-描述图画 2-利弊/原因/例子 3-观点/措施建议图表议论文提纲： 1-描述图表 2-利弊/原因/例子 3-观点/措施建议 理解型议论文提纲： 1- 解释话语 2-利弊/原因/例子 3-观点总述 解决型议论文提纲： 1-重要必要性 2-措施建议 3-观点阐述 普通议论文提纲1： 1-社会现象 2-利弊/原因 3-观点/措施建议/例子 普通议论文提纲2： 1-观点A2-观点B3-个人观点 四级写作段落类型四级写作段落类型 Indicated above is a p

2、icture that vividly describes dialogue between two neighboring housewives. In the picture, one woman said, “Ive been here for 5 years, whats your name?” While the other replied, “Ive been here for 6, whats yours?” It reveals the relationship between people is quite indifferent. 描述图画描述图画 : Brief+Deta

3、il+Point “Dad, Im a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste” “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son. In the picture, the son told his father, “Dad, Im a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father t

4、old him, “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before undertaking something big.描述图表描述图表 : Brief+Detail+Conclusion+Linkage As is shown in the table, the unemployment rate decreases steadily as the education level increases. In t

5、he chart, only 1.9 % of people with doctoral degree lost their jobs. However, the unemployment rate of people with degree inferior to Bachelor Degree is ranging from 9.2% to 14.9%. The fact revealed by the statistics is obvious: graduates with a degree are less likely to be unemployed. Quite a few r

6、easons can account for this phenomenon. 图表常用词汇：图表常用词汇： 最高(低)点：peak; reached a peak; bottom; reached the bottom 回升: increase; jump; rise/rose; climb 下降: decrease; fall/fell; drop; decline; reduce 波动: fluctuate 稳定: remained steady/stable; stay the same; little/hardly any /no change 突然的,明显的,急剧的: sudden

7、/suddenly rapid/rapidly dramatic/dramatically/steeply/sharply 重要的: significant/significantly 渐进的,缓慢: gradual/gradually slow/slowly 轻微的、略微地: slight/slightly 几乎，差不多: almost/ Nearly/ approximately/ about adv. 正好 精确地: exactly/ precisely 从何时到何时: Fromto 在此期间: during the same period of time. Reading this c

8、hart, we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply. According to the statistic of the chart, in 1990, it was less than 2 hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours; while in 2000, the number soared(increase sharply, leap, surge)

9、 to 20 hours. Obviously, students tend to use computers more and more nowadays. The reasons are listed as follows. 解释话语解释话语: Saying+Explanantion+Linkage 1- 怎样理解怎样理解“熟能生巧熟能生巧”？ 2- 例如：在英语学习中 3- 又如 The famous saying “Practice makes perfect” is widely accepted today. It means if we practice unfamiliar t

10、hings again and again, well be able to perform it perfectly. History is filled with examples proving my statement. 名言解释常用句: 1- It means 2- The truth I can gain from this saying is 3- This saying tries to tell us that 4- The under-meaning in this proverb is 5- the profound meaning behind those words

11、is Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time. The “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of

12、time” is humorous but quite provoking. The truth I can gain from this saying is if people really want to quit smoking or do anything, they should hang on to (stick to, insist) the decision to the end but not give it up half way through. There are sufficient evidence to testify the righteousness of m

13、y understanding. 1- 建设绿色校园很重要 2- 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境 3- 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该现象重要性现象重要性: Importance+Reason/s+Point It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. A green campus will not only be essential for the physical development of students but for their mental heal

14、th as well. So I do agree to build up a green campus for the students of different grades. 重要性模版： 1- There is no doubt that its far-reaching significance imports that 2- It is of great importance to 3- Nowadays, it is essential forto 4- under no circumstance can we live without 5- Nowadays, play an

15、important role in determining 1-大学生了解社会的必要性。大学生了解社会的必要性。 2-了解社会的途径(大众媒介、社会服务等) 3- 我打算怎么做。 Nowadays, it is essential for college students to get to know the world outside the campus. Only by contacting with society can we learn more practical knowledge than just theories and adapt to(accommodate to,

16、adjust to, be accustomed to) society more quickly after we graduate from universities. So I do agree to get in touch with the world outside the campus through the following means. 社会现象社会现象 ： Phenomenon+Details+Linkage1. 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为 Today, people in growing numb

17、ers （more and more）are beginning to realize the seriousness of prevalence of excessively packing commodities. Just taking a look around (for instance, for example), clothes are packed in a well-designed plastic bags and foods and snacks are usually placed in delicate boxes. A number of reasons are r

18、esponsible for this. 1-现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2-网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3-我的建议 Nowadays, online shopping (E-shopping) has gained great popularity among more and more web users (netizens) . For example, residents, especially young generation, are wild about purchasing books, clothes and even cars on TMall, EBay and

19、 Amazon etc. The benefits of shopping online that brings to us are quite obvious. However, we cannot ignore its problems. 1-目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2-为了让孩子独立, 父母应该 Recent years have witnessed that more parents make arrangements (make decisions) for their children including which school to attend, what kind of

20、 job to take and even who is going to get married with. As a result, children are lack of ability to solve problems independently. In my opinion, parents should take some effective ways to help their children to be independent. 1- 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2- 出现这种情况的原因 3- 为了改变这种状况，我认为 Today, experts in grow

21、ing numbers are beginning to realize the seriousness of prevalence of spelling mistake among Chinese university students. Its quite common to see that more and more students can not spell correctly in the writing part in the exams and even cannot read the passages. Many reasons could be collected to

22、 give reasonable explanations for this phenomenon.becauseSample ArticleTeachers Comment The students has made a good attempt to make comparison and contrast, but some of the points he tried to argue for are controversial. S/He needs to work on the organization of the text and paragraphs and write mo

23、re clearly. A revised sample on word and sentence level dilemma/ paradox make a compromise balance choose from choose over/ prefer/ would rather promising job/money-making career interests/hobbiesA revised sample on sentence-level and style unfortunately Only life is priceless, making each day count

24、. A dialogue between father and sonSon: Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weaponFather: If you can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. 这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似: Father：Hi, sweetie, how was your school today? Daughter: Dad, you can read all about it on my blogs. Give a brief descr

25、iption of the picture 作文的第二段，进行主旨提炼并且论述。一屋不扫，何以扫天下? Express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. Conclusion and Inspiration: Little stokes fell great oaks. 12 points The picture vividly depicts a dialogue between a father and his son. The boy is worrie

26、d about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. This carton reminds me of a Chinese saying: If you dont clean your room (solve your problems) properly, then how can you manage to control the world. It is quite common that most people attach great importance

27、 to something big, but neglect small things. Doing small things is the first step of success and will lay the ground for doing something big. By doing trivial successes, we are able to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepare

28、d for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. In contrast, those who set out chase something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when big opportunities announce themselves, these people can hardly seize them because of the lack of

29、experience and confidence stems from doing small things. From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to th

30、ose who can do small things perfectly”, as Aristotle once said.The importance of reading literatureWhats the topic? 学生代表的现代人，都没有耐心阅读长篇的文字，比如文学作品，而更倾向于阅读短篇的、速食的信息。心态浮躁，没有耐性。这是一个负面现象。 图画描述，将师生的动作，对白都要写出来。没有进行图画描绘的考生，违反了题目要求，扣分 分析原因，分析一下现代人，或者是学生，为什么不太喜欢读长篇的、信息量大的文学作品：一、现代人已经更加习惯于读来自互联网和电子交流工具诸如微博、手机和Q

31、Q的短篇信息，认为这样省时省力；二、相当多的人认为文学作品枯燥乏味，而且在现代生活中没有什么用处。 阅读文学的重要性:阅读文学可以丰富知识拓展视野；二、可以激发人们批判性的、独立性的思维；三可以完善人格，使人变得耐心和积极乐观。因此，我们为什么不花点时间在文学上呢？12 points From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there is a teacher and a student standing in the classroom. When receiving a literature book given by her t

32、eacher, the little girl seems to be quite reluctant. Having observed her students response, the teacher asks her to treat the book as if she is reading a long text-message”. The cartoon aims at informing us of the phenomenon that quite a few students or youngsters are unwilling to read literature no

33、wadays. With the Internet and electronic communication tools such as micro-blogs, mobile phones and QQ becoming increasingly widespread, quite a few people are more used to reading short context. They hold that compared with long contents such as literature, these short ones are more convenient and

34、time-saving. Whats more, many students refuse to read literature in that they believe that literature is boring and of little use in modern society。 However, no one can disclaim the importance of reading literature. It enables people to enrich their knowledge and expand their horizons. Moreover, rea

35、ding literature also inspires people to think critically and independently. People die but good books live. Why not get out of the reality temporarily and spend some time on reading the classics?The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication As is described in the picture, a father asks h

36、er daughter how her school today goes on. Instead of answering directly, the daughter tells her father to read her blog. It is common that youngsters nowadays incline to communicate with others on internet increasingly, and lack communication with people around them. Directions: For this part, you a

37、re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Green Food . 1.近年来，“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。 2.分析这种现象产生的原因。 3.你对该现象的看法。 As more and more people focus on health diet, green food has begun to draw more and moreattention by the public .In recent years, the market demand for green food has increaseddramatica

38、lly ,and all kinds of green food have emerged in an endless stream . Why does green foodbecome so popular in China?Above all, compared with ordinary food,green food is healthier,saferand more nutritious.Moreover,nowadays,many vegetables are polluted because of the usage ofagricultural chemicals,whil

39、e green food is free of pollution.Besides, with the improvement of theliving standards ,more people can afford a healthier but more expensive lifestyle.So greenfood,despite its higher price,still becomes peoples favorite food. However,nowadays the market is full of real and fake green food,making many consumersconfused.Ther