18-19Unit3SectionⅦWriting——人物传记

1、Section VH Writing人物传记写作技法指导文体指导写人物传记，主要是对其生平、主要事迹和贡献进行介绍，使读者对他们有 一个更为清晰和全面的了解。1. 人物传记的一般结构(1) 介绍人物的出生时间、地点。(2) 介绍人物的主要经历、事迹或成就等。(3) 介绍人物的主要贡献或者地位。(4) 最后对人物作一定的评价。2. 人物传记的写作顺序传记多采用时间顺序来组织材料，写作前可以根据获得的材料列一个简单的 写作提纲，将值得写的内容列出来，然后进行筛选。3. 人物传记的常用时态介绍人物的生平事迹和成就等主要以一般过去时为主，对人物的评价常用一般现在时。亮点句式1. She took an

2、 active part in social activities.她积极参与社会活动。2. She showed great in terest in draw ing making up her mind to be a pain ter.她对绘画很感兴趣，决心成为一名画家。3. It was in 2019 that he began to work as a doctor.正是在2019年他开始从事医生职业。4. He fell in love with scienee anddevoted himself tdt.他迷上了科学并且致力于它。5. He lived a hard lif

3、e before he became a great success.在他获得成功之前，生活比较清苦。6. She finished middle school in 1965 after which she went to university.她在1965年中学毕业，然后上了大学。第1页7. works作品7. The most important thing is that he is warm-hearted.最重要的事是他有一颗热心肠。8. So strongminded was he thathe could keep up until he succeeded. 他意志很坚强，他

4、会继续做下去直到成功。满分佳作构建写作任务请你就下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍德国著名作曲家巴 赫。姓名Joha nn Sebastian Bach生卒年代16851750生平1.生于德国埃森纳赫市（Eisenach）的一个音乐世家。9岁丧母， 10岁丧父。2.少年时期靠奖学金上学，1702年毕业，1703年成为一名小 提琴手，此后创作了许多曲子。3.晚年双目失明仍坚持创作。1750年在莱比锡（Leipzig）去世。评价伟大的作曲家，西方文化史上最重要的人物之一。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯审题谋篇体裁人物传记类记叙文时态一般过去时主题德国著名作曲家巴

5、赫的生平人称第三人称结构第一段：有关巴赫的基本信息和主要生平经历。第二段：对他的评价。遣词造句I.对接单元词汇1.musical音乐的2.scholarship奖学金3.violi nist小提琴家4.compose作（诗、曲）5.lose on e's sight失明6.create创作第2页第5页8. composer作曲家9. discourage sb.from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事10. keep on doing sth.继续做某事11. in the history of.在历史上n .巧用单元句式、语法（一）完成句子1. 九岁时，他失去了母亲，第二年他的

6、父亲去世了。（and连接并列句）At the age of nine, he lost his mother, and the next year his father died2. 小时候，他靠奖学金上学，1702年毕业。（when引导时间状语从句）When he was young he went to school on a scholarship and graduated in 1702.3 .不幸的是，晚年他双目失明。（it作形式主语）It was unfortunate that he lost his sight completely in his later life.4.

7、然而，他仍坚持创作了很多作品。However，he still kept on creating many works.（二 ）句式升级1. 用状语从句的省略形式改写句 2When young, he went to school on a scholarship and graduated in 1702.2. 用 unfortunately 词改写句 3Unfortunately，he lost his sight completely in his later life.妙笔成篇【参考范文】Johann Sebastian Bach was born into a musical fam

8、ily in 1685 in Eisenach, Germany.Bach had an unhappy childhood.At the age of nin,ehe lost his mother, and the next year his father died.When young，he went to school on a scholarship and graduated in 1702.And then in 1703，he became a violinist.And from then on，he composed a lot of works.Unfortunately，he lost his sight completely in his later life.However，this did n't discourage him from worki ng on music, and he still kept on creati ng m