英语四级模拟作文

1、英语四级模拟作文例一：Part WritingDirections:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write anessay entitledMaltingFriends Online . You should writeat leastfollowing the outline given below in Chinese:120 words1. 1网上交友现象越来截止普遍。2这种做法有利有弊。3我的建议。答案: 高分作文 With a wide varietyof virtualcommunication toolsspringi

2、ngup likemushrooms, making friendsonlinehas becomeincreasinglyfashionableoverthe past decade.This channel of communication enables people to get acquaintedwithcyber friendsfrom anywhere withoutany limitations,enrichingtheirlifeexperiences and even extending their knowledge. What's more, it is no

3、trare for some to find their bosom friends and even Mr. /Mrs. Right.But as a double-edged sword, making friends without physicallymeeting each other undoubtedly has evils-tragedies occur whencyber-friendsfinallydecide to date.Not coming singlybut in pairs,somespouses get divorced because one party f

4、alls in love with cyber-lovers.The network renderspeople convenientand efficientmeans to get intouch with the restof the world and we should make good use of itinsteadof falling victims to it. 评析这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。第一段用一句话说明了随着各种各样的(a wide varietyof) 虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现 (springing up like mushrooms)，网上交友

5、在过去十年里(over the past decade)变得越来越 (increasingly)流行。 with 引导的名词+doing 结构是表示原因的经典用法。第二段用 What's more 连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有： enable peopleto get acquainted with“使人们结识”； enriching experiences“丰富经验”和 extendingknowledge“拓宽知识面”两个短语用了现在分词作伴随状语； it is not rare表示“并不罕见”，比it is common更有力； bosomfriends “知心朋友”； Mr

6、/Mrs. Right“另一半；心上人”。第三段话锋一转，利用比喻“就像一把双刃剑(as a double-edgedsword)”，引出了坏处。成语Not coming singly but in pairs“无独有偶”的前后讲了两个坏处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。最后一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们提供了便利、高效的接触外界的手段，我们应该好好利用它，而不应该成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render,convenient and efficient means, fall victim to。例二：Directions:For thispart,you are allowed 30 mi

7、nutes to writean essayentitled On Conserving Energy. You should write at least following the outline given below in Chinese:120 words1. 1能源短缺问题已经非常严重；2可以采取节能措解决能源短缺问题；3你的看法。答案: 高分作文 Nowadays there is growing concern on the serious problem of energy shortage. Many people worry that energy resources o

8、n the earth will be exhausted if we use them in an unchecked way. And they believe that the energy shortage will cause serious problems and even crisis.Conserving energy is one of the measures which have been taken to solve the problem of energy shortage. For example, some countries havea daylightsa

9、ving system to use less electricityforlighting.Also ,cities have enforced some facilities for saving water at public placessuch as rest rooms and bars.Still more, some have enforced seriouspenalties on overuse of electricity, water, and farming land. By thesemeans, people hope the drain on energy re

10、sources could be slowed down.In a word, it ishigh time thatserious consideration was given toconserving energy. Only through immediate and effective action, can wehuman beings survive and enjoy life as desired.some 评析节能是当前备受关注的一个话题，因此可说的内容很多，紧紧围绕提纲要求进行阐述是本文的鲜明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一个话题，中间段概括说明节能是解决能源短

11、缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法介绍了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性。本文词语和句型运用自如。 如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first，second等词语，但使用了Also ，stillmore，使整个段落看起来内容充实，条理清楚。结尾段使用了此类分析问题的作文的典型结尾句型“itis high time that ”。例三：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On English Learning . You should write

12、 at least 120 wordsfollowing the outline given below in Chinese:1. 1 你认为在英语学习过程中存在的主要问题是什么？2导致这些问题的原因有哪些？3对于解决这些问题，你有何建议？It is obviousthat there are some problems in college Englishlearning.In my opinion, something most discouraging is that manystudentsfinddifficultyin communicating with a nativespe

13、aker althoughthey have learned English for many years.There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon.Firstly, mostof the students, even many teachers of English pay little attention tothe use of the language.To them, the most importantthingof learningEnglish is to memorize some grammatical rules a

14、nd enlarge thevocabulary.Secondly,many students have not realized the realpurpose of learningEnglish.They hold thatthey study Englishto passtests, not to master a useful tool for their own use.To change thissituation, my suggestionis thatmore emphasis be puton improving communicative abilities in En

15、glish.For example , why notadvocate that the listening and speaking should be included in the testof English at various levels? 评析作文首先直接提出英语学习中存在的问题，即经过多年英语学习之后，学生依然不能用英语进行交流。 第二段揭示并分析产生这种现象的两个原因。主题句为： There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon 扩展句的主要内容：一是对语言运用的学习不够重视；二是学习英语的目的只是为了通过考试。最后提出解决问

16、题而且现实可行的建议， 用问句结尾，引起阅卷老师对本文的注意。本文的语言表达准确，三个段落的过渡自然。文章开头句子明确提出问题It is obvious that there are some problems in college English learning第二段首句提出产生这种现象的原因有两个There are two reasons explainingthis phenomenon ，末段的首句用 To change this situation来承接上文，最后，用for example引出自己的建议。例四：Directions:For thispart,you are allo

17、wedentitledCheating on Campus. You should writethe outline given below in Chinese:1. 1 在大学里存在着考试作弊的现象；2你是怎么看待这一现象的；30 minutes to write an essay at least 120 words following3如何才能制止这种现象。答案: 高分作文 Cheating on exams is becoming a serious problem on campus. 23% ofstudents have ever been found doing so on

18、their exams. Some of them copyfrom each other,sometake out theirtextbooksor referencebooks to copy,still some use the modern communication tools such as mobile phone as away to get relatedinformation. Itisobvious that cheatingon exams hasbad effecton students'academic performances as well as mor

19、alitypractice.Many remarkable factorscontributeto the cheatingin exams. First,somestudentsjustplay time away and want to pass the examwithoutefforts.And some students areunder great pressurefrom parents andthey fear tofail the exams. Second, college or universities must bear the blame fortheirplacin

20、gmore emphasis on grades than learning.Rigidgrading systempromotes cheating.How can such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated? In my opinion,thereare two ways we can adopt.Firstof all , a severe punishment shouldbe put into effect to prevent students from cheating.In addition, weshouldre form our e

21、xaminationsystem to make it a realeffective tool tomeasure students' abilities. 评析本文的第一段指出考试作弊在很多大学里是一个很严重的问题，通过数字说明问题的严重性， 主题句的提出显得有理有据。 接着列举了学生的各种作弊手段。第二段主题句“ Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams.”显示本段的主要内容是分析考试作弊的原因， 分别从学生和学校实行的制度两个方面进行分析。 第三段提出根除作弊现象的措施。 本文段落之间的衔接自然得体，

22、如第三段开头用了一个问句“ Howcan such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated? ”，很自然地将话题转到如何制止作弊上来了。各个段落内部扩展句之间的逻辑层次清晰， 分析透彻。如结尾段在阐述采取何种措施根除作弊时，用 first of all, in addition表现了两种措施逻辑与意义上的关系。例五：Directions:For thispart,you are allowed 30 minutes to writean essayentitled On Internet-based Instruction . You should writ

23、e at least 120 words following the outline below in Chinese.1. 1 近年来网络化学习发展迅速；2网络教育蓬勃发展的原因；3我如何利用这种形式充电。The past decade has witnessed a boomin Internet-basedinstructionbothat home and abroad.Online educationwith or without record of formalschooling is readily available.The attraction ofthe fenceless

24、 schoolfor students is obvious.Learners can cast aside the restrictionof age, professionor educationalbackground and select freely according to their own need the studyingcontents.Additionally, with the instructors posting syllabi, readingassignments, and schedules on Websites, and students sending

25、in theirassignments online, time and space are noobstaclestoanyone.Meanwhile, expenses and resources areaccordinglysaved forboth studentsand schools.Obviously,webucation broadens the channelof knowledge reception, realizeslearner-centeredauto-study andenhances the learners'ability of knowledgeac

26、quisition and knowledgeupdating.As for me, toenhance integratedquality by selecting some popularweb coursesannuallywill be a long-term mission. 评析这是一篇重点在于分析某现象的原因的文章。第一段用两句话简单说明了过去十年里国内外网络化学习发展迅速这一现象。亮点词汇 decade “十年”，比用ten years显得有水平； witnessed “见证”，以时间地点作主语，事件作宾语，表示在某个时间或者地点发生了某事，属于拟人化的用法； boom“蓬勃发

27、展”； (at) home and abroad“国内外”。Internet-based, instruction和 Online education是“网络教育”的两种不同表达，体现了用词的多样性。第二段分析这一现象的原因。第一句是承上启下的过渡句。第二句详细说明了第一条原因：学习者可以不受年龄、职业、教育背景等的限制，自由选择课程。随后一句用 Additionally引出了第二条原因： 由于教学活动都在网上进行，师生都不受时空限制。 紧接着用 Meanwhile 引出了第三条原因： 费用和资源得到节省。最后用 Obviously进行升华、小结：网络教育拓宽了接受教育的渠道、实现了以学生为中

28、心的自主学习、提高了学习者获取知识和更新知识的能力。这一段中的 the fenceless school 和 webucation 又是“网络教育”的另外两种表达。其他亮点词汇还有： cast aside, obstacles, accordingly, broadens the channel, learner-centered, enhances the ability, knowledge acquisition, knowledge updating 等。第三段简明扼要地说明自己的打算：每年选几门受欢迎的网络课程来提高自己的综合素质。亮点词汇有： enhance, integrated

29、, annually, long-term mission 。例六：Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essayentitledHowto Live a ColorfulLifeon Campus. You should writeat least120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 1 许多大学生希望自己的校园生活能够丰富多彩；2有许多方式可以丰富大学生活；3对此你有什么建议？Nearly all students wa

30、nt to make their life on campus as colorful as possible. With a colorful life, a student can feel meaningful andconfident.So itis necessary-forstudentsto enrichtheircampus life.There are several ways to live a colorful life on campus. It is agood choice for students to join various clubs and groups.

31、 By doing so,studentscan make a lotoffriendswhose interests are similartotheirs.Besidestaking part intheactivitieson campus, studentscan alsodo somesocial practice, which is necessary for them to expand their horizon.Taking myself as an example, Ilove to dance and jointhedance club.I enjoy dancing w

32、ith my friends and learn a lot from them. Moreover, Itake an active part in social practice. Both are helpful to make my lifeon campus more enjoyable. 评析文章的第一段提出丰富多彩的校园生活可以让学生感到自信，生活得有意义，随之自然地引出学生有必要学着使自己的校园生活丰富多彩。 第二段提出使校园生活丰富多彩的两种方法。 一种是参加各种俱乐部、 学生团体；另一种是参加社会实践。 最后一段作者重申主题。 以自己为例， 让读者知道自己的建议是有据可依的

33、。短文的第二段在介绍两种方法时没有用first、 second 一类的词，而是用了 besides ；最后一段用了分词短语taking myself as an example开头，通过这种方式，可以让阅卷老师觉得语言运用不落俗套。例七：Part WritingDirections:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write anessay entitledCollege Students' sense of Responsibility. You shouldwrite at least 120 words following

34、 the outline given below in Chinese:1. 1 有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有；2大学生肩负些哪责任；3大学阶段是大学生成长的重要阶段，呼吁大学生加强责任感。Our timeswitness a striking differencebetween two groups of collegestudents: those who bear a strong sense of responsibility and thosewithout even a slightest one.Perhaps some are still wonde

35、ring-what obligations areundergraduates supposed to take?Obviously, all adult citizens shouldbe responsibleforthemselves,theirfamilies,theirsocietiesand theirnations.Weuniversitystudentsare no exception.Besides,weare expectedto be responsible for the institution where we are being educated.Years at

36、collegeare the most importantperiodin a person'sgrowth,when we acquire knowledge and find our roles in life, so we must enhanceour obligationsense at thiscrucialmomentin order to fulfillour dutieswell as individuals and membersof our families, our schools, our society and our country. 评析本文开头段只用了

37、一句话就说明了提纲中的差距：有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有。其中动词 witness 的拟人法使用、 短语 a striking difference( 显著的不同 ) 、strong 与 slightest 形成的强烈对比以及 responsibility 和 one 实虚词结合，都是亮点表达。而两类人的定语分别使用了定语从句 who bear a strong sense of responsibility 和介词短语without even a slightest one，体现了句型的变化多样。第二段虽然不长，但是段首过渡句Perhaps some are st

38、illwondering-what obligations are undergraduates supposed to take?的使用，承上启下，十分自然地引出段落主题： 大学生肩负哪些责任。 随后给出四个答案：成年公民都应该承担自我责任、家庭责任、社会责任、国家责任。大学生也不例外。而为了突出大学生和一般成年公民的区别，还用 Besides 补充了“学校责任”。尾段强调了大学时期在人生中的重要性，并呼吁为了很好地履行我们作为个人以及家庭、学校、社会、国家的成员的职责，我们要加强责任感的培养，呼应第二段。全文以主人公的形象论述，有说服力。例八：Directions: For this pa

39、rt, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of On Being Volunteers. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1. 1 现在很多大型活动都需要志愿者；2做志愿者的利弊；答案 :3如果我有机会做志愿者的话，我会 高分作文 On Being VolunteersWith China becoming increasinglyprosperous by the day, large-scal

40、eevents such as world expositionsand sportsgamesfrequentthishot land,virtually all of which are thirsty fora large number of volunteers.Apart from gaining some working and social experiences, therealistic advantages to serving as a volunteer are also obvious.Volunteers for the World Expo in Shanghai

41、, for instance, may visit anypavilion after work, which makes them the envy of billions of queuers;likewise, volunteersof BeijingOlympics got allowances,qualityuniforms,free riding of bus and metro, etc.More beneficially, their experiencemay add luster to their resume in job-hunting.But as the sayin

42、g goes,"A penny has two sides . " The disadvantages to being volunteers are alsoelephantsin the room. Doing voluntaryjobs is undoubtedlytime-consuming,and to those students, the majority of volunteers, the sacrifice is notonly time but their school work.Besides , longtime exposure to vario

43、usunexpected weather may do great harm to their health.But anyway, if I have a chance to be a volunteer, I am sure to trymy utmost,because during the course,I willlearnhow to carryout betterteam work and howto cope with emergencies,etc., thus I willmature soonerthan otherwise. 评析这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。

44、第一段用一句话说明了现在很多大型活动频频在中国举办 (with 引导的短语简要指出原因：中国日益繁荣 ) ，它们都需要志愿者这一现象。其中语言亮点有 increasingly 修饰形容词 prosperous ，表示“越来越”； by the day 表示“日益”；large-scale events 表示“大规模的活动”； frequent 作动词，表示“频频发生”； virtually 修饰 all ，表示“几乎”； of which 介词 +关系代词，引导定语从句，使句型出现变化；be thirsty for使用了拟人的手法，表达“迫切需要”。第二段分析了做志愿者的利弊。第一句以Apar

45、t from开头，引出了两个“利”获得工作、 社会经验以及一些现实性的好处， 随后举了北京奥运会和上海世博会作为后者的例证 (likewise 自然地把两个例子衔接到了一起 ) ，并用 More beneficially 说明前者对找工作更有帮助。在转折到“弊”时，用了谚语(But as the saying goes, "A penny, has two sides.")，而成语 elephants inthe room 表示“明显的”，也是闪光用词。 Besides 连接了两个弊端耗费时间、影响健康。最后一段表明了自己的态度如果有机会，将竭尽全力做好志愿者，同时简要说明

46、了理由：学会合作和应急以便更快地成熟起来。开头的 But anyway“但不管怎样 ( 尽管有上述的弊端 ) ”属于过渡词， 把第二段和第三段自然衔接到了一起。例九：Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a shortessay on the topic of Should Foreign Abbreviations Be Banned on TV? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.目前有些电视台

47、禁止在节目中使用外来缩略语1对这种做法有人表示支持2有人并不赞成3我认为答案: 范文一Should Foreign Abbreviations Be Banned on TV?(1) Recently,CCTVbanned the use of borrowed Englishabbreviationssuch as NBA, WTOand CPI in allitsprograms.(2) Somepeople applaud themove, maintaining that it helps preserve the purity of the Chinese language. The

48、 media is deeply engaged in the ongoing Westernization ofChinese language. (3)Ifthe phenomenon is not stopped, Chinese will begradually reduced from an independent expression system to a mixture oflanguages.(4) Others,however, shake their heads. It is not persuasive, theysay, that the media shy away

49、 from foreign abbreviations to preserve thepurity of the Chinese language and culture. (5)After all, languages'integration is a very complicated process and it's irrational to imposea simple ban on certain words. (5)Besides , the use of foreignabbreviations won't shake the status of Chin

50、ese as an embodiment of and the basis of the 5,000-year-old Chinese culture.(6)As far as I am concerned, there is no needto ban the use offoreignabbreviationson TV. A language is great,not because of itspurity,but because of its tolerance to other languages. Chinese is so rich andbeautifulbecause it

51、constantlyabsorbs words, abbreviationsand phrasesfrom other languages. (7)It's totally unnecessaryto fear about thedisappearance of Chinese if we allow English to mix with Chinese.例十：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should Schools Offer

52、 Handwriting Lessons?. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.1. 有人认为学校应该开设书法课2. 有人则反对3. 我的看法答案:范文一Should Schools Offer Handwriting Lessons?(1)Nowadays, some primary schools and middle schools have offeredhandwriting lessons to their students, (2)which has lead to a

53、 heateddebate among people from all worksoflife.(3)Somepeoplebelieve thatit is the schools' obligation to cultivate all-rounded individuals.Therefore, handwriting lessons should be made a compulsory course.(4) However, there are still some people who hold the belief thatit is useless for the students to learn handwriting at all. With