ILovetheBeautyofChangjiangGorges

1、I Love the Beauty of Changjiang Gorges“三峡情英语演讲稿评语本文是作者所在学校举行“三峡情英语演讲竞赛中获二等奖的一篇演讲稿.文中描述和议论得体,词汇也用得较为丰富,只是某些句子结构过于复杂,可能会给听众理解带来困难.某些语言上的缺乏之处点评修改如下:(1) 改为不定式表示目的较好.(2) 这里应该用主动语态.Boysandgirls ,TheThreeGorgesarea , ontheChangjiangRiver , stretchedfromFengjieofSichuanProvinceeasttoYichangofHubeiProvince a

2、totalof193km.TheQutangGorgeisfromBaidichengtoDaxiBrook , theWuGorgeisfromtheWuMountaintoBadong , andtheXilingGorge , fromZiguitoNanjinguanPass.ThevoyagethroughtheThreeGorgesisanunforgettableexperience.Theriverwindsitswaythroughcountlessvalleys aroundsteeppeaks , overcrucialrapidsandwhirlpools likeap

3、icturesquecorridor( 画廊),presentingchangingsceneryalltheway.Whetherinthepastoratpresent , athomeorabroad , touriststakeprideinpayingavisittothem poetswritepoemsandsongsaboutthem , andartistspainttheminpictures.Libai afamouspoetofTangDynasty , describedthesceneasfollowsWhilethemonkeysonbothbanksaresti

4、llgibberinginyourears awayhastheboatflownpasttensofthousandsofhills.Hesaidsoshowingtoshow(1)howpowerfulandrapidthecurrentsare!Actuallyitsometimestakeshoursfor aboattoroundaturninthecliffssosharpthatonecanseenoopeningfortheriverc ourse , andthatonehaslittlesunonhiswaythroughthegorges.Theoldgorgeshave

5、takenonanewlook.Navigation( 航 行)throughtheChangjiangGorgeshasbeenenormouslyimprovedsincetheliberation , 1949.Youcanseedifferentkindsofships , suchassteamships , sailingboats ,tugs , barges , lifeboatsandairships sailingupanddownthegorges.Fromtimetotime , handsomemodernpassengerships, paintedwhiteors

6、omeothercolour , withwonderfulsuperstructurefittedwithallsortsofup-to-dateequipmentlikesearchlights, radar , depthindicator , 1400-horsepowertwindieselengines andradiotelephonesbetweenshipandshoreandbetweenships , canbeseen, carryingabout1500passengerssafelytodifferentpartsofthecountry.Passeng ersca

7、nseelivetelevisionintheair-conditionedcabinsduringtheirvoyage.Al ongthebanks , greenwoods, yellowandsweetcitrus( 柑橘)orchardsandfertilefieldshavetakentheplaceofsheerbarerockwalls.Fast-developingcities , suchasWanxian, Yichang , Shashi, aredottedondot(2)theoldlonelygorgebanks.Aboveall aplantobuildadam

8、atThreeGorgeswasproposedintheTenYearDevelopmentPlanof the1992NationalPeoplesCongress.Theprojectwillserveseveralpurposesincludingfloodcontrol powerproductionandnavigation.Itisnotonlyanextremelyhugeproject butalsoagreatcausewhichbenefitsfuturegenerations.Mothergavebirthtomei ntheThreeGorgesarea17yearsago.IfeelproudofbeinganativeoftheThreeGorge s.Imluckytobelivingnotonlyatsuchagoldentime butalsointhegorgearea.I