读后续写公开课课件

1、读后续写的具体要求 提提供一段供一段350350词以内词以内的语言材料，要求考生依的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150150词词左右左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整情节和结构完整的短文。的短文。1如何构思续写的内容 Step 1 Read for Read for elementselements( (要素）要素） Step 2 Read Read for plotsfor plots（情节）（情节） Step 3 Gather Gather ideas idea

2、s Step 4 Make Make predictionspredictions（预测）（预测） Step 1 Read for elementswhen:where:who:what: why:my mom, I, receptionist, between spring and summeron the road through the countryside gave flowers to nursing home，Leaving flowers for someone makes mom feel good.Tip1: We can get the main idea with th

3、e help of_. broke down5W questions Step 2 Read for plotsNo garage, no passers-byRead for plots and feelingswere driving,unhappyimpatient, annoyed“Do you know someone there?” curious,confused“Did you leave your name?”heard the car burst worriedhopelesssomewhere between spring and summer, Suddenly，in

4、the middle of nowhereBefore she started the car,Not long after we continued driving, Suddenly， adj. actions dialogues surroundings timescried, skimmed, looked back“What?”“What did you do with the flowers?”no garage, no passers-byrebellious(叛逆的）叛逆的）.drove to ask:adjActionsDialoguesSurroundingSimile(比

5、喻)BeginningClimaxEndingalways unhappycurious, confusedmisunderstandingworried, hopelessimpatient, annoyedFeeling analysisdevelopmentThe writer has_with his mom Step 3 Gather ideasgather the ideas信息整理：genre(体裁)：narration(记叙文记叙文)tense(时态)：the past tense(一般过去时一般过去时)main idea原文核心信息解读：Between spring and

6、summer, on the road through the countryside my mom gave flowers to a nursing home, because leaving flowers for others made her feel good. Unluckily, our car broke down.Step 4 Make predictions Group talking for the plot developments Para. 1：We were worried about what could be done. 1. How would the w

7、riter show their worries?2. Did anyone come to help them?Who? feeling3. How did the writer feel about being helped?Tip3 The ending of Para1 should be connected with Para2The car should have been repaired Various ways to express worriesadj.:actions: dialogues: surroundings: After what seemed to be ag

8、es, I scratched my head, stamped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly.“What if no one is willing to help us? Would we die from thirsty ?” I murmured in a low voice.The air was thick and the hot sun was burning us, I stood there clumsily with nothing to do.Deadly silence swallowed the road th

9、oroughly, leaving nothing but hopelessness. Worried and depressed, I was wandering along the road aimlessly.simile:比喻比喻 I was walking back and forth like an ant on a hot pan.Group talking for the plot developments Para. 1：We were worried about what could be done. 1. How would the writer show their w

10、orries?2. Did anyone come to help them?Who? feelingthe receptionist?an old garage man?a stranger?relievedthankfulhopeful3. How did the writer feel about being helped?1. Seeing a flower shop, what would the writer do?2. How would the writer feel?3. How could para.2 be ended reasonably?Para. 2：As we d

11、rove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road.buy some flowers to mom?be given some flowers?.excited?proud?understanding?Group talking for the plot developmentsactive or negative?feeling ending surrouning ending meaningful ending natural endingfeeling ending:Just at that moment, a ripple of(

12、一阵一阵) excitement began to cross my face.surrounding ending: A pleasant breeze was blowing, making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.meaningful ending: What mom did reminded me of a famous saying:Roses given, fragrance in hand.natural ending: We continued our travel wit

13、h a sweet smile.especially for the endingPara.1： We were worried about what could be done. After what seemed to be ages, under the hot burning son, I scratched my head, stamped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly. All of a sudden, one man with his hands waving at mom came into our view. “He

14、 is the receptionist from the nursing home.” Mom explained to me. “Why are you here?” Mom asked excitedly. “I just intended to thank you for your flowers formally.” How lucky we were! What amazed me most was that he was a retired garage man. As a consequence, he had our car repaired in a short while

15、.One possible version Paragraph 2：As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing(绚丽夺目绚丽夺目) red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of my mothers kindness, I decided to send mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal(隐藏隐藏) her excitement, but the glittering(晶莹的晶莹的) tears filled her eyes. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. Just at that moment, a pleasant wind was blowi