专业英语四级写作分类模拟368

1、专业英语四级写作分类模拟368WRlTlNG1. ReaCl CarefUIIy the following excerpt on real-name PaCkage delivery in China and then Write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WOrdSJ in WhiCh you ShOUIcI: SUmmariZe the main message Of the excerpt, and then COmment On Whether Sending PaCkage ShOUld require real-name registra

2、tion.YOU ShOUId SUPPOrt yourself With information from the excerpt.MarkS Will be awarded for COntent relevace1 Content SUffiCiency，OrganiZatiOn and Ianguage quality. FailUre to follow the above instruct!OnS may result in a IOSS Of marks.Under NeW CraCkdOWn, Sending PaCkageS NOW ReqUireS an ID CarclC

3、hinRS State POSt BUreaU announCed On Monday that it WiIl Start a ationwide CamPaign to CraCk down On illegal activities by enforcing real-name registration for Senders. The nation,s new rules require Senders to PreSent OffiCial ID, especially When Sending from a PUbliC place, SUCh as hotels Or train

4、 StatiOns. The rules also StiPUIate that PaCkageS ShOUld go through an X-ray machine for a SeCUrity check.China bega n to mull a real-n ame registratio n POliCy in the in dustry after ParCeIS tain ted With toxic ChemiCalS killed a man in EaSt Chinas Shandong PrOVince and POiSOned SeVen OtherS in DeC

5、ember 2013.A Staff member SUrnamed Chen WOrking in a POSt OffiCe in HOhhOt Said that SenderS must take their Onginal ID CardS to the POSt OffiCe"The COUnerS WiIl SCan and record your ID information. Senders Clont n eed to WOrry about PerSOnal info matio n being in SeCUre. For instance, the re W

6、iIl be SPeCiaIIy-assig ned PerSO nnel to keep and man age all this info rmation, Cherl added HOWeVerf many Net USerS StiIl expressed ConCern OVer the Ieak Of PerSOnal information in real-name registration. ZhU Hong, an associate PrOfeSSOrtOId the mass media that Whetherthe real-name registration SyS

7、tem WOUld hold back PaCkageS COntaining illegal Or hazardous goods is not clear. ,We Can trace the SenderS now With PhOne numbers. RegiStenng ID CardS might OnIy SPeed UP the PrOCeSS a bit".答案：范文Real-Name ParCel DeliVeryf SeCUrity GUarantee Or PnVaCy Threat?A SeVere in Cide nt that ParCeIS tain

8、 ted With toxic ChemiCaIS had killed a man in 2013 CaUSeCl China's State POSt BUreau to enfOrCe real-name registration for Senders USing the national COUner SerViCe That is to say, the Senders are required to PreSent their OffiCial ID When they deliver goods. However, in SPite Of the new rules,

9、there is StiIl a COnCern OVerthe Ieak Of PerSOnal information in real-name registration and the new SyStem is not assured to hold back the Clanger CaUSed by illegal Or hazardous goods. TherefOref as far as I am COnCerned. real-name ParCel delivery is necessary but much more new regulations ShOUId be

10、 PUt forward to deal With the new PnVaCy threat it brings about.There are many SenOUSthreatS even after the state's POliCy is Camed out. FirStIyI in SOme PrOVinCeS the ParCelS With fake Sender names are StiIl accepted and most COUrierS fail to CheCk What is inSide the PaCkageS SeCOndly, many Of

11、the SenderS refuse to WOrk With the COUrierSl because they think it is UnSafe to UnVeil their information, Bnd therefore the COUnerS Can hardly Venfy their real information. Thirdlyl the WOrSt PrObIem is PrObably the Ieak Of the PerSOnal infoImatiOn. If your PhOne number is Ieaked to real estate age

12、nts? you WiIl have to receive IOtS Of harassing PhOne CaIISl SOme Of WhiCh may eve n in di cate your n ame1 your address, your WOrkPlaCel and eve n your PerS Onal account.AS China moves into the era Of E-COmmerCef COUner SerViCeS are gradually turning into an inSeParable Part Of OUr Iife At the Same

13、 time? because Of the IUrking PeriIS mentioned above, more StrategieS ShOUId be designed to help the SenderS and the delivery SerViCeS better CO-OPerate With each Other in Order to move in a much SmOOtherWay解答考生在下笔之前应先审题，明确写作要求：针对“寄送包裹是否应该实名制”这一热议话题，首 先总结材料中的主要观点，然后提出个人看法。文章结构可安排如下：第一段：简要概括材料中所指明的现象

14、。因为快递运输过中岀现的事故，我国近来出台以下政策, 要求寄送包裹的人在寄送时要使用身份证进行实名登记。然而该政策并没有完全消除所有的危险，依 然有不安和信息不安全的现象存在。我个人的看法是，寄送包裹应该实名制，但应该加强法规，以减 少隐患。第二段：国家的政策实行之后仍然有很多问题。第一，在某些省份依然有人使用假名；第二，很多 寄件人不配合政策，不愿意提供实名；第三，最严重的问题就是实名制后出现大量个人隐私被盗用的 问题。第三段：重申观点使用快递不可避免，实名制也是必须，怎么保护好自己的个人信息，让寄件 者和快递公司更好地合作是我们要考虑的问题。2. Read CarefUIIy the fo

15、lIowing excerpt On 2.5-day Weekend in ChinaI and then Wnte your respOnSe inNO LESS THAN 200 WOrdSl in WhiCh you ShOUIeI: SUmmariZe the main message Of the excerpt, and then COmment On Whether 2.5-day Weekend POliCy ShOUld be adopted in ChinaYOU ShOUId SUPPOrt yourself With infonation from the excerp

16、t.MarkS Will be awarded for Content re leva nce, COntent sufficiency, Orga nizatio n and Ian guage quality. FailUre to follow the above instruCtiOnS may result in a IOSS Of marks.China to ImPlement 2.5-Day WeekendS ThiS SUmmerThe State AdnniniStr at io n Of TOUriSm is mulli ng OVer a new plan to Cre

17、ate two-a nd-a-half day WeekendS across the COUntry SOmetime by the summer. The idea is to give employees more family time and also StimUIate tourism. A number Of ProVinCeS and muniCipalities across China, including Hebeif Jiangxi and Chongqing, have issued new POliCieSf CaIling On COmPaniesto Creat

18、e 2.5-day weekendsSinCe being announced in NoVember; the idea has begUn gaining traction. ,lt,s a good thing for us, because We Can ObViOUSIy take more time to relax.11 "I think it,s a good idea. There are SO many PeOPle COmmUting On Fridays. The traffic is USUaIIy Very CrOWded.LiU Simin, DePUt

19、y SeCretary General Of the Beijing TOUnSm Society, SayS having 2.5-day Weekends Can help SatiSfy people's desire for more ShOrt trips. However, he notes the new POliCy is Iimited in SCOPe,Three key POintS COntmined in this PIan SUggeSt it,s Only a benefit for a Certain group Of PeOPle- FirStIyf

20、it,s not a rule1 but rather a SUggeStion. Secondly, the Plan is COneIitiOnal. LaStIyf it,s OnIy applied to the SUmmer mon ths, rather tha n to all year. BeCaUSe Of these StiPUIatiOnSl the COVerage Of the 2.5-day WeekendS is going to be Very Iimited.,Under the PrOViSiOns, a 40-hour working Week is St

21、ill required, meaning employees who get 2.5-day Weekends are going to have to make UP the hours SOmeWhere else during their Week. 答案：范文NO NeeCl to ImPIement 2.5-Day Weekends2.5-day WeekendS in SUmmer has aroused a debate among the PUbliC as it COnCerns people's family time and VaCatiOn plans. Ma

22、ny PeOPle believe that Ionger Weekend WiIl bring US more time to relax and boost tourism inClUStry. HOWeVerI this PIan is Only applied in SUmmer and is not COmPUlSOry for all COmPaniest SO it has Iimited StimUlatiOn for tourism. FrOm my PerSPeCtiVel 2.5-day Weekends ShOUId not be adopted in ChinaFir

23、StIyf even though the PIan is PartiaIly designed to encourage "leisure time," PeOPle are not necessarily given more time to SPend With their families, because they need to make UP the hours SOmeWhere else during their Week. SO the Plan does not make any SenSe if WOrkerS need to Wake UP ear

24、lier and Stay UP Iate during the Other four days. SeCOndly, it is not WOrthWhiIe WaSting a half day On Fnday .If employees are allowed to take Off at noon On Frida y. it means most WOrkerS WiIl be in a State Of Weekend in the morning On FridaX WhiCh may CaUSe IOW efficiency in work. MeanWhileI COmPa

25、nies WiIl IOSe half-day PrOdUCtiVity WhiCh is a great IOSS for Small and medium enterprises. SO We Can PrediCt that most PriVate enterprises WiIl not implement this non-corpulsory POIiCyAIl in allt 2.5-day Weekends are neither necessary nor ViabIe in China. SO OUr Weekend ShOUId be two days again th

26、is SUmmerT Same as they Were ever.解答本题给出的材料是针对是否应当推行两天半周末进行讨论，呈现了两种不同的观点。根据题目 要求，先总结双方的观点，再给出自己的看法。文章可按下列结构来安排：第一段：先整合概括正反双方的观点，然后表明自己的论点在中国，不应采取两天半周末。第二段：陈述自己的理由。首先，两天半周末并不能真正带来更多休息时间；第二，两天半周末实 际上会造成半天工作时间的浪费。第三段：总结全文在中国，两天半周末不可行。3. Read CarefUIIy the following excerpt On ClOSing PUbIiC toilets in

27、UK and then Write your respOnSein NO LESS THAN 200 WOrdSl in WhiCh you ShOUICI: SUmmariZe the main message Of the excerpt, and then COmment On Whether PUbliC toilets ShOUld be ClOSed in UK.YOU ShOUId SUPPOrt yourself With information from the excerpt.MarkS Will be awarded for COntent relevace1 Conte

28、nt SUffiCiency，OrganiZatiOn and Ianguage quality.FailUre to follow the above instructions may result in a IOSS Of marks.PUbliC TOiIetS "Wiped Out" in PartS OfUKSOme UK High StreetS and PUbliC SPaCeS no Ionger have any COUnCil-run PUbliCtOiIetSj the BBC has learned. At IeaSt 1,782 facilitie

29、s have CIOSecl across the UK in the IaSt decade, FreedOm OfInfo rm at io n requests fou nd.The LOCal GOVernment ASSOCiatiOn Said COUnCilS Were trying to keep toilets OPen but faced SqUeeZed budgets. PUbliC toilets have existed OnUK High StreetS for more than 150 years, but there is no Iegal requirem

30、ent for IOCal authorities to PrOVide toilets1 meaning they are Often ClOSeCl down if COUncils feel they Cannot afford the UPkeePRaymOnd Martin, Ofthe BntiSh TOilet ASSOCiatiOn, Said PrOViCling toilets WaS about health, WeIIbeing equality and SOCial inCIUSiOn. "It's also about PUbliC decency

31、 and PUbliC dignityWe don't Want PeOPIe being forced to Urinmte in the streets," he Said .Joan Dean Said her husba nd BnanJ WhO has Parki nsorfs disease, WaS Ieft humiliated When he Wet himself after failing to find a toilet On a trip to LeVenshulme, in ManCheSterI Where 18 toilets have bee

32、n CIOSed in the IaSt 10 years.A LOCal GOVernment ASSOCiatiOn SPOkeSman Said COUnCilSWere doing everything they COUId to keep PUbIiCtOiletS OPe r in ClUdi ng running COmmUnity toilet SChemeStO enable PUbSf re st aura nts and ShOPS to make their toilets available to the PUbliC CUtS meant CoUneiIS had

33、IeSS to SPend On COmmUnity SerViCeS and the next few years WOUId continue to be a Challeng巳 he Said 答案：范文ChangeS for PUbIiC TOiletSA tight budget has forced COUnCilS to ClOSe the non-PrOfit SerViCeS they PrOVide inCIUcling PUbIiC toilets. However, OffiCialS in the BntiSh TOilet Association argued th

34、at people's Iife and well, being Or SO may be Well affected WithOUt PUbliCtOilets. I n my OPini OiT rather th a n CIOSing the PUb IiCtOiIetSI COUncils ShOUld WOrk OUt the PrObIem With Other SOIUtiOns.FirStIyl COUncils Can CO-OPerate With the IOCal towns Or NGOS Or ChantieS to transfer resporisib

35、ilities for running the toilets to them. ThiS Can SaVe a great many PUbIiC icovenience from CIOSUre and ease the brden Of toilet COStS On COUnCiIS By Shanng the burden of toilets With Other Organizations, a huge SUm Can be SPared and PUt to more COnStrUctiVe uses. NeXtf to help reduce future running

36、 costs, COUncils may make improvements to facilities, inclUding energy and Water SaVing measures In addition, ChargeS ShOUld be introduced and the PUbIiC ShOUId PrePare to Pay for USing PUbIiC toilets to enSUre that they remain OPen. The inCOme from those toilets WiIl be kept to Pay for running cost

37、s.TO StUn UPf PUbIiCtOiletS have great importance, Whetherin regard to PeOPle,s well-being SOCial inCIUSiOn and harmOny. TherefOrel more measures ShOUId be taken to maintain the PUbliCtOiletS and OtherfaCilitieS.解答材料中介绍了英国政府关闭公共卫生间以及各方人士对其看法。根据题目要求，先简单总结材 料中的观点，在针对是否关闭公共卫生间这一问题给出个人观点。文章结构可安排如下：第一段：整

38、合概括材料中的观点，然后表达自己的观点不应关闭公共卫生间，应该采取其它办 法来解决这一问题。第二段：列出自己的观点。第一，可以和其它机构组织合作，减轻市政府的压力；第二，修缮卫生 间，减少维护成本；第三，对使用者收费。第三段：总结全文公共卫生间对公众非常重要，要采取措施来维护公共卫生间。4. ReaCl CarefUIIy the following excerpt on the trend Of youngsters IiVing With Parents, and then Write your respOnSe in NO LESS THAN 200 WOrdSl in WhiCh yo

39、u ShOUlCI: SUmmariZe the main message Of the excerpt, and then COmment On Whether adults ShOUId IiVe With their Parents.YOU ShOUId SUPPOrt yourself With information from the excerpt.MarkS Will be awarded for COntent relevace1 Content SUffiCiency，OrganiZatiOn and Ianguage quality. FailUre to follow t

40、he above instruCtiOnS may result in a IOSS Of marks.A MiIliOn MOre YOUngSterS to LiVe With ParentSA million more young PeOPIe are IikeIy to find themselves IMng With their ParentS OVer the next decade, according to an insurance COmPany. The main reasOn is the affordability Of housing the company Sai

41、d. The StUdy forecasts that 3.8 million PeOPle aged between 21 and 34 WiIl be IiVing at home by 2025, a third more than at the moment. The number Of households COntaining two Or more families is also expected to rise, from 1.5 million to 2.2 million.CharlOtte NiSbet and her boyfriend Jay Arkell一both

42、 aged 24一Were forced to move back in With his Parents in east LOndon, as they COUId not afford to rent by themselves WOUld be nice to have OUr OWn space, and not to WOrry about treading On his Parents' toes," She told the BBC. She Cannot foresee being able to get a PIaCe Of their OWn in the

43、 near future. ,Tm PeSSimiStiC On OUr CUrrent SaIarieSl no Way.Ifwe did, We WOUIcln't be able to eat OUt Or go On holiday."BUt not everyone is gloomy about the PrOSPeCt Of Shanng their IMng SPaCe With Other couples. ,The advantages inCIUde having Other PeOPle around for COmPany CheaPer IiVin

44、g costs, and more PeOPIe to Share the chores," the COmPany Saidf nMuItigenerational living is Often Seen as a necessity rather than a ChOiCeI PartiCUlarIy When adults are forced to move back in With family to help SaVe for long-term goals Iike buying their OWn house." 答案：范文Better NOt to Li

45、Ve With ParentsThere is a trend that more and more young adults are forced to move back home and IiVe With their ParentS because Of the high COSt Of renting Or housing PnCe SOme PeOPle COnSider it as COmPany for Parents. FrOm my perspective, adult ChilClren ShOUICl not IiVe With their Parents.FirStI

46、yf PeOPle Of Clifferent ages have different IifeStyIeS USUaIlyJ ParentS Iike quiet and regular IifeWhereaS young-stets Prefer exciting and noisy enjoyment. If they IiVe together, ChanCeS are thatParents feel that they are always disturbed and the Children may feel that they are Often ConStraiDed SeC

47、OndlyI PeOPle Of differe nt gen eratio ns are IikeIy to have Clifferent VieWS On issues ran ging from minor household affairs to in ter natio nal business. Theref ore, family Iife may be Un PleaSant for both ParentS and Children. Thirdlyf SitUatiOns will WorSen if the adult ChiIdren get married Afte

48、r all, not many young PeOPIe Want to IiVe With their in -laws. OnCe Children Set UP a new family, they Want to break free from their Parents and any interference from them may IeaCl to conflicts.AIl in allt We may draw the COnCIUSiOn that if the Parents and their adult ChiIdren IiVe apart, both the

49、OId and the young Can enjoy COmPlete independence and freedom and IiVe a Iife they Iike TO avoid IiVing together, the Children COUld rent an apartment With Other PeerS to Share the COStS Or accept finanCial SUPPOrt from the Parents.解答本题的主旨是讨论成年子女是否应和父母同住。材料中提出了两种观点,首先应总结两方观点, 再提出个人的观点，可支持也可反对和父母同住。文

50、章结构可如下文安排：第一段：简要概括双方观点，并表明自己的观点最好不要和父母同住。第二段：分三点论证。首先，父母和子女有不同的生活方式；第二，两代人观点不同，会引发矛盾： 第三，如果结婚，可能矛盾増多。第三段：总结全文，重申观点成年子女最好不要和父母同住。5. Read CarefUIIy the following excerpt On the trend Of PeOPle having a mid-career break, and thenWrite your respOnSe in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in WhiCh you should: SUmmar

51、iZe the main message Of the excerpt, and then give your COmment On mid-career break.YOU ShOUId SUPPOrt yourself With information from the excerpt.MarkS Will be awarded for COntent relevance, Content SUffiCiency. OrganiZatiOn and Ianguage quality.FailUre to follow the above instructions may result in

52、 a IOSS Of marks.The SUrPnSing Benefits Of a Mid-Career BreakOnCeCOnSidered Career SUiCideJ SabbatiCaIS are now not Only accepted一but encouraged一by SOme employers. Here's how to take One and StiIl get aheadWhe n WinSton Chen told his friends that he had quit his job as Chief tech no IOgy OffiCer

53、 at a SOftWare COmPany to move to a SmaIl island in ArCtiC NOrWay With his family for a year, few PeOPIe CaIIeCl him CraZ y. In stead, most PeOPle SimPIy replied: Hl WiSh I had the guts to do that.1' At first, he Said he WaSCOnCemed that time away from the industry might hurt his career. "T

54、hat's the main reasOn that keeps PeOPIe from doing this1 and I WaS no Clifferehe Said in an email"But you have to Create the UrgenCy for IiVing the Iife you want."WhiIe many PeOPIe dream Of taking time Off mid-career, few actually do it. BUt the number Of PeOPIe taking Iengthy SabbatiCaIS Iater in Iife is inCreaSing1 according to experts. That,s in Part due to COmPanies becoming more OPen to the idea and the higher rate at WhiCh PeOPIe are Changing jobs