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1、怎样展开中间段落刘魁老师INDEPENDENT WRITING vIntrovBodyvConclusion INDEPENDENT WRITING vBody的立场结构：的立场结构：v完全型一边倒完全型一边倒 我好我好我好我好我好我好 我好我好你不好我好我好你不好 INDEPENDENT WRITING v修正型一边倒修正型一边倒 我好我好你也好我好我好你也好 你也好你不好我好你也好你不好我好INDEPENDENT WRITING 如何展开中间段落如何展开中间段落 INDEPENDENT WRITING Signal words+sub-pointSupporting sentenceExa

2、mples Flow-backINDEPENDENT WRITING v如何写如何写supporting sentencev原因原因: becausev结果结果/影响：影响：thereforev改写：改写：that is to sayv反面论证：反面论证：On the contraryINDEPENDENT WRITING vFirst and foremost, technology is essential in our daily life.vBecause it can be found in every corner of the world.vFor example,.vConse

3、quently,.INDEPENDENT WRITING vFirst and foremost, technology is essential in our daily life.vTherefore, it brings massive amount of convenience.vFor example,.vConsequently,. INDEPENDENT WRITING vFirst and foremost, technology is essential in our daily life.vThat is to say, we cannot live without tec

4、hnology.vFor example,vConsequently,. INDEPENDENT WRITING v First and foremost, technology is essential in our daily life.vOn the contrary, without technology our life would be in chaos.vFor example,vConsequently,.INDEPENDENT WRITING vTo begin with, the education in urban areas outperforms that in ru

5、ral areas,v because there are more abundant educational resources in citiesvFor example,vTherefore,. INDEPENDENT WRITING vTo begin with, the education in urban areas outperforms that in rural areas,v because there are more abundant educational resources in citiesvFor example,vOn the contrary, INDEPE

6、NDENT WRITING vSignal words:vBody1：诚然：诚然但是但是vBody2: 首先首先vBody3：其次：其次 INDEPENDENT WRITING v诚然：诚然：vIt is admitted/granted/sure thatvUndoubtedly, we have to admit thatvAdmittedly, there is no denying that INDEPENDENT WRITING v Signal words+sub-pointSupporting sentenceExamples(两个例子；事实+评论）Flow-backvIt is

7、 easier to maintain a good health in the present than in the past, A/D?vA:v1. medical sciencev2. the awareness of healthvD:v1. worsening environmentv2. the intense competition vThe awareness of healthv First and foremost, modern people tend to keep an eye on good health. That is to say, they are mor

8、e devoting to their physical quality. For one thing, doing sports like jogging or swimming is necessary and kept in a daily routine, which is beneficial to increase their blood circulation and enhance heart functions; for another, keeping a healthy diet is an appropriate alternative to gain nutritio

9、n such as protein, vitamin and carbohydrate through eating grains, vegetable or fruit. Research says that if a person has 10% of fruit and vegetable every day in their meals, their life span can be extended by 5%. On the contrary, people in the past were unaware and not paying attention to their hea

10、lth like modern people do.v On top of that, modern people tend to focus on /keeping an eye on good health because of the large-scaled promotion by the government. A good case in point is that many advertisements on TV or newspaper can be seen to call on people to pay more attention to health such as

11、 “smoking is harmful to our health” while educational videos can be watched on Internet to educate people how to keep a longer life span. Accordingly, modern people are more aware to focus on health especially their physical health. Doing sports can be a daily routine to improve their fitness and meanwhile ke