初中英语中考作文指导

1、写作指导写作指导 Lets go for it! There are some problems in our studies and daily life, we have many lessons and have lots of homework to do every day. So we have little time to do sports, As a result , quite a few of us are in poor health. Whats more, more and more students are interested in playing comput

2、er games . They spend too much time on it. And some students like eating junk food. In my opinion, students need to keep fit and study well. First , we should spend less time playing computer games and have more sleep. Second , we should eat healthily and do more sports.英语作文英语作文8个话题个话题 一、一、介绍人介绍人 （自

3、己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）感受等） 二、介绍地点（旅游等）二、介绍地点（旅游等） 三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活四、课外生活 （家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）等） 五、假期安排五、假期安排 （计划、过去经历等）（计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动六、节假日活动 （志愿者活动、过去经历）（志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康七、环境、健康 （环保、疾病、食品健康等）（环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议八、个人观点建

4、议 （提建议、劝告等）（提建议、劝告等）写话常见体裁写话常见体裁初中阶段的写作体裁主要包初中阶段的写作体裁主要包括括记叙文、议论文和应用记叙文、议论文和应用文文。记叙文记叙文的训练包括的训练包括记人、叙记人、叙事、写景状物事、写景状物。教师要帮。教师要帮助学生分析不同类型文章助学生分析不同类型文章的写作规律。的写作规律。记人记人 ( My best friend) 文章可通过介绍人物文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外貌、职业、爱的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好、好、 学习工作等方面来展学习工作等方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。现人物鲜明的个性。(叙述的原则是叙述的原则是从外到内从外到内） 叙事：叙事： ( An

5、interesting lesson) 文章需要交代以下五个文章需要交代以下五个要素，要素，Who、When、Where、What、How 学生作文常见语法错误学生作文常见语法错误 1）名词的单复数前后不统一）名词的单复数前后不统一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）时态、语态、主谓不一致）时态、语态、主谓不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副词位置或选用不当）副词位置或选用不当 We also can

6、 do something for our parents to show our thanks . 4)表达随意表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是中国式英语比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year.5）语言表达繁琐或生硬）语言表达繁琐或生硬 Ill try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建议用建议用in order to 连接连接) To buy things on line makes our life more convenient

7、.(用用Shopping on line) Dear Mr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing. And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the t

8、exts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in th

9、e passage. I dont know what to do.meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let aloneSometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone( (更不更不用说用说) )answer the questions about them. But the most answer the questions about them. But the most dif

10、ficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Pleasegive us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write

11、 to give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. me soon. Lets go for it! Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文）（正文）健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。

12、根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。 A lot of people travel. Some peo

13、ple stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列(list) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other

14、people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加加(add) 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. An

15、d some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连(connect)方法一方法一: :善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇Which is better?A They listened to the music on the

16、beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better? 我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better? 他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better? 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was save

17、d at last. He was very surprised.B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English . 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法二方法二: :活用多种句型活用多种句型方法三方法三: :妙用关联词妙用关联词1.

18、表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror3.表示转折表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the o

19、ne handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10

20、.表示结论表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or p

21、arents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连(connect) _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out.

22、 _, he went back. _, he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt last We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,

23、 watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美(beautify) According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy wo

24、rld during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify) And

25、to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（谚语）（谚语）/saying锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As

26、 the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good w

27、ay to learn English.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over

28、spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn. 方法四方法四: :妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyc

29、lable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again!As st

30、udents, we should start from ourselves. Dont wait. Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today!How amazing! I cant wait!Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!Dont hesitate(犹豫犹豫). It will be great fun! First，some of us arent interested in English. We think study

31、ing English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more Wha

32、ts more, there are so many new words we , there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. what to do. SometimesSometimes we cant understand the we cant understand the main idea,main idea, let alonelet alone( (更不用说

33、更不用说) )answer the questionsanswer the questions about them. about them. ButBut the most difficult thing is to the most difficult thing is to write. write. We often use wrong words and sentences. We often use wrong words and sentences. Lets go for it!1 12 23 34 46 65 5 Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the Englis