大学英语四级考试提纲式文写作

1、四级写作四级写作-提纲式命题作文提纲式命题作文sample in modern world, the economy is developing fast and the population is also growing very fast. but do you know our earths healthy become terrible now? as a youth of the 21st century, what should i do to protect our earth?rapidly, increasing, is becoming directions: in th

2、is section, you are asked to write a composition entitled should people own cars or not? your composition should be based on the outline given below. your composition should be at least 120 words. outline: 1、有人赞成个人买车。 2、也有人持相反观点。 3、你的看法。 should people own cars or not? should people own cars or not?

3、now having a car is more and more popular, so many familys want to buy a car. they think its useful. some youngs think its cool, and many people think its convenent when they have a private car. they dont need to wait the crowded bus/so they can go to work on time. its save the time. and they also c

4、an drive the car go wherever they want to . a family can have a travel togethter. its comfortable. in a word, they can improve the quality of their life with a car. especially the increasing of private car can promote the economic. it can lead the development of many industries. its good for our cou

5、ntrys developing.四级作文评分原则及标准四级作文评分原则及标准14分分 漂漂亮亮：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连漂漂亮亮：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，连贯性好，基本上语言贯，连贯性好，基本上语言无误无误。11分分清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有连贯，但有少量语言错误少量语言错误。8分分马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，相当多，其中一些是严重错误其中一些是严重错误。5分分糊里糊涂：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，糊里糊涂：基本切题，表

6、达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误较多的严重语法错误。2分分一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，或大部分句子离破碎，或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严都有错误，且多数为严重错误重错误。 praise, an important gift some people think that critism can change ones view of life. however, many people argue that praise is more important. in my opinion, praise is more

7、profitable than critism. praise is like fresh air, without it, our life will become uninteresting and inhappy. giving praise does not cost the giver a lot, but, the receiver can learn much. there are many people who succeed at last with a praise, take myself for example. though it happened a long ti

8、me ago, i remember it clearly. it was a sports meeting and i attend it. at first, i was very confident and thought i was the best of them, so i had no training. the truth was, during the race, many students left me behind. then i want to give up and was frustrated. fortunately, my pe teacher came an

9、d patted on my back:” as long as you stick to continue, success will belong to you. i believe you, come on!” he said with a smile. you know, i improved dramatically and won the prize. so, praise is an important gift.写作对策写作对策 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 作文结构层次是否清晰作文结构层次是否清晰 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻语言表达

10、是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错误辑错误 是否能恰当的使用过渡性词语是否能恰当的使用过渡性词语 作文字数是否达到要求作文字数是否达到要求 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮写作体裁 议论文议论文 说明文说明文 记叙文记叙文议论文开头常用句式 recently, the problem of has aroused peoples concern. has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. it has brought a lot of benefits but has created

11、 some serious problems as well. nowadays, has become a problem we have to face. it is commonly believed that / it is a common belief that many people insist that with the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that a lot of people seem to think that 议论文结尾常用句式 taking all

12、these factors into consideration, we finally come to the conclusion that taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that hence / therefore, wed better arrive at the conclusion that there is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. all in a

13、ll, we cannot live withoutbut at the same time, we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 写作类型 提问子类提问子类 观点类对立观点观点类对立观点 观点类事物性质观点类事物性质 利弊子类利弊子类 批驳类批驳类 办法类办法类 原因类原因类提问子类should college marriage be permitted?1 关于是否允许大学生结婚的讨论在校园里关于是否允许大学生结婚的讨论在校园里兴起兴起2 我对这一现象的看法我对这一现象的看

14、法 a national debate has sprung up on whether college marriage should be permitted. many people strongly oppose the permission of college marriage. they hold that the chief task for college students is to study, and marriage will distract their attention and occupy a lot of time. moreover, students a

15、re not economically independent, so marriage will cause a lot of problems such as future job hunting and housing. in a word, they believe marriage will largely hinder both present study and future work. from my perspective, i think college marriage should be permitted but be practiced with extreme c

16、are. for one thing, the right of college students should be respected, as they are adults. for another, the restriction on the age of students was done away with in 2001, and many elder students attend universities. last but not the least, the time in college is so precious that every student will t

17、hink twice before they get married. undoubtedly, few students will ever get married after college marriage is permitted, but the authority should grant them the right. 观点类对立观点 my view on opportunity1 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。认为人人都会有某种机会。2 我的看法我的看法3 结论结论my view on opportunity whe

18、n it comes to opportunity, peoples opinions differ. some people think that there are few opportunities in the world, while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route. as far as i am concerned, i agree with the latter opinion. for one thing, i firmly believe o

19、pportunities are everywhere around us. no person will be unlucky enough to have no opportunities all the time, because every dog has his day”. for another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves. just think of newton, who discovered the law of grav

20、itation when many people had watched an apple falling ahead of them. from what has been discussed above, we may reasonably draw the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities around us. only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as an old sa

21、ying goes, opportunities are only for the prepared minds”.观点类事物性质 my view on double ba degree 1 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见 2 我对这一现象的看法我对这一现象的看法my view on double ba degree recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. in this way, they can ge

22、t double ba degrees when they graduate from the university several years later. although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. to begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the lear

23、ning tasks satisfactorily. moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. in the third place, as for todays university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. if they can make achievements in

24、 study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem. weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. this system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the com

25、ing competition. 认为，主张认为，主张argue, maintain, hold, believe考虑考虑takeinto consideration, consider, think over, reflect on认为，思考，考虑认为，思考，考虑think下结论，断定下结论，断定come to the conclusion, arrive at the conclusion, conclude, decide, assert断定断定judge获得获得acquire, obtain, attain, reap赢得，取得赢得，取得earn, gain得到得到get支持，赞成支持

26、，赞成approve of, in favor of, stand by ones side, agree with, 提倡提倡advocate, recommend支持支持support利弊子类the golden week1 黄金周给大学生带来的好处黄金周给大学生带来的好处2 黄金周给大学生带来的弊端黄金周给大学生带来的弊端3 我应当怎样过好黄金周我应当怎样过好黄金周the golden week the golden weeknational day holidayhas brought a lot of benefits to college students ever since t

27、he beginning. first, it gives students time to take a rest after months of hard work. second, they can conduct social activities to combine book knowledge with practice. third, they can also use this precious week to make progress in study or carry out specialized research. though it does good to co

28、llege students in many ways, the golden week can never to be said to bring no problems. for one thing, many students eat and sleep too much during the vacation, which are harmful to their health. for another, quite a few students spend too much time playing video games or going sightseeing. how can

29、they make progress in their study if they do not cherish time at all? in order to make good use of the golden week, i form the habit of making a concrete plan before it comes. on the one hand, i always set aside enough time for reviewing lessons and reading relevant literature. on the other hand, i

30、usually go to watch a movie and listen to a concert at the grand opera. by carefully planning my time, i am confident to spend a meaningful golden week.反对反对oppose, object to抵制抵制resist反对反对say no to意义深远的意义深远的far-reaching, profound, significant重要的重要的important充分运用充分运用optimize, make best / full use of, 使

31、用使用employ, utilize使用使用use好处，优点好处，优点advantage, merit, benefit坏处，缺点坏处，缺点disadvantage, defect, flaw, drawback, deficiency好处好处good side重要的，有重要的，有 决定性的决定性的vital, crucial, critical, decisive应用应用apply坏处坏处bad side批驳类my view on teenagers studying abroad1 现在有很多青少年出国留学现在有很多青少年出国留学2 有些人认为这种做法是有益的有些人认为这种做法是有益的3

32、我认为这种观点是不对的我认为这种观点是不对的my view on teenagers studying abroad recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their child

33、ren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future. after careful consideration, i have to say the

34、 above view is more than biased. on the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. on the other hand, the educational quality is also a question too many foreign schools aim at earning money. w

35、hen the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here? we can see clearly that although teenagers studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. it seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before

36、 going abroad.把把看做，当做看做，当做regard as, consider as, look onas, treatas, viewas把把看做，当做看做，当做seeas全面的，彻底的全面的，彻底的utter, thorough完全的完全的complete起作用起作用解释解释难以置信的，难以置信的，惊人的惊人的play a role, perform, function, serve, play a part解释解释explainaccount for, illustrate, clarifyfantastic, incredible, unbelievable, except

37、ional, extraordinary, marvelous, amazing, astonishing起作用起作用work惊人的，极好的惊人的，极好的great, surprising办法类(个人问题)how to succeed in a job interview 1 面试在求职过程中的作用面试在求职过程中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是how to succeed in a job interview a job interview is vital to the job-h

38、unting process in that if you are successful in it, you stand a good chance of final obtaining the ideal job. then how can we succeed in job interview? in the first place, you should dress and behave properly in order to leave a good first impression on the interviewer. in the second place, when it

39、comes to talking, you should speak of your expertise and special abilities clearly and honestly. whats more, self-confidence is also an important factor, telling the interviewer that you will face the challenge whenever you encounter difficulties. you will succeed in a job interview as long as you p

40、ut the above principles into practice. as a result, you will probably obtain the job you have been dreaming of .勤奋的，勤勉的勤奋的，勤勉的diligent, industrious勤奋的勤奋的hardworking认真的，谨慎的认真的，谨慎的conscientious, cautious认真的认真的careful, serious冷静的，清醒地冷静的，清醒地sober, reasonable, sensible, rational聪明的聪明的bright, intelligent,

41、 wise, brilliant平静的平静的calm适应适应be adapted to, be accustomed to, be adjusted to集中精力于集中精力于focus on, center on, concentrate on聪明的聪明的clever适应适应be used to专心于专心于set ones mind on注意注意pay ones attention to原因类harmfulness of fake commodities1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这。为什么会有这种现象种现象?

42、2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。社会等的危害。 nowadays a lot of fake commodities flood into the market and do great harm to the consumers and the whole society. why are there so many fake commodities? the first reason, in my mind, is that some people dream of earning a large sum of money easil

43、y and quickly. furthermore, the general social atmosphere is somewhat unhealthy-many people attach great importance to money instead of honesty. last but not least, some government officials are not doing their jobs. harmfulness of fake commodities the harmfulness of fake commodities has become more

44、 than obvious at the moment. first of all, the consumers are the direct victims, they spend money buying unqualified and even useless products. in the second place, the authentic producers also suffer great loss. thirdly, fake commodities may even be dangerous sometimes, such as fake food and medici

45、ne, which are a threat to peoples health. consequently, it is high time that we made great efforts to put an end to fake commodities.如何写好英语说明文？ 审题 （what, to whom, how, etc.） 开好头 写好主题句 注意行文的统一性和连贯性 注意说明方法的选择（eg.: 举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法，etc.） 注意说明顺序 （eg.: 空间顺序、时间顺序、逻辑顺序、认识顺序，etc.） 结尾（重述主题而非重复主题；简

46、短自然，避免介入新的话题）常用句式和常用表达 列举：for one thing, for another, finally, besides, moreover, oneanother, still another, first, second, then, also, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important 举例：for example, for instance, one example i

47、s, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition, a case in point, that is, incidentally, as an illustration, such as, in fact, in general, in particular, to illustrate, namely 定义：refer to, call, mean 比较a.相似的比较：likewise, in comparison, similarly, in the same mannerb.相反的比较：on the other hand, conversely

48、, on the contrary, whereas, , instead, in contrast, nevertheless, compared with 表示时间：later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meanwhile / meantime, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, si

49、nce, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, after a while, now 表示方位和顺序：before, behind, below, beneath, between, here, there, where, beyond, nearby, under, above, over, on the right (left), in (the) front of, at the back of, in the middle of, at the bottom of, opposite to, next to 表示概要

50、和结论：in a word, in short, in brief, to sum up, on the whole, by and large, all in all, so far, therefore, thus, in summary, in conclusion, to conclude, to summarize, to end with fast food restaurant 1. 快餐馆简介 2.去快餐馆的好处 3.快餐馆的发展趋势fast food restaurant if you are too busy or too tired to cook, please go

51、to the fast food restaurant where various kinds of ready-made food are served. some serve fish or chicken, some serve sandwiches or salad, and some also serve drinks, coffee, and so on. fast food restaurants are very convenient. you just go there, order your food, wait only for a few minutes, then w

52、hen the food is ready, you carry it to your table yourselves. you can either eat it in the restaurant or take the food out in a plastic container and eat it at home, in your office, in a park, or anywhere you like. nowadays, fast food restaurants are getting more and more popular in china because of

53、 their convenience and low price. they save peoples time and energy as well. this is very important for many people, especially those who are too busy or too tired to cook. 题型概述 记叙文的写作要注意交代清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、人物(character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果(effect)。 记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式：正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文

54、中最常用的一种结构，插叙很少用到。 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词 eg.: for one thingfor another、on the one handon the other (hand), etc. 要多用四级词汇 如有可能，引用一两句名言或是谚语常用句式及表达 表示时间：after a short (long) time (period), afterwards, as soon as, from that time on, immediately, lately, nowadays, shortly, since then, then, while, recentl

55、y, etc. 表示因果：accordingly, as a result (consequence), consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus 平行结构/排比结构：neithernor, eitheror, bothand, not onlybut also, as well aseg.: studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. 学习足以怡情，足以博采，足以长才。teachers day 1、 向老师致以节日祝贺 2、从一件小事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献 3、我如何回报老师的

56、关爱teachers day it is teachers day, an occasion to celebrate the contributions all teachers have made. the teaching profession deserves special recognition and respect. i want to take this precious opportunity and extend my hearty gratefulness to you: happy teachers day and may you succeed in everyth

57、ing! there is no more appropriate time than this to honor all the teachers working in this line. it is all the teachers energy and effort that makes who i am now, a man with intelligence and good personality. for the past twenty years, you have dedicated so much of your time and energy to the health

58、y development of my character and soul that i will cherish your teaching for life. dear teachers, you deserve childrens respect and love as well as parents. what sculpture is to a block of marble, teacher is to the soul of children. words can not describe my gratefulness to my beloved teachers. on t

59、he long life journey with various temptations, you are kindling my way like the beacon on a dark wavy sea. what you have done enriches my mind and broadens my envision. on this once a year occasion i want to express my love and respect for all teachers from the bottom of my heart. the only thing i can do in return is, do my utmost and contribute my share to the construction of the human world. 沮丧的，失意的沮丧的，失意的frustrated, discouraged, depressed, low-spirited不不 开心的开心的sad努力做，尽力做努力做，尽力做attempt to, make eff