假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院

1、假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院1. XX年课标全国卷I假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1. 词数100左右；2可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语 已为你写好。写作提示本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态，以第一人称 为主体人称；注意要点要齐全，包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日 期：写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词，以使文章行文连贯' 流畅：这 一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。One possible version :Dear PeterI ' d li

2、ke to ask you to write an article for our schoosEnglish newspaper.rm looking forward to hearing from youYours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼 得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简 单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生 活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态' 语 态；就本文

3、而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加 文草的売点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和 结构。比如 It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定 语，And we would especially wele articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high s

4、chool students.运用 了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to, hear from 等。考点：考查提纲作文。【满分作文】Dear Peter,Recently , in order to broaden our horizons : our school newspaper, which is very popular amongus students , will start a column about western life and culture We are in gr

5、eat needof such articles That * s why I am writing to youThe “Foreign Cultures 5, section carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their countries. And we would especially wele articles about the life of American senior-high and how America ns spend their holidays and festiv

6、als. In addition , you can introduce a western festival, such as Christmas, the In dependence Day and so on.In a word, you can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative before June 28th , so that it can be published in time.Looking forward to your reply Yours ,Li Hua2.

7、xx年课标全国卷II假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home )陪老人们过重阳节 (the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往， 内容包括：1 出发及返回时间；2活动：包饺子、表演节目等。、/ I 注意：1词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结语已为你 写好。写作提示1 .本文为应用文一一电子邮件的写作，属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用 第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。2 .内容要点：（1）出发及返回时间；（2）在敬老院的活动：包饺子、表演节 目等。One possible version :De

8、ar Lucy I ' d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival Itis the day for the elderly in our culture We* II go and makedumplings and cakes with the elderly people there We' II also spend somefun time together singing，danci

9、ng and playing games, which we hope will make them happy . We should be back around 4 o'clock in the after noon . If you are able to e with us, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning .Looking forward to your reply .Yours , Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信

10、，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提 示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请' 时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要 依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给 的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态' 语态；就本文而言应该用 一般将来时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We*II also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and

11、 playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了 which引导的定语从句和句式spend timedoing o it匕夕卜，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us , for a visit to, make dumplings等。考点：考查提纲作文。【满分作文】Dear Lucy ,The Double Ninth Festival , which is the day, set aside for the elderly in our culture, is drawing near Our cl

12、ass plan to visit the nursing home this Saturday in order to help the elderly there and enrich our after-class life at the sametime.Here are somedetailed arrangements during our stay there We* 11 makedumplings and cakes with the elderly people. We' 11 also spend somefun time together singing, da

13、ncing and playing games, which will makethem happy. Weshould be back around 4 o* clock in the afternoon as planned. I' m convinced that the activity will beenjoyable and meaningfulIf you'd 1 ike to join us, please let us know and we* 11 wait for you atthe school gate at 9 in themorning.Yours

14、,Li Hua3. xx年北京卷第一节假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：1 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间、地点、参加者等）；2说明你打 算参加的原因；3. 询问对方的意向注意：1 词数不少于50；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总 词数。提示词：龙舟训练营Dragon Boat Training Camp写作提示本文为提纲类作文，在写作时应主要使用第一人称和第二人称，时态包括般将来时、一般现在时和现在进行时。参考词汇：summer holiday暑假One possible version :Dear Ji

15、m ,I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summerholiday I intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp I wonderif you'd like to go with meThis campwill open on July 20th It offers teenagers ,1 ike you andme , a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture If you are interes

16、ted in it , let meknow and I 1II send you more information Hope to meet you at the training camp this summerYours ,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于 典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请一介 绍活动（时间，地点，内容，参加原因）一期待和感谢。亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。女口：I ' mwriting to tell you myexciting plan fo

17、r the summerholiday ； I wonder if you ' d like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般将来时' 一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事 情，对时态有较好的把握。考点：应用文类书面表达尺代1 1 : Q第一R假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以u ADay with a Craftsman 为题，给校刊"英语角”写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60 o _假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院。提示词： 一个面团 a piece of do

18、ugh ® A dough figurine写作提示1 .本文为图画类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一般 过去时为主。2 .内容要点欢迎(2)示范实践拍照One possible version :Last Tuesday , our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm wele and two boys helped him with t

19、he tool box First , he showedus the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines We stood around him and watched attentively Then we started to have a tryThe oldourselves manwalked around and helped us patiently Finally , we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old c

20、raftsman Looking at the figurines, wewere all very excited We hope we can have more activities of this kind!试题分析：本文依然用四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程，与往年一 样，体裁为记叙文，与往年不同的是，命题并未给出作文开头，需学生自己写 一个事件的概括及总体感受作为文章的第一段。亮点说明】范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原贝0。范文使用

21、了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.； 定语从句 we put the figurines we made on the table ； 时间状语从句 When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm wele and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法矢口 识使用得当，叙事清晰。考点：图表类记叙文4. xx年天津卷假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中

22、文班 捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并 告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。(1) ; (2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；(3)询问对方的其他需求。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行 文连-EB-贝o参考词汇:学生会the Student Union写作提示1书信格式，用第一人称和第二人称，主要用一般现在时和一般 将来时:2 要点齐全：；捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等：询问对方的其他需求；告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。3 注意上下文的连贯性和书信语言的得体性。One possible vers

23、ionDear ChrisI'm Li Jin , chairman of the Student Union in ChenguangHighSchool I ' mwriting to tell you something about donating books to your class To enhance munication with your school, weprepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature With them, you may have a better

24、understanding of China and its culture Well take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs Isincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop

25、 our friendship Best wishes!Yours , Li Jin解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点:理解要点要表达的含义， 自我介绍及写信目的；不能遗漏要一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点, 点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.2. 拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3询问对方的其他需求；4告知将于今 年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态， 上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注 意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。考点：考查提纲作文。5. xx年江苏卷请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求

26、用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。【写作内容】1 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3. 根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。_假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院。【写作要求】1 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校 名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。写作提示本文为图表类作文。可分三段来写。第一段按题目要求用约30个词简 要概括写作材料的要点；第二段结合材料信息简要分析导致交通事故的主要 原因：第三段简

27、要阐明自己对交通问题的观点。写作时注意句子之间和段落 之间衔接词的使用，以使行文流畅。One possible versionThe traffic issue is a hard nut to crack It not only affects our everyday life , but may also threaten people's lives The three selectionspresented above are typical examplesQuite a few things give rise to the traffic problem In spit

28、e of the large- scale construction of roads and highways， thereis still much room for improvement , because of the ever increasing number of cars these years What* s worse , some drivers , cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules .In fact , traffic rules are part of the r

29、ules and regulations closely related to public order Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos But rules alone don't secure an orderly society It is the people who obey the rules that matter It is everybody 's duty to observe them to keep our society in or

30、der and going on the right track解析】 假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院综合考查试题分析：今年江苏英语采用了 “材料类一图形一提纲类“形式,考生阅读材料，识图和写作能力，较往年有所创新，也增加了难度。材料分为 三部分：第一部分讲述了一位老奶奶阻止车辆停放引发的争议。第二部分讲 述了行人和自行车不遵守红绿灯，导致交通事故发生的现象。第三部分是图 表和文字，反映近几年车辆数量激增 现象。要求第一段用30个单词概括材 料内容；第二段分析导致交通问题的原因；第三段从社会规则和个人行为谈谈 启示(不少于两点)书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2活动：包饺子、表演节目等。1 词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3结语已为你写好Looking forward to your reply.Yours ,Li HuaDear Lucy ,rd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festiva