任务型写作指导广东学习教案

1、会计学1任务型写作指导任务型写作指导(zhdo)广东广东第一页，共36页。IV. 写作写作(共两节共两节,满分满分40分分)第一节第一节: 基础写作基础写作 第二节第二节:读写任务读写任务(共共1小题小题,满分满分25分分)请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,写一篇写一篇150词左右的英语短文词左右的英语短文.任务说明任务说明 请认真阅读下面的短文请认真阅读下面的短文,然后然后(rnhu)完成以下的任务完成以下的任务:1 )概括短文的内容要点概括短文的内容要点,该部分的词数大约该部分的词数大约 30-50字左右字左右;)Leading in第1页/共35页第二页，共3

2、6页。Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.摘要(zhiyo)Warming up第2页/共35页第三页，共36页。Preparation for writing a summaryFind key wordsFind key sentencesFind the main ideaWarming up第3页/共35页第四页，共36页。任务型写作任务型写作-归纳大意的写作归纳大意的写作仔细阅读所给的文段仔细阅读所给的文段.找出每一个段落的主题句找出每一个段落的主题句(topic sente

3、nce), 并用下划线划出。注意并用下划线划出。注意首句和首段原则。首句和首段原则。根据题目的详细要求，审清要写的短文的题材和体裁如根据题目的详细要求，审清要写的短文的题材和体裁如“发言发言/演讲稿演讲稿”、书信、日记、通知、记叙文、说明文或议论文（、书信、日记、通知、记叙文、说明文或议论文（比较少是议论文）等等。从整体上把握好文章的格式比较少是议论文）等等。从整体上把握好文章的格式(g shi)和结构。和结构。根据要求和主题以及自己要表达的观点，确立好标题根据要求和主题以及自己要表达的观点，确立好标题根据找出的每一个段落的主题句，用同义词、短语或句子，通过根据找出的每一个段落的主题句，用同义

4、词、短语或句子，通过恰当的关联词或过渡词串写成个句子。（恰当的关联词或过渡词串写成个句子。（30词）词）第4页/共35页第五页，共36页。Passage I How to choose a career1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When st

5、udents choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then all their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemp

6、loyment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.第5页/共35页第六页，共36页。 How to choose a career1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confu

7、sed about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then all their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned ins

8、tead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.第6页/共35页第七页，共36页。Task Summary At fifteen,students should know what career they wi

9、ll have in the future based on their school performance. They need instructions. Society pays when young people choose the wrong career. (30 words)第7页/共35页第八页，共36页。Task : Write a summary of passage Lets have a try!Read the passage and write a summary第8页/共35页第九页，共36页。Task Two Recently, students in ou

10、r class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. On t

11、he other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research,

12、 we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 第9页/共35页第十页，共36页。Task Two 1 Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 2 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. 3 They think space is too far away from us and our da

13、ily life. 4 And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. 5 On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. 6 We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. 7 Also, space re

14、search will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.8 Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 第10页/共35页第十一页，共36页。Task TwoPart:Part:Part: Three parts:How many parts can we group the pa

15、ssage into?Sentence OneSentences Two-FourSentences Five-Eight第11页/共35页第十二页，共36页。section: Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.section: 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life

16、. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. WhatA survey on whether(Result ) DisagreementTask TwoWhat does the writer want to tell us in each part?第12页/共35页第十三页，共36页。Task Twosection: On the other hand, 70% think space is worth

17、exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by

18、moving to other planets one day. (Result) Agreement第13页/共35页第十四页，共36页。Task TwoOutline because and . While because and .A survey on whether space is worth exploring What: Disagreement: Agreement :not worthwhile ; too far awayour daily life; a waste of money.worth; benefit a lot; solve problem of comm

19、unication , weather forecast, energy shortages, even the population.第14页/共35页第十五页，共36页。Task Two A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the exploring has little to do with our daily life and it will be a waste of money. While

20、70% think it worthwhile because it brings us benefit and helps to solve the problem of communication, weather report , energy shortage, and even population problem. (64words)Summary第15页/共35页第十六页，共36页。Task Two A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think i

21、t unnecessary, because the exploring which wastes money has little to do with our daily life . While 70% think it worthwhile because it brings us benefit . (42words)Summary第16页/共35页第十七页，共36页。What should you pay attention to when writing a summary?Focus on main ideas and omit(省去省去) examples, specific

22、 details, and minor supports.2. Mainly use the words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use our own words.(主要引用原文的词句主要引用原文的词句,不能添加自己不能添加自己(zj)的见解，但是要用自己的见解，但是要用自己(zj)的语言概括）的语言概括）3. Write it in the third person .（第三人称）（第三人称）suggestions第17页/共35页第十八页，共3

23、6页。Change unnecessary clauses into phrases2. Change useless phrases into single words 3.Change the sentence structure(结构结构(jigu)4.Change the voice(语态语态) of the sentence5.Use the synonyms(同义词同义词)About the language第18页/共35页第十九页，共36页。概括所给短文内容概括所给短文内容(nirng)要点要点约约30字字过渡词引出主题句过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点自己的观点-理由理由 约约1

24、05字字总结句总结句 约约15字字第19页/共35页第二十页，共36页。第20页/共35页第二十一页，共36页。n2. 第一段要做到有层次感第一段要做到有层次感:n必要时概括段中运用必要时概括段中运用n firstly,secondly,lastly,n或或but, so等来列出原文作等来列出原文作者观点或内容。者观点或内容。n3. 第一段概括要抓住要点第一段概括要抓住要点,语言语言精练精练:n第21页/共35页第二十二页，共36页。Parents Help Is ImportantParents Help Is Important第22页/共35页第二十三页，共36页。nAs far as Im concernedn 第23页/共35页第二十四页，共36页。第24页/共35页第二十五页，共36页。money but cant put money above everything else.第25页/共35页第二十六页，共36页。第26页/共35页第二十七页，共36页。第27页/共35页第二十八页，共36页。nfirstly,secondly,