五年高考真题专题短文改错

1、24 / 23专题十七短文改错出一五年高考真题 a父考题分布20152011年各省市高考题Passage 1 （2015新课标全国I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。When I was a child, I hoped to live i

2、n the city.I think I would be happy there.NowI am living in a city , but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has a

3、lready become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect yourthinkthought I would be happyA1 countryside.There theenvironment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.When I was a child, I hoped to l

4、ive in the city.I there.Now I am living in a city , but I miss my home inoronair is clean and the mountains are green.Unfortunately,亚让卜 the development of industrialization , the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies haveshown that global warming has already become a veryseriouslyserious pr0

5、blem.Theairs airwe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.MuchManyrare animals are dying out.We mustfoundfindways to protectyourour/theenvironment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.1 .解析 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。答案 第 2 句：think-thought2 .解析 考查冠词的用法。in the countryside依乡村）为固定短

6、语。答案 第3句：countryside前加the3 .解析 考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。答案第4句：or-and4 .解析考查介词的用法。with the development of为一固定短语，意思是“随着的发展”。答案第5句：on-with5 .解析 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态答案第6句：去掉been6 .解析考查形容词的用法。修饰名词 problem应当用形容词。答案 第 6 旬：seriouslyser

7、ious7 .解析 考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。答案 第 7 旬：airs-air8 .解析考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。答案第8句：Much-Many9 .解析考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。答案 第9句：found-find10 .解析考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知 your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺答案 第 9旬：your- ourPassage 2 （2015新课标全国H ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言

8、错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he qu

9、ickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later, Tony saw parents.Mom said, “ How nice to see you again! Dad and

10、 I were terrible worried. Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with hisparentparentsIt was verycrowded.Tony saw a toyon ina shop window.He liked it somuch that hequickly walked into the shop.After100kslookingat the toy for some time, h

11、e turned,vln Il-around and foundbegunbegandia（或his parents were missing.Tony was scared andto cry.A woman saw him crying andtellingtoldhim to wait outsideatheparents.Mom said, “How nice to see youAshop.Five minutes later, Tony sawterribleagain! Dad and I were 怕行心, worried. Tony promised her that thi

12、s would never happen again.1 .解析 考查名词复数。由第五句中的his parents were missing:可知此处应当用复数形式。答案 第 1 旬：parent- parents2 .解析 考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。答案第3句：on-in3 .解析 考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。sothat为固定句型，意思是 “如此以致于 ”，故去掉very。答案第4句：去掉very4 .解析 考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he, he与look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分

13、词。答案 第 5 句：100ks-looking5 .解析 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将 where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。答案 第5句： 去掉where或where-that6 .解析 考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was scared并歹！J,因此,要用一般过去时。答案 第 6 旬：begun-began7 .解析考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用 told。答案 第 7 句:tellingft

14、old8 .解析考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。答案第7旬：mthe9 .解析 考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在 parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。答案 第8句：saw后加his10 .解析考查副词的用法。形容词worried 之前要用副词来修饰。答案第 10 旬：terrible-terriblyPassage 3 （2015 四川）下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的

15、词。注意：1 .每句不超过两个错误；2 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；3 .只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起 ）不计分。Hi, Janice，Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after

16、school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact， I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me， would yo

17、u talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案Hi, Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want A to sharewith you some of the problems I have been experiencing.tellfriendAs I tod you last time, I made three new 忏$ here.We hang out togetherrrsingduring

18、lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sjngng in karaokecmanybars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me mch.And I started to seeso .this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont like to go anymore, but Im afraid IllHowarelose their friendshipWhat do you think I shou

19、ld do? If you were me, would you talkhimPlease helpto them?me and give me some advice.Grace1 .解析 考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to答案 want后加to2 .解析 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。答案 tell 一 told3 .解析 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。答

20、案 friendfriends4 .解析 考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型spend(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成 singingo答案 singj- singing5 .解析 考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。答案 man尸much6 .解析 考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把 so改成but。答案 scr but7 .解析 考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用 what。答案 How一 What8 .解析 考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，

21、与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我， 。答案 are- were9 .解析 考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用 them。句意：你会和他们说吗？答案 him 一 them10 .解析 考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with o句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。答案去掉withPassage 4 （2015 陕西）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余

22、的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（一）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of bakin

23、g.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next y

24、ear just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!My soccer coach retiredlast week.I wanted to do anyt?jng special for something 产betterhim at his retirement party.My mum makes the -besf biscuits in the world, so I

25、 deciderstep rdecided to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic steps of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really wod.My onlyaftermistake was that I dropped some on the floorwhen/while I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his

26、 mouth , asked surprisingly who emade them and joked “I might have to retire again next year just。get some more of these biscuits.rrenjoyMy favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoying the biscuits with happy laughter!1 .解析last week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。答案去掉in2 .解析 something用在肯定句中，表示 “一些事，any

27、thing “任何事”，答案 anythin厂 something3 .解析 我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。答案 better best4 .解析 全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。答案 decide- decided5 .解析 根据前面的some, step应该是复数形式。答案 stepr steps6 .解析作表语的是形容词good， well 是副词，作状语。答案 well-good7 .解析我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。when/while当的时候，after在之后。答案 aftes whe

28、n/while8 .解析此处表特指，at the party 在晚会上。答案 m the9 .解析动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。答案just后加to10 .解析 and连接两个并列的（动）名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。答案 enjoys enjoyingPassage 5 （2015 浙江）下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.

29、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left hand side of the clas，sI could easy see the football field.In the mornings， it was full of students exercising.The

30、view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance， I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in th

31、e morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom， I will never forget it.1 .解析 考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。答案 第一句：side sides2 .解析 考查固定表达。be made of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be madefrom 是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。答案第一句：fromfof3

32、 .解析考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。答案第二句：sit-sitting4 .解析考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。答案 第三句：eas尸easily5 .解析考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。答案 第五句：isfwas6 .解析 考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数 a beautiful park要用it答案第六句：them- it7 .解析考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。答案第七句：not去掉8 .解析考查固定表达。in a hurry 匆匆忙忙。答案 第九句： in 后加 a9 .解析考查非谓语动

33、词。make sb do.使某人做某事。.答案第十句：feltffeel10 .解析考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。答案 最后一句：If-Although/ThoughPassage 6 （2014新课标全国I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

34、；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起 ）不计分。Nearly five years before， and with the help by our father， my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes| 女果）in our back garden.Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.As resu，lt the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits

35、 are small in size， but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after yea，r but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!1 .解析 ago常与一般过去时

36、连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是planted,用的是过去式，故用ago。答案 第一句中beforef ago2 .解析 with the help of在的帮助下。答案 第一句中by-of3 .解析由前面all these可知应用year的复数形式。答案 第二句中yeas years4 .解析 根据时间状语since therf可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把 had变为have。答案第二句中had have5 .解析 as a result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。答案 第三句中as后加a6 .解析因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere

37、 至ij处；somewhere某处。答案 第三句中 somewhereeverywhere7 .解析 are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。答案 第四句中taste tasty8 .解析 根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的 many,而much修饰不可数名词。答案 第五句中muchfmany9 .解析 although引导让步状语从句，不可与 but连用，但可以与yet连用。答案 第六句中but 去掉或改为yet10 .解析 因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。答案第七句中 wonderfully-wonderfulPassage 7 （

38、2014 浙江）下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起 ）不计分。I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long， a train in

39、spector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket， which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No

40、 one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on nee，d the world would be a better place to live in.1 .解析考查时态一致。文章主体时态为一般过去时。答案 去掉 had2 .解析考查词性。be动词后应用形容词，noise为名词。答案nois

41、es noisy3 .解析 考查时态，before long后用一般过去时。答案 comes came4 .解析考查句子关系。一位乘客意识到他的票不见了，他开始不安起来。应为承接关系，而非转折关系。答案 butf and5 .解析 考查固定搭配。search for= look for寻找。答案 searching后力口 for6 .解析考查代词指代。此处是票的主人用its 或主人 the owner。答案 his-its/the7 .解析 考查冠词。上文提到过用the表特指。答案 m the8 .解析 考查形容词、副词用法。修饰动词的应为副词，previous是形容词答案 previous-

42、 previously9 .解析考查前后一致。从上文看，丢票的是一个人，故应用单数。答案stranger” stranger10 .解析 考查固定结构。in need需要。答案onfinPassage 8 （2014 四川）下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；2 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3 .只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。Hello， boys and girl

43、s！ Today， I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm， stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Dont panic or get out of line， and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters

44、 will come and put out a fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fire， your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hur，t tell your teacher immediately.【语篇导读】这是一篇实用文体，向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法。1 .解析talk with后面常跟指人的词，意思是“同某人交谈。talk about意为“谈论 ”。答案 with-about2

45、 .解析表达客观事实通常使用一般现在时态。a fire alarm 为单数名词，故谓语动词应当用单数第三人称形式。答案go- goes3 .解析wait 为不及物动词，后跟宾语时要加上介词for。答案 在 wait 之后加上for4 .解析 classmate为可数名词，此处应当用复数形式。答案 classmate classmates5 .解析根据and 一词可知本句与前面的祈使句并列，所以应当用动词原形。答案 tryingftry6 .解析 由并列连词and可知本词与quiet都作系动词remain的表语。故词性应与 quiet 一致。答案 calmlyfcalm7 .解析前文已提到火灾，

46、这里特指那场火。答案 m the8 .解析根据短文意思可知这是老师告诉同学们的一些注意事项。用的均是第二人称。答案 us- you9 .解析宾语从句中使用了两个连接词，根据句意 “ 如果你们注意到有人失踪或受伤”可知when是多余的。答案去掉 when10 .解析如果某人失踪了，就无法判断他受伤与否。这两个词之间是选择关系，故用or。答案 ancR orPassage 9 （2014 陕西）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的

47、词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset we sat by th

48、e fire, have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky they were looked like rain ! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.T

49、hat day I didnt learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!1 .解析 考查非谓语动词。want to do sth想要做某事，为固定搭配。答案 He wanted后力口 to2 .解析考查动词时态。本文的主体时态为一般过去时。 答案 come- came3 .解析考查非谓语动词。一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，因此此处应为非谓语动词作伴随状语。答案 have- having4 .解析 考查形容词副词修饰关系。副词修饰后面的动词jumped up

50、。答案 immediate- immediately5 .解析 考查介词的使用。shoot at朝射击。下文的Suddenly the arrows wasflying down at us from the sky 也给本句提供了 答案。答案 on - at6 .解析 考查不定代词。根据前文的arrows 一词可以看出，此处不是只有两只箭,因此把Neither改为None,表示三支以上。答案Neither None7 .解析 考查主谓一致。主语为复数形式 arrows,谓语动词应用复数。答案 was- were8 .解析考查语态。look 作为系动词，无需用被动语态。答案 去掉 were9

51、.解析考查连词。根据句意：我们跑开了，幸运的是，没有人受伤。可以看出，此处为承接关系，并非转折关系。答案butf and10 .解析考查冠词的使用。后面的impressive 一词第一个读音为元音，因此用an。答案 a- anPassage 10 （2014 辽宁）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限

52、一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。Dear Jeremy and Alice，Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors， were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a wor，d your dog Cleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute

53、 shes outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Besid， e Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us， considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our a

54、pologies and goodwill ， but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely，Jack and Rose1 .解析 bother为及物动词，无需加to。答案 去掉 to2 .解析当 “ 次数 ” 讲时， time 为可数名词。答案 timeftimes3 .解析动词不定式符号to 后跟动词原形。答案 understandings understand4 .解析主谓一致问题。主语为单数，谓语动词用单数形式。答案 have- has5 .解析 besides除止匕之外，连词。b

55、eside在一边，介词。答案 Beside- Besides6 .c an7 .解析考查时态。今天早晨的事情自然用一般过去时。答案 starts- started8 .解析 考查形容词close和closely的区别，房子距离近用 close,具体意义；closely表抽象意义。答案 closely- close9 .解析考查人称代词。我们感激你的歉意，后句的you 给本题提供了答案。答案 our your10 .解析 考查固定搭配。figure out找出。答案 figure 后加 outPassage 11 （2013 新课标全国 H）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同

56、桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,