高中英语写作讲评课件

1、高中英语写作讲评高中英语写作讲评高中英语写作讲评高中英语写作讲评The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they dont care about their writing . There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. They cant remember the character

2、s. The government has carried out a new policy. It will make people pay attention to Chinese. It will help students learn Chinese well. We dont have much time. Its high time that we took action. We can develop our country by improving our mother tongue first.How do you grade it（定档）（定档）?And why?homew

3、ork show高中英语写作讲评ASSESSMENTstructureIs the article divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?If not, come up with one.contentAre all the details stated?If not, add the missing details.Is everything to the point(切题切题)? LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistake

4、s?If yes, correct them.Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）（高级词汇）?If yes, underline them.Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?If yes, underline them.Lets improve it:高中英语写作讲评ASSESSMENTstructureIs the article divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?If not, come up with one.L

5、ets improve it:高中英语写作讲评contentAre all the details stated?If not, add the missing details.Is everything to the point(切题切题)?Lets improve it:高中英语写作讲评 LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes?If yes, correct them.Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）（高级词汇）?If yes, underline

6、 them.Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?If yes, underline them.Lets improve it:高中英语写作讲评Summary:paragraphstopic sentence detailsto the pointadvanced vocabularysentence patternslinking wordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfew mistakes高中英语写作讲评目前，不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言。某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你参考所给要点，

7、写一篇英语短文。 有的同学认为：幽默；时尚；好玩有的同学认为：有错别字，不利于语文学习；有时难以理解你的看法： Nowadays, many teenagers like to use the web language in their writing. Some students think it is humorous and cool. They use the web language. They feel its fun. Some think it is difficult. They cannot understand. When they are chatting on lin

8、e, they dont care about their writing. There have some wrongly-written characters. It is bad for Chinese learning. I think we can use the web language and we can express ourselves more freely.Improve the composition. Focus ontopic sentences, advanced vocabulary & patterns and linking words. 高中英语

9、写作讲评You cannot teach a man anything; you can only help him find it within himself.- Galileo Galilei 高中英语写作讲评HomeworkHomeworkFurther improve the writing according to the assessment form. Make your final copy as neat as possible.高中英语写作讲评Lets divide it into parts:Part.1Part.2Part.3The computer remember

10、 the characters.The government help students learn Chinese well.Its high time that we by improving our mother tongue first.高中英语写作讲评Part 2:To deal with the situation, the government carry out a new policy.Part 3: As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action.Part 1: It is common that th

11、ere are many wrongly-written characters in a students composition.Come up with the topic sentences:A topic sentence tells the reader what a certain part is about.高中英语写作讲评Topic sentence for Part 2Topic sentence for Part 3Topic sentence for Part 1computerhomeworkraise the awareness ofhave a positive e

12、ffect on高中英语写作讲评Which ending do you like best? Why? In my opinion, the policy is beneficial to us. It makes sense in protecting our culture. b) As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. Only by hard working can we achieve

13、our goal.高中英语写作讲评 they dont care about their writing . There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. writingaremuch高中英语写作讲评_. _, when young people chat online, they attach little importance to their writing. _, with so much homework to do, they have

14、 trouble memorizing the characters. The new policy is intended to deal with the situation. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. _, its high time that we took action. _, we should refer to a dictionary for unknown characters. Second, c

15、ollect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal. There are several reasons behind. B. As far as I am concerned C. For example D. Moreover. E. First of allACDBE高中英语写作讲评 When they are chatting, they dont care their writing. Every day, they have m

16、uch homework. They are too busy to remember the characters. It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well.Can you improve them?高中英语写作讲评When they are chatting, they dont care their writing.When chatting, they dont care their writing.(Ellipsis 省略句省略句)

17、高中英语写作讲评Every day, they have much homework. They cant remember the characters.They have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters.(sothat; fail to do)withWith so much homework to do, they have trouble in remembering the characters.高中英语写作讲评It will make people pay attention to o

18、ur mother tongue. raise the awareness ofIt will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. 高中英语写作讲评It will help students learn Chinese well. have a positive effect onIt will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.高中英语写作讲评It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will have a po

19、sitive effect on students Chinese learning._the awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning.(non-verbal非谓语）非谓语）(not onlybut also)It will not only raise the awareness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.Raising高中英语写作讲评 It is common that the