2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信(二)写作指导例析(3页word版)

1、第 1页共 3页 2019 届二轮复习书面表达申请信（二）写作指导例析 你校的外教 Chris Pears on 开设了一个英语辅导班（En glish Tutorial），可根据 学生的实际需要进行辅导。报名者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内 容。假如你是李明，请你给外教写一封电子邮件申请加入辅导班。 内容主要包括： 1 介绍个人情况； 2说明辅导意向（如口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项 ）； 3. 表达愿望。 注意：1词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Pearson I am writin

2、g to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial. Look ing forward to your reply. Yours sin cerely, Li Ming 题目要求 四步写作 一、 定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、 列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 1. 介绍个人情况 擅长 be_good_at 申请 apply_for 2. 说明英语学习中的困难 在 . 方面有困难 have_.difficultyn_. 第 2页共 3页 3. 要参加的辅导项目 英语口语 oral_English

3、语法 grammar 4 参加辅导的愿望 如果 . 我将不胜感激 I_would_appreciate_it_f_. 申请 application 三、 由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1 我认为这是一个提高我的英语技能的好机会。 1 think it _is a . good chance, for me. to .improve my. English . skills. 2 虽然已经学习英语近六年了，我仍然没掌握好。 Though .I . have been. learning. English . for .nearly . six . years, m . still . not g

4、ood. at it. 3 我觉得语法很困难，以至于我必须花很多时间在上面。 I find . the. grammar . is . so . difficult that . I. must spend much . time on . it. 4. 我们的老师只强调英语知识的教学。 因此，我们没有机会练习英语口语。 Our. teacher . only. emphasizes. the .teaching of . English .knowledge.As . a result, we have . no. chance . to. practise . oral .English.

5、 5. 我确信，在你的帮助下，我的语法和口语可以大大提高。 Im . convinced. that . my . grammar. and oral . English .could . be greatly. .improved with your . help. 四、 衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用 firstly, in addition, therefore 等衔接词串句成文 Dear Mr.Pearson I am writ ing to apply for the membership of the En glish Tutorial. I think . it . is .

6、a. good . chance . for .me . to. improve. my. English. skills. Firstly-.d . like . to .tell, .you . my. present .situation. Though. I .have . beenearning . English . for .nearly. six . years,m. still. not good. at .it. .I . find 一 the . 第 3页共 3页 grammar .is. so . difficult . that.I. must. spend . mu

7、ch . time . on .it.n. addition, . to. .ensure. stu.de nt.s. can .get. good . marks in. exams,. our teacher . only . emphasizes . the teaching. of English. knowledge. As . a. result, we . have .no. chance . to . practise . oral English. From .time. to time,丄 cant. get .my . ideas across . to . others

8、. Therefore,. I. hope . I. can .be . a. member . of. the English Tutorial.m convinced .that. my . grammar .and. oral .E nglish.could.-be. greatly . improved .with. your help. Look ing forward to your reply. Yours si ncerely, Li Mi ng 写改两用 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有 10 处错误，请改正。 Dear Mr.Pears on, I am writi

9、ng to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial. As an Senior 3 student, m not doing very well in English but I always get poor marks in the exam. Although my spoke n En glish is very good, and I can eve n com muni cate to the foreigners, but my written English and grammar are very bad. Besides, I can t write the English composition good, that is what troubles me most. Could you offer me guide on En glish lear ning, especially writte n En glish and grammars in the En glish Tutorial? I would appreciate if you could consider mine application. Look ing forward to your reply. Y