高考作文的华丽变身之修辞(1)

1、高考作文的华丽变身（一）高考作文的华丽变身（一）-修辞的运用修辞的运用什么样的作文才是一篇好作文？什么样的作文才是一篇好作文？无遗漏信息点（审题）无遗漏信息点（审题）篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组适当的适当的修辞手法的运用修辞手法的运用思考：你能想到的修辞手法有哪些？思考：你能想到的修辞手法有哪些？ 推荐高中写作推荐高中写作5种修辞手法种修辞手法一、一、比喻比喻 操作难度 写作效果二.二. 拟人拟人 操作难度 写作效果 三三. 排比排比操作难度 写作效果四四. 夸张夸张 操作难度 写作效果五五. 引用引用

2、操作难度 写作效果 Life without love is life without sunshine.Life is like a box of chocolates: you never know what youre going to get. -Forrest Gump1. You dont know what will happen in your life.2. Love is very important in our life.3. Gratitude is very useful and we should be grateful. 比 喻Gratitude is like

3、 sunshine, which can provide people with warmth; gratitude is like breeze, which can blow away misunderstanding. Let the flowers of gratitude bloom in our heart!比喻比喻 是以两种具有相同特征的事物和现象进行对比，表明本体和喻体之间的相似关系，两者都在对比中出现。常用比喻词like, as, as if等，例如： My love is like red red rose.本体比喻词喻体Living without an aim is l

4、ike sailing without a compass（明喻）Try :1. _without_ is like _ without _. 2. Like _, learning English takes time, too. 3. If you take a deep breath of the fresh air, believe it or not, you will feel like _building a housedrinking a cup of green tea.Time is a river, of which memory is the water. Time i

5、s money. （暗喻）You ask me to help him with his English? It is to teach fish to swim. He is an expert on English. Hope is a good breakfast, but it is a bad supper.Try: Knowledge is _. _ is _.powerBeijing the heart of our country1. One thing witnessed the power of polite words.2.Thefirstdayofthistermfou

6、ndmeonmywaytoschool,beautifulflowers smilingandlovelybirdssinginginthewood.3.Thenightgentlylaysherhandatourfeveredheads.拟人是把生命赋予无生命的事物，用人的动作来描述事物翻译: 去年夏天，我们一起度过了一个美好的假期._Try:_Last summer saw/ witnessed the nice holiday we spent togetherNo.8 High School witnessed the effort we made to fight for our d

7、ream. Sometimes working outdoors, sometimes in an office, sometimes using scientific equipment and sometimes meeting local people and tourists, I am never bored. When one gets down, praise can lift him up; when one loses heart, praise can give him courage to overcome any difficulty stopping him carr

8、ying on. When one gets lost, praise can brighten his way and guide him to success.三三. 排比排比操作难度 写作效果排比一般由三项或三项以上的词语或句子构成，其并列的结构常相同或排比一般由三项或三项以上的词语或句子构成，其并列的结构常相同或类似，意义相关，语气连贯。排比次序一般由轻到重，由低潮到高潮。类似，意义相关，语气连贯。排比次序一般由轻到重，由低潮到高潮。Nurses show their praise to patients to give them belief to live healthier; t

9、eachers express their praise to students to encourage them to study harder; sales men let out their praise to customers to appeal to them to buy more. -“The power of praise” Try: Friends play an important role in our life. When we are alone, they accompany us; when we are extremely sad, they encoura

10、ge us; when we get into trouble, they help us out.1. My blood froze. 2、When I told our father about this, his heart burst. 3、My heart almost stopped beating when I heard the news.4. You are the whole world to me, and the moon and the stars.四四. 夸张夸张TRY: (I am angry.)_TRY: （The scenery is beautiful.)

11、_夸张夸张是以言过其实的说法表达强调的目的.它可以加强语势,增加表达效果.I am burning with fire.The scenery is so beautiful that it takes my breath away.五五 引用引用 操作难度 写作效果As the famous saying goes, “ ”Seeing is believingOne is never too old to learn.Knowledge is power.Jack shall have Jill, all shall be well.A bold attempt is half success.East or west, home is the best.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.Practice makes perfect!Writing 人们结交的朋友通常有两种：与自己志趣相似的或不同的。两种朋友各有特点。请你