2019届高考英语(通用版)二轮复习书面表达专题训练：技法5高级的词汇复杂的句式(含解析)

1、技法5|高级的词汇，复杂的句式 技法综述 写作时，“高级词汇与复杂句式”如能运用得贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也 会为你的作文增光添彩。 1. 使用高级词汇 (1) 标新立异 写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感 觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。 We have too much homework to do at the weeke nd. T We have endlesshomework to do at the weeke nd. In the coming three years, our school life w

2、ill be difficult. T in the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. He didnt listen to what I said in the class. T He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class. So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to achieve success. T So long as we hold fast to o

3、ur ideals and never give up, we are bound to achieve success. (2) 短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 Developing a good habit is also important. T Developing a good habit is also of importance. I can no Ion ger bear the way he speaks to us. T I can no Ion ger put up with the way he speaks to us. Whats more,

4、 we can pour out the troubles we face, and release our pressure from different aspects. TWhats more, we can pour out the troubles we are faced with, and release our pressure from differe nt aspects. As the nu mber of En glish lear ners is increasing, its not difficult for them to un dersta nd these

5、words in Chin ese con texts. T As the number of English learners is on the rise, its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chin ese con texts. 2. 使用复杂句式 (1)复合句 复合句包括定语从句、名词性从句 （主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句 ）和状语 从句。 A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.（定语

6、从句 ） What impressed me most was that they had had professional training .（主语从句和表语从 句） I am wondering whether you can pick him up at the airport .（宾语从句 ） I hold the opinion that we should go to help them overcome the present difficulty. （同位语从 句） As long as you keep on trying, you will surely succeed.

7、（状语从句） （2）非谓语动词与 with复合结构 非谓语动词包括不定式、动名词和分词（现在分词和过去分词），特别是 with复合结构的应 用更是写作中的一大亮点。 Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work. Touched by the teachers words， we decided to work hard. Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some sugge

8、sti ons. With the society developing rapidly, its n ecessary for us to have a good comma nd of En glish and computer. 阅卷现场 (2019 四川高考)假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生 Sharon在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她 提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子 邮件。 1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意： 1. 词数 12

9、0 左右，开头语已为你写好； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 Hi, Sharon. This is Li Xia .I lear ned from your post that you want to improve your Man dari n. Li Xia 考生作文 点评与优化 作文提升 Hi, Sharon. This is Li Xia.1 learned from 名师点评 本文的词数符合要 求，但是由于缺少高 级的表达而影响了 文章的档次。 1. 本文在咼级词汇方 面使用较少， 有些词 汇是可以升级的。例 如very 可升级为

10、more than, help 可升 级为 give a helping ha nd, first 可升级为 to begin/start with , n eed 可升级为 call for 等。 2. 本文使用的复合句 也是寥寥无几， 适当 地使用一些复合句 和非谓语动词会提 升文章的档次， 使阅 卷人愿意为此作文 打咼分。 尝试优化 Hi, Sharon, your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.l am very glad to help you. First of all , I have spoken Man dari n

11、for about 17 years.And I have helped two exchange students with their learning Mandarin in the past two years .Im sure I can do very well. We all know that Ianguage learning needs lots of practice and Man dari n lear ning also needs lots of practice.We must use every time to practice it.Because to p

12、ractice a lot is very important.Keeping a diary also helps us to improve it. You said that you would teach English in return.l very need it , so it is very good for me. Look forward to your reply ! li Xia This is Li Xia .I lear ned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.l am more than

13、 glad to give a helping hand.To start with , I have been speak ing Man dari n for about 17 years.And I have helped two exchange students with their Mandarin learning.So rm con fide nt that I will do it well. As is always the case with Ianguage learning , Mandarin learning also asks for lots of practice.To practice as much as possible is where the secret lies.Besides, keeping a Mandarin diary also helps a lot. You mentioned that you would l