初中英语书面表达解题技巧及经典题型及练习题(含答案)

1、初中英语书面表达解题技巧及经典题型及练习题（ 含答案 ）一、英语书面表达1 书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy 发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy 回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（ physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（ 1 ）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（ 2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。（ 3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3

2、. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少 80 词。Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I ll tellit to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take e

3、xercise less than an hour every day.Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I adv

4、ise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy 回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I ambusy because I have ，Doing exercise can help , So I advise you to 等句式的应用。写作

5、中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy 的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy 要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2. 每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变 化 ?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?3. 变化是如何发生的

6、?4. 变化后有什么感受?【答案】The biggest personal change I ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking wi

7、th a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was , my mother always read Gradually I began

8、 to , Books are 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关 系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, beginto do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3.书面表达每年的4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校

9、将开 展读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。读书的意义1 .获取知识，开阔视野2 .使人愉悦，益于学习3 . ,（,自由发挥）现状1 .作业多，无良好读书习惯2 .不知道读什么书，不会选择倡议（至少两点）注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life.Let ' s start reading now!【答案】 R

10、eading is very important in our daily life .First of all, reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books . It can also help to open up a whole new world to us . Second, reading will/can make us clever and happy . It is good for our study and it can help us grow up . Third, reading ca

11、n help us think more and further and make our life more colourful .However, there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading . Moreover , some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Interne

12、t .In my opinion , our school can have a"Reading Week"once a term . Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library . We must spend more time reading some useful books. As a result, we can have a better future .Let's start reading now!【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中

13、使用了非常好的短 语， 例如 first of all, all kinds of books , help to do , be good for, more and further , so much, spend too much time doing , search the Internet , in my opinion , as a result 等。同时 First of all, / Second, / Third 等时间副词和 However/ Moreover / As a result 等结构副词的运 用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本

14、文的最大亮 点°点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。4.今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生 和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提 示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。观点理由一些学生赞成拥有方便与家长联系；一些老师反对拥后有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；你的观点1.2.要求:1 .表

15、达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；'2 .必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；3 .词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily lifetoday.【答案】 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. Ho

16、wever, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and eas

17、ily.Some teachers are against it. They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.In my opinion, I think it is helpful f

18、or students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly , students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【详解】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注

19、意 语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如 but, so, then等。可以适 当使用高分句型。【点睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way .我认为正确的 方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。I think+宾语从句。It is+形容词for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是 的。5.临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质

20、报告.NameTommyCharacteristics聪明、大方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）Problems面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions（根据实际情况提2点建议）要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of m

21、y team called Moonlight.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading

22、 has a good effect on children s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.H

23、owever, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy 各方面的内

24、容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy 提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school thisyear.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always re

25、ady to help others. 、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. 、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。6 书面表达初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演 请你以 Believe Myself, and I Will Win 为题写一篇演

26、讲稿。提示：（1） What was the event?（ 2） How did you make it?（ 3） What s your feeilng?要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。（ 2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（ 3）词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello,everyone!Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old say

27、ing goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just could n t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a

28、 will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I foundwhen I put my heart into it, English didn' t ' seem that difficult. I made great progress. My

29、parentsand teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Bel

30、ieve myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以 Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形 式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的 事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写 作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的 英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式

31、。写作 时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需 要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不 能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行 表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词 以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点： 首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合 理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文

32、使 用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确， 尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简 单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句 型， 如 When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. 、 My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.

33、、I found when I put my heart into it , English didn ' t ' seem that difficietfuture, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! 等等。7.书面表达共享单车(shared bikes)在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜"，请

34、你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势1 .随处可见，出行方便2 .启益健康，减少污染3.费用不高，负担得起存在问题1 .未及时归还2 .占道挡路你的观点我认为（考生自拟，至少2点）注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中 你的观点”一栏用23句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bik

35、es are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also

36、can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people

37、 to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.【解析】这篇作文要求我们给21世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题 目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题 以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达， 而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通 过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或 者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。

38、写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不 同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文 章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文 章意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成 了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一 些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如They can be see

39、n everywhere so that it's easy for us toget around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. 这几个长 句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如 Also, What ' s more, But, sometim

40、es, After a瞭 等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。8 书面表达以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100 词的短文。要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young treeneeded watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meime

41、i kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,“ Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both ofthem were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are

42、 good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使

43、用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用 恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke 等。语法规范、准确。短

44、文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree neededwatering and it was going to die. 这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided todo something for the young tree 这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth. 决定做某事；Afterthat, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss

45、Li, spoke highly of them. 这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of 等等。9 环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。提示词语：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题： What are the main environmental problems we

46、 have? What can we do in ourdaily life?What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or

47、 on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big d

48、ifference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善 环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。 例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用 的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； take action ； make a bigdifference 。句型： When w