托福写作语料库：单一职业选择前是否应该尝试多元职业

1、托福写作语料库：单一职业选择前是否应该尝试多元职业【工作类】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people should take different kinds of jobs before they take a career in a long term年轻人在单一职业选择前要从事多元职业，是否认同 ?【写作步骤】1. 词汇替换：替换题目中的核心词汇2. 作家立场：确立主题观点3. 思路拓展：构思支持或者反驳的理由和例证4. 正文写作：按照布局，行文展开5. 仔细检查：坚持文章的逻辑、词汇、句法。【全文

2、布局】1. 首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场2. 二段：第一次支持作家立场以及细节展开3. 三段：第二次支持作家立场以及细节展开4. 四段：第三次支持作家立场以及细节展开 （ 或者让步不支持观 点的合理性 + 再加以反驳 ）5. 尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由【头脑风暴】王小花貌美如花，李小草勤俭持家，但是，鱼和熊掌不能兼得， 得失得失，有得有失，所以，职业选择我们只能依赖自我的兴趣和优 势，最终单一选择或者多元职业选择。小鹏哥信奉的职业观是：先就 业，后择业，如果可能，自我创业。【作家立场】 有人认为单一职业选择前应该体验多元职业，我完全认同上面的 观点，我将通过如下的文章努力证

3、实我的立场。【思路拓展】1. 我们说一个人的情商很高，是说这个人有广泛的人脉资源，能 够借势用力，找到勤奋高效的成功方法。2. 今天做的事情越多，未来能做的事情就更多，因为艺多不压身。3. 多元职业选择意味着丰富人生体验和持久的新鲜感。【范文赏析】【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. However ， it often happens that pe

4、ople fall into a dilemma when faced with job selection. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essa

5、y.【解析】1. One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favoritejobs. 现代职业选择的特征之一就是：人们在选择心仪的工作的时候， 享有更多的自由。2. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in suppo

6、rt of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay. 有人认为单一职业选择前应该体验多元职业， 我完全认同上面的观点，我将通过如下的文章努力证实我的立场。【二段】第一次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业：The most glaring benefit of taking up a rich variety of employments is that one could find out what his or her in

7、terest really lies in and tap his or her infinite potentials by means of embarking on manifold jobs. In other words, to secure new jobs indicates one needs to constantly face up to the new career challenges, in this sense, jobtransition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. Meanwhile, Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment.【解析】1. The most glari ng ben efit of is that 的最