201X年最新短文改错

1、（一）Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it ?s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,

2、we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fel

3、l asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and th

4、e ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by gro

5、wn-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（三）I ?m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we?ve won several games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn?tplay basketball once more. H

6、is parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their pare

7、nts happy.（4）When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I beg

8、an to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.（5）Dear Ralph,I ?m a newcomer

9、 here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like

10、to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at?tonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei（6）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do ove

11、r a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then,

12、a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That ?s how I' m going to do.（7）Dear Susan,I ?mvery glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfo

13、rtunately, I won?t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won?t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I wi

14、ll take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we?ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming（8）You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It ?s like going to a huge library without have to walk

15、 around to find your books.Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. They have been reports in America about people trying to steal personInformations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not allinformation are good to society. For

16、 example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own and discove

17、r an interest which can even last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy because they are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So once you?ve started collecting seriously, you willproba

18、bly want to join in the Stamp Collectors?Club which exist to add more stampsto your collection.（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to s

19、choolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said;“ It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to , produce ?child

20、without limit. ”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.1)第一行： two-days 改为 two-day第二行：mountain前加a第三行：noon 后加when第四行：them 改为us第五行：visiting改为visited第六行：pictures ； passed第七行：去down第八行：and 改为but第九行：去at(2)第一行： with 改为 on第二行：many

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22、ything第四行：my改为a;去掉should第五行：talk 改为 talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加 it第八行：reads 改为 read ；word 改为 words(5)第一行：of 改为 from第二行：quietly 改为 quiet第三行：well 后加 as ； to 改为 at第四行：happy 改为 unhappy/sad第五行：that 改为 why； talked 改为 talk第六行：stranger 改为 strangers第七行：since 改为 but第八行：去掉about(6)第一行：划掉myself ； a 改为 the第二行：visit改为 visiting第三行：my前加of第四行：excited 改为 exciting第五行： So 改为 But第六行： cost 改为 costs ； giving 改