高考英语作文专题辅导课件

1、2017全国卷书面表达1假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习）内容：学习唐诗唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史了解唐朝的历史。写信告知课程安排。2假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起一起参观中国剪纸（参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；展览时间、地点；2.

2、展览内容。展览内容。写信邀请外教参观剪纸艺术展。3 假定你是李华。你所在的校假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他写封邮件邀请他加入加入，内容包括：，内容包括：球队活动；球队活动；报名方式及截止日期。报名方式及截止日期。写信邀请加入学校乒乓球队。2017全国卷书面表达特点：体现“一点四面”，传播文化，1-唐诗，唐朝历史；2-剪纸艺术展；题目简洁明了，任务清晰，内容开放；交际性强，给外国朋友/外教写信，邀请/告知对方。2016全国卷书面表达：写信写信1卷请外教修改自己的求职申请和简历。请外教修改自己的求职

3、申请和简历。有创意，如何请求帮助；引导考生思考如何度过暑假，可以兼职等；2卷给摄影俱乐部约英国朋友环境保护给摄影俱乐部约英国朋友环境保护照片。照片。题目熟悉，与2015年卷1约稿类似；引导关注社会问题，提高环保意识；3卷抱歉爽约。抱歉爽约。与2015年北京高考第一节类似；日常生活话题，如果爽约如何道歉，说明原因，合情合理，再约时间。 作文是英语高考的重头戏，每年作文的类型和主题也不尽相同，作文分数的高低也直接影响着英语成绩的高低，因此英文作文的备考也就成了每年英语备考的重点之一。下面我就不同的文体来讲解一下如何打造高分英语作文：二、四步打造高分英语作文二、四步打造高分英语作文Step1：确定文

4、体：确定文体常用文体有记叙文、说明文，还有应用文如书信等。近几年的高考书面表达多以应用文为主，提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现，书写的格式大都是书信、通知。所以，考生还应该掌握信的称呼、开头、正文、结尾、签名等方面，另外，口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之，考生应根据写作提示分析材料，确定文体，闯过第一关。Step2：确定时态和人称确定时态和人称考生要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态。一般来说，记人叙事多用一般过去时；发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式；发表议论大多用带有情态动词的一般现在时；人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点，但要

5、记住，写作时时态并不惟一，要依据表达内容而选定。Step3：确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构在以上“两确定”的基础上，应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个地确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出。理清要点，然后选词造句，对列出的要点逐一翻译。这时要注意力求语言准确得当。平时写作要多进行发散思维，如是用very sorry还是terribly sorry；是surprised还是astonished。同时考生应学会尽可能使用较高级的语法结构和词汇，如非谓语动词、复合句等。最大限度地完美文章。Step4：整理成篇行文连贯：整理成篇行文连贯 接下来要根据内容分清文章的层

6、次，确定详略，将写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，根据内容编排，该分段时要分段，使表达清楚，一目了然。行云流水，整齐划一，闯过写作第四关。三段式作文法三段式作文法重点诠释重点诠释： 所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言，如何把握较大的写作空间，三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为： 1第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间，地点，人物和主要事件及时点出。 2第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。 3最后一段，得出结论或理由。 注意：要

7、学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如注意：要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁桥梁”和和“粘合剂粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。贯流畅。 常用的过渡词有：常用的过渡词有： 递进型： also, (and)besides, whats more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, whats worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, no

8、t onlybut also等； 解释型：that is (to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等； 转折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等； 列举型列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 举例型举例型：for

9、example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take for example等； 因果型因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so that, so that等；让步型让步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等； 顺序型顺序型：firstnextand thenfinally, firstthenafter thatfinally 等； 并列型并

10、列型：and, bothand, or, eitheror, as well as, 等 时间型时间型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardlywhen, no soonerthan 等 总结型总结型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等 见解型见解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,Im sure 等 条件型条件型：if, as

11、 long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等英语作文高分技巧英语作文高分技巧 在历年的高考评卷过程中，阅卷老师是如何评判一份卷子的，阅卷人最注重的是什么，是每个高考考生迫切想知道的，笔者将结合多年的高考阅卷经验，告诉大家如何在高考中胜人一筹，在书面表达上拿到高档次的分数。 书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位（语言语言第一位（语言高级），内容第二位（要点齐全），结构第三位（文高级），内容第二位（要点齐全），结构第三位（文章分段）的原则章分段）的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生

12、在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。亮点一共有四种：一、高级词汇和语法；一、高级词汇和语法；二、修辞手法；三、有效的连词；四、名人名言或谚二、修辞手法；三、有效的连词；四、名人名言或谚语。语。首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。 肯定不如双否好修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman

13、 never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。“几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为考生加分。陈述不如倒装妙 在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶

14、段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。 1.否定词开头：否定词开头：如果写出的句子中有否定词，例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词，如not， seldom， hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。 2.地点状语开头地点状语开头：在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子，一个建筑位于什么位置，或什么地方有什么东西，都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中，“图书馆位于学校的中央”，Our library is in t

15、he center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头：In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子，想表达“河岸上有很多花”：On the bank stand some flowers. “天空中繁星点点”：In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies

16、 our library，which is between the garden and the teaching building. 3.Only+介词短语：介词短语：例如在2007年全国卷中，让外教帮你找个笔友，有一句可以表达成“只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语”，这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy. 4. 形容词形容词+as+主语主语+系动词系动词：例如Young as I am， I can manage it； Rich

17、as our country is， we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中：Badly injured as he was， he managed to take down the cars number. 还有其他的倒装结构，“很高兴收到的你的来信”：So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。 主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧在近些年的阅卷中，发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态，也许是受中文思维的影响，几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中，被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言

18、，具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整个文章句型丰富。例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达“我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时”，都是用：We can borrow five books at most， and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time a

19、nd they can be kept for ten days，分数会更高。分词结构不能少分词结构不能少 在前文提到，在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case， you should apologize to her.

20、 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。 口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。二看：看主语；三改：改分词。 If such is the case， you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if；第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成Such being the case， you should apologize to

21、 her.就变成了独立主格。如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student， Id like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student， Id like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于，因为，如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。总之，高考的书面表达重在设计，如何设计出让阅卷老师看了眼前一亮的句子，写出有分词，倒装，强调，修辞的句子，使整篇文章句型丰富，不单一，有效的使

22、用连接成分使文章连贯，方能在高考中拿到高分。请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。“Good health is the foundation of a fulfilling life.” said Chairman Mao. “Health is wealth” goes an old saying. And it is often heard that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.”注意：（1）无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。 （2）内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。

23、（3）文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。 （4）词数为120左右。Lookthroughthefollowingcompositionswrittenbysomestudentsandjudgewhichoneisthebestthatmeetstherequirementsofthecompositionandtellthereasons.Passage1 During the life, we can do many things , but some people cant even if they have much money. However, money can buy somet

24、hing not everything. When I was 10, I was shopping with my mother. We went through the street, then I found an old woman begged for money and she wore dirty and bad clothes. I gave her five Yuan, but at that time I found she was blind, I told my mother she was an unlucky woman. Mother told me: “Yes,

25、 even she has money but she doesnt know how to buy ad where to buy.”So I know money cant buy everything, cant buy the health. When we are healthy and could to things by ourselves, we should save the time and save the healthy body, because health is the most important wealth.Passage 2 My mom often sa

26、ys to me,” Health is the most important.” And I believe that good health is the foundation of a fulfilling life. I remember last term before the final exam, I was caught in a rain on the way home and had a fever. And my mother sent me to the hospital. As a result, I failed in the exam. I was very re

27、gretful about not having taken good care of myself. From then on I realized the importance of health. In our life, I think the most important thing is our health. Only when we take care of myself can we get success.Passage3 Wealth is very important in our life. Without it ,nothing can be done. Let m

28、e take the example of one of my friend . He used to be very poor so that everybody around him looked down on him. He made a promise that he would be wealthy one day. So he went to a coastal city to find chances to make money. Through his hard work, he succeeded one day. Now, everybody sings highly o

29、f him and he succeeded now. From the life of my friend, we can draw a conclusion that only by working hard can you succeed.Passage4 Wealth and health are both important in our life, but I think health is more important than wealth. Some people in the society worked day and night to earn money, howev

30、er, his body broke down. Some people dont have a good life habit, they smoke, they often eat fast food , and stay up to play cards or computers. Some people dont take any exercise at all. All these people dont attach important to their health. Although they are rich, they cant lead a good life witho

31、ut health.Passage5 Which is more important, health or wealth? Not until I witnessed my uncles real life did I realized that health is of more importance. Devoted to his business, my uncle, a successful businessman, worked from morning till night every day, with no spare time to relax himself. He oft

32、en said:” I must earn much money so that I can get whatever I want.” As a consequence, he was seriously ill. Rich as he was, he could to nothing but lie in the hospital bed. So I think health is more important than wealth. People can do nothing if they are always in poor health, let alone live happi

33、ly. Whether we are rich or not, we can not ignore the importance of health.II、Paraphrase or translate the following sentences by using different phrases or structures.一、句子开头的变化1.使用非人物主语开头eg: She began to cry. (Tears) Tears came to her eyes.eg: I like listening to music. (appeal)Music appeals to me.

34、2.使用非主语成份开头eg: The boy was kind and honest, and he was elected monitor. （形容词作状语）Kind and honest, the boy was elected monitor.eg: Many experts who come from all over the world are present at the meeting. (形容词置于句首倒装)Present at the meeting were many experts who come from all over the world.二、词语表达方式的变化n

35、1. Ill thank you if you thing about my application. (appreciate)I will appreciate it that if you take my application into consideration.n2. Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us. (spare)Well spare no effort to promote the traditional friendship between us.三、语法结构的变化n1. We

36、 should make efforts to reduce air pollution. （被动语态）Efforts should be made to reduce air pollution.n2. He walked out of the lab and many students followed him. (过去分词/现在分词形式作状语)He walked out of the lab , followed by many students.He walked out of the lab, with many students following him.n3. We all k

37、now that parks are public places. （名词性从句； 定语从句）As we all know, the parks are public places.As is known to all, the parks are public places.What is known to us is that the parks are public places. It is known to all that the parks are public places.4.Withtheteachershelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglis

38、h.(强调句型；虚拟语气)。Without/butfortheteachershelp,IwouldnthavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.ItiswiththeteachershelpthatIhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.5.这个地方值得参观。（一句多译）Theplaceisworthvisiting.Theplaceisworthyofbeingvisited.Theplaceisworthyofavisit.Theplaceisworthytobevisited.6. 我刚走进房间电话铃就响了。（一句多译）As soon as I entered the room, my telephone rang.No sooner had I entered the room than my telephone ranHardly/Scarcely had I entered the room when my telephone rang.The moment/minute/instant I entered the room, my telephone rang.Immedi