2017年1月份上海市英语高考概括写作作文题目及范文(供

1、百度文库-让每个人平等地提升自我12017 年 1 月上海市高考英语写作题假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑期将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外 交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：1.你对此事的明确的态度；2.你的理由。考生原作 1Im glad to hear that you have access to participati ng in an overseas com muni cati on activity inBri

2、ta in which will last two mon ths. I suggest that you should choose work ing as a volun teer thirty hoursevery mon th for the local com munity agi ng, hospital to gain a cha nce to stay in it for free. My reas onsare as follows.Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduc

3、e your costs. Con trary tothe accommodati on arran ged by the host, you can save a lot of mon ey. Un doubtedly, the cost musthave been high if you choose it. Staying in the aging hospital, the contrast couldnbe greater. On the one hand, only by work ing as a volun teer can you gain a free stay. It s

4、ounds great!Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our spare time, we will alsospend time helping others in that our society teaches us to be a warm-heated pers on. Your arrival willalso reduce the burde ns there. As an old say ing goes,We can gain boththings

5、 at the same time. ” So why not choose it?I hope that you will take my advise. Best wishes that you will have a good time there. It is a golde ncha nce that you will gain in summer vocatio n. In short, enjoy yourself.考生原作 2It is said that you will go abroad to En gla nd for a two-m on th overseas co

6、m mun icati on activity inthis summer vocation. I hear that you are hesitating whether to spend higher price choosing arrangeddormitory or to spend 30 hours every month serving the old to get a free living.In my opinion, I think you should choose the first one. If you choose the second option, you w

7、ill usetoo much time to do service in stead of study ing the local culture. Although com muni cati on with the oldcan get a lot of lively experie nce and avoid many mistakes in life, your most important responsibility is tolearn how overseas students study and what they will learn. Arran ged room ca

8、n save you time and havemore cha nces to live with peers who may have the same interest with you. By this, you can make a lot ofyoung friends and if you are in trouble in future, they may give you some suggesti ons and a help ing hand.I wish that you would take my advice and I m waiting to hear from

9、 you.6 月份高考英语写作题假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校学生会将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：百度文库-让每个人平等地提升自我21.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议；2.你的理由。徒步活动方案主题：发现上海时间：5 月 1 日(星期日)下午 3:00路线：从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，抵达外滩( the Bund)后原路返回考生原作 1Im a student named Lei Wang of our school. Hearing the news that our Students Union will organ

10、izea walking program and has put the drafted plan on the Internet, I ll venture to air my thoughts about it asfollows.To begin with, from my point of view, the time planned is not appropriate. As is known to all, the firstday of May is the first day of holiday in China so that the center city of Sha

11、nghai is sure to be crowded onthat day. To en sure that we stude nts have a good taste of beauty of Shan ghai, the date had better be putoff till the end of the holiday. Besides, I hold the idea that the route should be revised. Person ally, afterapproachi ng at_the Bun d, it snot a good cha nee to

12、go back accord ing to the origi nal route. In stead, westude nts can go to other places of in terest to go back to school, which guara ntees a golde n opport unityof wit ness ing the beauty of Shan ghai.In a nu tshell, all the thoughts above are based on my pers onal suggesti on s. I would be muchob

13、liged if my suggesti ons are fully con sidered.考生原作 2Words come that a walking activity will be held in our school. About this activity, I have some ideas.I think we can make the subject finding Shanghai. I have seen the subject on our school Intern et.I thi nk it is greatful and in terest ing. But

14、in my opinion, we should go to more local and historic place inShanghai, such as Yu Garden. Because this local place is rich of many historical culture and meanin gful.So my plan is that we can go to Yu Garden first and then we can accept the plan on schoolInternet-start in People Square, Nanjing Ro

15、ad, end in the Bund. The another advice is thatIthink the time is not fit. Because on Sun day these popular place will attract many trouists, it is verydangerous. So I suggest that we should hold these activity on work day.That all, I hope you can accept my advice. Than ks!考生 2 （修改版）To whom it may c

16、oncern.Word has come that a hiking event will be held in our school. And you are seeking for opinions fromteachers and stude nts. I have some pers onal opinions about this eve nt.In the first place, I think we should stick closely to the subject Finding Shanghai, which meansletting hikers get to kno

17、w more about Shanghai. We should go past some unique places which representthe city characteristics, such as Yu Garden, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower and etc. These places are fullof factors of Shanghais historical culture and classic architecture. In the sec ond place, I feel that the time百度文库-让每个人平等

18、地提升自我3is not appropriate, for on Sun day there popular places will be crowded with tourists and pedestria ns,which is un favorable to the eve nt. In this case, I propose that we should hold this hik ing event on aworkday to avoid unn ecessary con gesti on.That sail I want to put forward to you, and

19、I hope that you can adopt my suggestio n.Yours sin cerely,Wang Lei1 月份高考英语概括写作题ShynessIf you suffer from shyn ess, you are not alone, for shyn ess is a uni versal phe nomenon. It is notsurprising that social scientists are learning more about its causes.The first environmental cause of shyness many

20、be a child home and family life. Today s children aregrowing up in smaller and smaller families, with fewer and fewer relatives living nearby. Growing up inhomes in which both parents work full time, children may not have the socializ ing experie nee of freque ntvisits by n eighbours and frien ds. B

21、ecause of their lack of social skills, they may beg in to feel socially inhibited, or shy, whe n they start school.A sec ond environmen tal cause of shyn ess in an in dividual may be one culture. In a large study conducted in Japa n, 57 perce nt of participa nts rated themselves as shy. Researchers

22、Hen ders on andZimbardo say, expOctet ion is that in Japa n an in dividual performa nee success is credited externally toparents, teachers, and others, while failure is entirely blamed on the pers on.” Therefore Japa nese learn not take risks in public and rely in stead on group-shared decisi ons.Te

23、ch no logy may also play a role. In the Un ited States, the nu mber of young people who reportbeing shy has rise n from 40 perce nt to 50 perce nt in recent years .Due to our huge adva nces in tech nology, watch ing televisi on, playi ng video games, and surfi ng the Web have replaced recreationalac

24、tivities that involve social interaction for many young people. Adults, too, are beco ming more isolatedas a result of tech no logy. Face-to-face in teract ions with bank clerks, gas stati on atte ndan ts, and shopassista nts are no Ion ger n ecessary because people can use mach ines to do their ban

25、king, fill their gastan ks, and order goods. In short, they become shy.It appears that most people have experie need shyn ess at some time in their lives. Therefore, if youare shy, you have lots of compa ny.参考答案：Shyn ess is com mon and it has environmen tal causes, in clud ing home and family life,

26、culture andtech no logy. Firstly, with smaller families and worki ng pare nts, childre n lack social interactions.Secondly, blaming failure on individuals causes people in some culture to be shy in public. Fin ally, withthe developme nt of tech no logy, people have fewer opport un ities to socialize

27、in pers on.6 月份高考英语概括写作题Lear ning by Rote in the Digital AgeRote learning has become seen as an outdated method of teaching. The dictionary defines learningby roteas from memory without thought of the meaning; in a mechanical way.百度文库-让每个人平等地提升自我4The decli ne of rote lear ning has bee n quicke ned b

28、y tech no logy. No one n eeds to memorizefriends phone numbers or email addresses because such data is conveniently stored and accessibleelectr on ically. And why remember whe n and where World War II broke out whe n you can find the answer on the internet in about six sec on ds? But now there are v

29、oices for a n eed to return to rote learning.In fact, memoriz ing key data is esse ntial to lear ning any skill. Doctori ng requires kno wledge ofmedici ne and lawyeri ng requires kno wledge of cases and laws. Of course, being able to recall things willnot further your understanding of those things,

30、 but without memorizing these foun dati on eleme nts, youcannot progress to a deeper un dersta nding of a subject.While the internet and computers have weake ned the n eed for us to remember thin gs, it may wellbe that mobile learning can help bring this style of learning back to life by making it m

31、ore convenient andmore fun.Drilling yourself-with flashcards or by repetition-is usually hard and boring work, which is whymost people need their multiplication tables to be drilled into them by teachers or parents. Rote learningwithout a willing third party can be battle of discipline and motivation. But mobile learning can make thoseflashcards and drills more appropriate to in dividual study; our digital devices can challenge and inform usat the same time and also keep us moti