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1、高考阅卷方式：高考阅卷方式：1. 分工明确，专人负责分工明确，专人负责2. 监控严格，时间统一监控严格，时间统一3. 标准清晰，档次分明标准清晰，档次分明请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。篇短文。 Small things make a big difference. The small things you do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：注意：无须写标题；无须写标题； 除诗歌外，文体不限；除诗歌外，文体不限； 内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；内容必须结合你生

2、活中的具体事例； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数不少于词数不少于120左右，如引入提示语则不计入总词数。左右，如引入提示语则不计入总词数。评分原则评分原则本题总分为本题总分为3030分，按分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。 词数少于词数少于120120，将分数降低一个档次。，将分数降低一个档次。 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求

3、的前提下侧重语言的表达。符合题目要求的前提下侧重语言的表达。评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。拼写与标点符号是语言准确的一个方面，评分拼写与标点符号是语言准确的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。个档次。我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我各档次的给分范围和要求各档次的给分范围和要求第五档第五档

4、25-30分分完全完成了试题规定的任务。所有内容与提示吻合。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。语法结构与词汇应用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达；具备较强的语言运用能力。恰当使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档第四档19-24分分完成了试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示吻合。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构与词汇应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达有一定影响。较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档第三档13-18分分基本完成了试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示比较吻合。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。有一些

5、语法结构与词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档第二档7-12分分仅完成试题规定的部分任务。主要内容与提示基本吻合。语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档第一档1-6分分未完成试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示不太吻合。语法结构单一，应用词汇十分有限。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。 As a member in our so

6、ciety, I can never emphasize the importance of making contributions to the society too much. As a matter of fact, it is the small things we do that show our sense of responsibility. When it comes to this topic, the story of myself is the case in point. I still remember the time when our class was se

7、lected to do cleaning in a small community. Mops and other kinds of tools in hand, we worked hard, regardless of awful heat under the sun. we did all the tasks so carefully that it was not until dusk that we finished cleaning. Tired as we were, we felt proud of ourselves. What a tired but graceful d

8、ay! The most instructive lesson Ive learnt from the experience is that everyone is adequate to do something small but remarkable in order to make our society colorful. Only in this way can we make ourselves a responsible member of the society.第五档第五档27-28分分漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮靓靓 As is known to us all, small thin

9、gs can make a big difference. In our daily life, even if the things we do are very small, we still can make us a responsible member of the society. For example, one weekend, our teachers took us to a park where we were about to plant trees. With the help of our teachers, everyone at least planted on

10、e tree. Some enthusiastic students planted more. Every one of us was really happy to do something for our society. In the meanwhile, we were confident that there would be a forest in the park many years later. Last week, I went to the park. Those trees we planted ten years ago have been taller than

11、I. what a exciting thing! We do make us a responsible member of the society. Although we just did a small thing, but it did make a big difference. Dont hesitate to do small things just because they are small. Do it, and you will see the big change you make. Let us be a responsible member of the soci

12、ety. 第四档第四档22-23分分清清楚楚清清楚楚顺顺 It goes without saying that the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. As a consequence, small things make a big difference. Three year ago, I failed in an important exam. So I had to go to a old school. Before the exam, I thought the questio

13、ns were very easy for me to write down. So I didnt realize some small things about the exam. Eventually, I failed. As my own experense, I can firmly convinced that small things will make a big difference. And the small things will be helpful for succeed. If you dont notice the small things, you must

14、 be failed. Finally, I will give you some advice. In your life, please remember notice the small things. And then, you will succeed.第三档第三档15-16分分马马虎虎马马虎虎行行 As is widely acknowledged, small things make a big difference. I learned this from one of my experience that I was through Senior One school lif

15、e. One day, when I was play badminton with my classmates in my PE class, I mistake, so we class not got a good grups. I feel nothing. But my classmate told me :your mistake is able to our team lost.” I realized I mistake is very important. I was so froursetrted. that my classmates confort and encour

16、loagement as well as the teacher advice and instaction to helped me devote my spare time to practing playing every day. It wasnt long before. We are win on our school game. From this experience, I am definietly convinced that a small things make a big difference, a people the mistake can will to the

17、 class last. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.第二档第二档9-10分分糊里糊涂糊里糊涂 糊糊 Year of my school live tought me a lot of many things. What impressed me the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. Memories back to my. just go to high school. th

18、at time I alway. I didnt no do the teachers speak and I do read my book. that time I think listen to teachers speaking isnt no impant. I think this is a small thing. No listen I can do it, but In the exam my grade is fanl and lost is class, the head go to my. Say:you wrong, listen is small, but listen teacher speak you. can do it. I think Im wory. I should listen the teacher speak. next I can successful.” Now I know the small thing. Deternitnall you can successful. We should imapant a small thing.第一档第一档3-4分分一塌糊涂一塌糊涂惨惨启示：启示：语