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1、如何美化作文 运用高级词汇：在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用大纲上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 1.我对英语非常感兴趣。 Im very interested in English. Im quite / extremely interested in English 2. 我们的校园位于市中心。 Our school is in the center of the city. Our school is located in the c

2、enter of the city Our campus situates in the center of the city 3.放学后，我们有很多作业要做。 After school, we have a lot of homework to do. After school, we have endless homework to do. 4) 我们可以得到社会及工作经验。 We can get some working and social experience We can obtain some working as well as social experience. 5 洗澡间

3、和厨房都很好。 The bathroom and the kitchen are good. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished 6. 大部分学生认为应当学好英语。 Most of the students think it is necessary to study English The majority of the students hold the view that it is necessary to master English.巧妙转换句型，轻松应对写作巧妙转换句型，轻松应对写作 在高考英语写作题中，由于时间的限制，

4、在高考英语写作题中，由于时间的限制，许多考生写出的句子显得过于单调、呆板。许多考生写出的句子显得过于单调、呆板。其实，要想在有限的时间里写出丰富、生动其实，要想在有限的时间里写出丰富、生动的句子并不难。只要对所学的英语句式加以的句子并不难。只要对所学的英语句式加以转换，就一定能使写出来的句子更加准确、转换，就一定能使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。得体、简洁、灵活。 一、词与词之间的转换一、词与词之间的转换1. 形容词转换为名词形容词转换为名词This painting is very valuable.2. 动词转换为名词动词转换为名词Our hometown has changed

5、 a lot these years.二、从句与词的转换二、从句与词的转换As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.This painting is of great value.Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years.Tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.三、从句与非谓语动词之间的转换三、从句与非谓语动词之间的转换1. 动名词和从句的转换动名词和从句的转换When he ar

6、rives, please give me an e-mail. 2. 分词和从句的转换分词和从句的转换(1)从句与现在分词的转换从句与现在分词的转换As he was lying in the grass, he thought of his parents living in the countryside.(2)从句与过去分词的转换从句与过去分词的转换Once it is seen, it will never be forgotten.On hearing his arrival, please give me an e-mail.Lying in the grass, he thou

7、ght of his parents living in the countryside.Once seen, it will never be forgotten.3.从句与不定式的转换从句与不定式的转换He spoke louder so that the audience could hear him clearly.四、从句与独立主格的转换四、从句与独立主格的转换（1）If weather permits, we shall go there on foot.To make himself heard clearly, he spoke louder.Weather permittin

8、g, we shall go there on foot.（逻辑主语（逻辑主语+现在分词）现在分词）（2）When this was done, we went home.（3）Because there was nothing to do, we played games.This done, we went home.There being nothing to do, we played games.(being 不可省略不可省略)五、句与句之间的转换五、句与句之间的转换1. 简单句与复合句的转换简单句与复合句的转换The girl is spoken highly of. Her co

9、mposition was well written. 2. 一般句式与强调句的转换一般句式与强调句的转换I graduated from the university last summer.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.It was last summer that I graduated from the university.3. 条件句与祈使句的转换条件句与祈使句的转换If you go through the gate, you will find the entrance to Be

10、ar Country. 4. 宾语从句与状语从句的转换宾语从句与状语从句的转换I wont believe what he says. Go through the gate, and you will find the entrance to Bear Country.No matter what he says, I wont believe him.六、六、“二态二态”之间的转换之间的转换1. 时态的转换时态的转换The bell is ringing now.2. 主动语态变为被动语态主动语态变为被动语态People suggested that the meeting be put

11、off.七、其他形式的转换七、其他形式的转换 正常语序与倒装语序的转换正常语序与倒装语序的转换Though Im weak I will make the effort.They will never give up the struggle for successThere goes the bell.It is suggested that the meeting be put off.Weak as I am, I will make the effort.Never will they give up the struggle for success. 学生常见写作错误学生常见写作错误

12、Students sleep less than 7 hours. Because they are burdened with lots of homework.Students sleep less than 7 hours, because they are burdened with lots of homework. 一、一、 Sentences without subjects 二二 、Only clauses are presented 80% of the students think should be given less homework.80% of the stude

13、nts think they should be given less homework. 1. Most students burdened with too much homework. Most students are burdened with too much homework.2. Paying too much attention to students grades will of great harm to their health. Paying too much attention to students grades will be of great harm to

14、their health.3. Some students against the idea. Some students are against the idea. 三、三、Sentences without verbs Students should be not given too much homework.Students should not be given too much homework.四四 、Verbs with the wrong objects We cant eat too much sugar and fat.We cant eat too much food

15、with much sugar and fat.We cant eat too much food rich in sugar and fat.We cant eat too much food which is rich in sugar and fat.We cant eat too much food containing lots of sugar and fat.We should avoid eating too much food which contains much sugar and fat.五五 、“Not” in the wrong position Some of t

16、he money collected should be paid to the gardeners for their work, and the rest of the money can buy some new trees and flowers. ,and the rest of the money can be used to buy some new trees and flowers,and we can use the rest of the money to buy some new trees and flowers.,and we can buy some new tr

17、ees and flowers with the rest of the money” 六六 、Right use at one place but wrong use at another 1. Dormitories are places which students can rest and relax themselves. Dormitories are places where students can rest and relax themselves.2. Dormitories are places where students can rest and relax them

18、selves in. Dormitories are places which students can rest and relax themselves in.七、七、 Misuse of connections in the Attributive Clause 1.There are many students think they should be given more time to sleep. Many students think they should be given more time to sleep.2. China has taken place many ch

19、anges. Great changes have taken place in China.十、十、 Chinglish 实战训练： 1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much about it. （使用名词性从句） 2. Though he is young, he knows a lot. What makes him surprised is that the little girl knows so much about it.It surprises him that the little girl knows so much

20、 about it.Young as he is , he knows a lot.3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happenedBut for for your help, I wouldnt h

21、ave passed the exam.Without your help, I wouldnt have passed the exam.If it had not been for your help, I would have failed in the exam. 5. She entered the room and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 7. If you study hard, you will m

22、ake rapid progress. （用并列句）She entered the room ,followed by many students.They went back to school singing and laughing.Study hard and you will make rapid progress. 8As soon as he arrived ,he began to work. (使用倒装句)9 If you work hard , you will make greater progress (使用the the 的句型)No sooner had he ar

23、rived than he began to workHardly had he he arrived when he began to work. The harder you work., the greater progress you will make.实战练习实战练习1.兼职工作会影响学生的学业吗？Will part-time jobs influence the studies of students ？ 对于兼职工作是否会影响学生的学业的问题，不同的人有不同的观点。_ 俗话说，“凡事都有两面性”。对于兼职工作是否会影响学生的学业的问题，不同的人有不同的说法。（恰当使用谚语）_2

24、 . 一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. 绝大部分人认为，一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间._通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间_通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。_ 参考答案： 1. In fact, a lot of parents are worried that part-

25、time jobs will influence the studies of students. As for the question whether part-time jobs will influence the studies of students, different people have different opinions. Just as the saying goes, Every coin has two sides. As for the question whether part-time jobs will influence the studies of s

26、tudents, different people have different opinions. 2. The majority of people hold the view that a proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that a proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. From what has been discussed above, we may